如何算是一篇好文章？ 覆盖了所有的要点 应用了较多的语法结构 和词汇有效地使用了语句间的 连接成分，使全文结构紧 凑要 点 全 词汇,句型 （高级）和 语法多样化（较复杂）连 接 词巧用逗号，提升作文品质On writing-词汇选择与衔接词运用Be thoughtful Being thoughtful(体谅人 ）simply means thinking of others before yourself. What you say or do will have an effect on others. Therefore, it is important that you think before you say or do anything. In this way, you can avoid hurting others feelings. Moreover, a thoughtless act or remark can spoil (损害)a perfect relationship.Remember these rules. If you dont have anything nice to say, dont say anything. Likewise, if you think what you do will hurt others, dont do it. After all, what goes around comes around.(种什么因，得什么果）Section 1:上下文的连贯性一篇好的书面表达，应该行文连贯流畅，具有“逻辑美 ”。使用恰当连接词，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑， 使文章更为地道，更具“英语味”。记得使用恰当的连 接词,如以下的几类。1。 表增加的过渡词： and then, in addition, furthermore, moreover, again, another, first, second2. 表时间顺序的过渡词： afterwards, earlier, later, immediately, soon, next, suddenly, finally3. 表空间顺序的过渡词： near (to), far (from), in front of, behind, beside, beyond4. 表比较的过渡词： in the same way, just like, just as5. 表对照的过渡词： but, still, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, in spite of, even though6. 表结果和原因： because, since, as a result, therefore, thus, hopefully, otherwise7. 表目的的过渡词：for this reason, for this purpose, so that8。 表强调的过渡词： in fact, in deed, surely, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, above all, the most important of all,9. 表解释说明的过渡词： for example, in this case, for instance10. 表总结的过渡词： finally, at last, in conclusion, as I have shown, in other words, in brief, as has been stated above,1.We have been preparing for the past few years. We believe the 29th Olympics will be a great success. We have been preparing for the past few years. Hopefully, the 29th Olympics will be a great success.2. He is running his own research company and he has served as a volunteer. He is running his own research company. In addition, he has served as a volunteer.3. The boy comes from a poor family. The boy does very well in his studies. The boy plans to work his way through college.Even though he comes from a poor family, the boy does very well in his studies; furthermore, he plans to work his way through college.4. Yao Ming is a successful basketball player and he is a commercial star.Yao Ming is a successful basketball player in addition to/apart from being a commercial star.5. You will succeed in your training. You work hard and never give up.So long as you work hard, you will succeed in your training.6. Last night I had a dream. I was running on the track, competing with Liu Xiang. Last night I had a dream that/where I was running on the track, competing with Liu Xiang. 7. When he returned to the mountain, he found the gold. He became a rich man.When he returned to the mountain, he found the gold. As a result, he became a rich man.8. A person without friends might be lonely and selfish. One who has a large number of friends must be warm-hearted and friendly.A person without friends might be lonely and selfish. On the contrary, one who has a large number of friends must be warmhearted and friendly.你能用我们刚才学的连接词让下面的文章更 精彩吗？(task for section1)Passage oneLife is filled with challenges. We are faced with a challenge. We usually have two choices. We can try to solve it. We can decide it isnt worth the trouble and leave it behind.Section2:词汇的应用1.恰当使用高级词汇1)Neil can be expected to come to China around August 6th for the opening ceremony of the 29th Olympic Games. Neil will be available to come to China around August 6th for the opening ceremony of the 29th Olympic Games. 2) The situation is really difficult to understand.The situation is really confusing.3) Birds Nest lies in the Beijing Olympic Park.Birds Nest is located in the Beijing Olympic Park.4) I am sure to find ways to solve the problem.I am sure to find the solutions to the problem.5) We all have the same chance.We all possess the same opportunity.6) There are more opponents(对手）than ever before. There exist more opponents(对手）than ever before.7. One day I visited the Internet and I opened OICQ. (explored )visited8. Tears sometimes fall down my face. 9. I must grasp the time which belongs to me. (cheeks)( treasure)10. I dont think your plan will be useful. ( work)facegraspbe useful11.He sent his son to school on foot every morning.12.My bicycle lost air yesterday on my way home.(He walked his son to school every morning.)(I got a flat tire yesterday on my way home.)sent13.I didnt hear your name.14.I thanked him and stopped the phone.(I didnt quite catch your name.)(I thanked him and hung up the phone.)2. 适当利用短语取代单词1） We all think Chen Zhonghe is a great coach.We all _ Chen Zhonghe.2) The result of the Olympics will be good.The Olympics will _ to be a successful one.3)I am going to Beijing to attend the opening ceremony. I am going to Beijing _ attending the ope