高考复习专题讲座 写作2005.4.20How to get high marks in writing in limited time ?背一些动宾词组和常用句型背一些精美原 文或是写作范文。文章宜短小精悍，语言 地道。坚持每日大声朗读和背诵。头脑中 储存了十几篇或几十篇文章，写作时就不 会因头脑空空而发愁了，背诵不仅能提高 考生的写作能力，也能帮助考生形成语感 。对单项填空和完型填空都有很大的带动 作用。所以在最后的一个月里切不可不读 不背，只做题。扫除阅读障碍是关键教师的建议英语作文高分奥秘获取高分的作文主要在于： 一、紧扣主题突出重点 二、表达正确文字流畅 三、。结构规范时态无误 四、单词、标点无误 书面表达题旨在测试考生的英语表达能力，看其 是否能够运用学过的英语知识和掌握的技能进行 思想交流。从历年高考试卷来看，书面表达是指 导性写作，即按照题目所给的目的、时间、对象 、地点、内容、长度等条件去完成写作。它不同 于命题作文，可以随意发挥；也不是简单的句子 翻译。必须做到行文切题，紧扣中心思想，不漏 要点，并且意思连贯，文理通顺，语言准确、得 当。 应试技巧点拨1.首先要认真审题。读懂题目所给信息，初步确 定要点内容，并可用序号标出以免遗忘。2.列题纲使用要点条理化，序化，统筹安排布局 。 3.勿要直译，需意译。尤其对看图情景作文要构建 完整故事结构，不可逐句罗列了事。 4.要刻意把好语言关。要用自己最熟悉的句型结构 和词语，力求文理通顺，语言准确。没有把握的 词句不要写，确有把握的的可以锦上添花。5.遇到一时想不起的词语，需变通。可以用同义近 义词代替，也可以用否定词加反义词来表达，亦可 变换句式。不可钻牛角尖，更不能生造词语，汉化 表达。6.注意文章的长度。看具体内容而定，如果内容多 应多用复杂句式，如果内容不多，为了达到词的限 数应多用简单句式，并适当增补合理内容。7.注意保持卷面整洁，书写工整清楚，书写的好坏会直 接影响阅卷老师的情绪。8.最后应注意复查全文。看内容要点有无遗漏，标 点、格式、大小写是否规范，是否有语病等。假设你是李华，在一所中学读 书。最近收到美国朋友Smith先生的 来信.他三 年前参观过你校,听说现 在变化很大，希望了解有关情况。 参照下图，给他写封回信，介绍你 校的变化。注意 ：1，回信须包括图画的主要 内容，可适当增减细节，使内容连 贯。 2，词数100左右。书书 面面 表表 达达三年前三年前现在现在原操场新操场旧教学楼旧教学楼图书馆新教学楼Dear Mr Smith Im very happy to hear from your letter ，Lets tell you the new school.Our school happened great change.An new labrary build in the three years ago.A new classroom building was built at other side of road. Our new playgroud out the school.At last we planted many trees. That all, thank you.8高考书面表达评分原则第二挡（较差）（6-10分） 未恰当完成试题规定的任务* 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容* 语法结构单调，词汇项目有限* 有语法或词汇错误，影响了对内容的理解* 较少使用语句间的连接词，内容缺少连贯性，8 三年前三年前现在现在原操场新操场旧教学楼旧教学楼图书馆新教学楼1 . Whats the form of your writing?1 . Whats the form of your writing?自己的地址日期对方的地址称呼正文签名称呼正文签名三年前三年前现在现在原操场新操场旧教学楼旧教学楼图书馆新教学楼3, What are the major contents?3, What are the major contents?2. Whats the main tense ?2. Whats the main tense ?此封信所涉及到的 一般过去时 一般现在时 现在完成时 被动语态 主要时态：主要内容新旧操场的位置 新教学楼的位置 新图书馆的位置 树三年前三年前现在现在原操场新操场旧教学楼旧教学楼图书馆新教学楼4 . Whatre the phrases On the other side,where the playground used to be, stands another new building-our library. The playground is now in front of the school .We have also planted a lot of trees in and round the school. I hope that you will be able to return and see the changes for yourself someday.Best wishes, 高考书面表达评分原则第五挡（好）（21-25 分） 完全完成了试题规定的任务* 覆盖所有主要内容* 语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求* 语法或词汇应用基本准确，有些许错误但主 要是尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致，* 应用简单的语句间的连接词， 使全文紧凑，22Dear SmithLi HuaYours22I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school. Youre right. Quite a few changes have taken place here . On one side of the road is a new teaching building; On the other side,where the playground used to be, stands another new building-our library. The playground is now in front of the school .We have also planted a lot of trees in and round the school. I hope that you will be able to return and see the changes for yourself someday.Best wishes, 精精确确词词的的使使用用范范例例1. He will be arriving soon . 1. He will be arriving soon . He will be arriving He will be arriving prettypretty soon . soon .2. They poured the waste water into the 2. They poured the waste water into the river .river . They poured the waste water They poured the waste water directlydirectly into the river . into the river .3. He got angry .3. He got angry . He got He got a little bita little bit angry . angry .4. I dont understand . 4. I dont understand . I dont I dont quitequite understand . understand .高高级级词词的的使使用用范范例例1. If you have any problems , 1. If you have any problems , you can you can shout outshout out . . If you have any problems , If you have any problems , just yelljust yell . . 2. They planted trees 2. They planted trees around the schoolaround the school . . They planted trees They planted trees throughout the throughout the campuscampus . . 3. The police 3. The police treatedtreated the whites the whites better better thanthan the blacks. the blacks. The police The police favoredfavored the white the white overover the the black.black. 4. “What are they doing ?” he 4. “What are they doing ?” he thoughtthought . . “What are they doing ?” he “What are they doing ?” he figured figured . .Dear SmithLi HuaYours24I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school. Youre right. Remarkable changes have taken place since you last visited. On one side of the road is a new classroom building; On the other side ,where the track used to be, stands another new building-our library. The playground is located right in front of the school . In addition , we have planted a lot of trees in and round the school. I hope that you will be able to return and see the changes for yourself someday.Best wishes, 24高考书面表达评分原则第五挡（很好）（21-25 分） 完全完成了试题规定的任务* 覆盖所有主要内容* 应用了较多语法结构和词汇* 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误。但为尽量使用较复杂结构或高级词汇所致；具有较强的语言应用能力 * 有