高考英语基础写作Nov. 2006基础写作常见问题1、句子结构的错误 The heavy rain was not come for giving relief from drought（钰霞） people noticed that they cut plenty of trees for money is wrong and known the importance of trees.(梦辉） They were ever to cut down larges number of trees, which they felt regretted now, and determined to plant more trees, green the mountain, stop from the people let it happen again （詹子婉） People there decided to plant trees and make a forest, beautified the smooth hills, preventing the same kind disaster happening again. (钥）2、实义词的形式变化（时态、语态、非谓语） Recently western area was raining heavily after the long dry weather （蔡茵） Recently it has a heavy rain in the west(梦辉）3、意义表达错误People didnt realize that the heavy rain give relief from drought rather than floods. 4、不合英语习惯 They were hard to stop the flood.There has a heavy rain.5、题意理解错误。用条文式(1.2.3.) 1. There is but one China and Taiwan is a part of China. 2. Taiwan, the biggest island, with a population of 22,000,000, lies to the southeast of Fujian Province. 3. It is a very beautiful island. 4. Riyuetan Pool and Mount Ali are very famous places of interest. 5. Now, many Taiwanese come to the mainland, they visit their relatives and friends, and many of them build factories and run shops.5、用词不当：they regarded what they have done the water disaster (flood)拼写错误或笔误,which destroied the farmlandtrees were importance for their living environmentThey regreted cutting down a lot of treesmade up their mind to planted more trees and to Stop the flood happen again. a heavy rain came to the western of China so they cutted down the trees拼写错误，卷面很花 7、信息点组织不符合逻辑 8、卷面不整洁 优点：经过一段时间的实践，已经有了5句话作文的意识，卷面更整洁，笔误越 来越少，句子结构的准确性有了明显提高，速度更快。假设你最近参加了由某电视台举办的中学生英语演讲比赛并获奖，该台准备组织获 奖者去北京参加一次英语夏令营活动，下表是这次活动的时间安排和活动内容。写作内容电视台现就活动时间和活动内容征求你的意见。请按照以下要求以书信形式给予答复。1、选择适合你的时间并说明理由；2、解释你只能参加其中的两项活动（听英语讲座和教外宾学中文），虽然你 认为所有的活动都很有意义；3、说明你选择的理由：听英语讲座了解英美文化的信息；教外宾学中文因为2008北京奥运让越来越多的外宾想了解中国。写作要求 1. 必须使用5个句子表达全部的内容 2. 信的开头和结尾已给出。Dear Sir or Madame,Im glad to be invited to the English summer camp.活动时间动时间 7月15日-22日或 8月15日-22日 活动动内容 参加英语语角 学唱英语语歌曲 听英语讲语讲 座 表演英语语短剧剧 看英语电语电 影 教外宾宾学中文 2007高考英语考试说明样题题型特点1、写作题材贴近学生的学习和生活。历年题材都非常贴近学生的学习和生活，可以预 料07年还会在这些范围之内。2、写作的体裁主要是故事性描述和应用文写作两类。3、写作内容具有半封闭性。写作内容是被规定了的，学生必须将文章所规定的信息点完整地表达出来，但对于语言表达的方式、信息组织的先后秩序、需要补充哪些信息等，学生又有一定的自主构思空间。4、信息点多，但必须用5句话表达全部信息点。须使用复杂句来综合多个信息点，而且要兼顾句与句之间在语法上的衔接和语意上的连贯。5、满分15分，参考时间为10分钟。6、信息点呈现方式多样：能力要求1、审题能力(包含全部信息） Ability to take in the information given 2、信息组织能力：信息组合、排列。 Ability to analyze what is involved in the topic Ability to build up the frame of the composition3、信息表达能力 Ability to express yourself用词的合理性句子结构的复杂度（从句、分词短语等）语法运用的正确性信息内容的完整性句子之间的连贯性4、规范整洁的书写能力:评分原则规定“如书写较差，以至影响 交际，将分数降低一个档次”（正确的拼写词汇和标点）基础础写作评评分模板语语言 语语法和句子结结构准确性高，复杂杂性。 词汇词汇 使用好，只有少许错误许错误8、7、6、5、4、3、2、1、0内容信息内容完整（不加减信息）5、4、3、2、1、0连贯连贯 内容连贯连贯 ，且结结构紧紧凑2、1、0项项目句子评评分板10 0.5 1 1.5 2 2.520 0.5 1 1.5 2 2.530 0.5 1 1.5 2 2.540 0.5 1 1.5 2 2.550 0.5 1 1.5 2 2.5连贯连贯0 0.5 1 1.5 2 2.52、分析法（以句子为单位）【注】多一个少一个句子扣一分；文不对题给 零分。1、印象法推荐步骤 认真审题 ( Read the topic carefully) 归纳排列信息点 (Find out the key points organize the messages in 5 sentences ) 草拟短语( Translate the phrases)确定短语和句型Think of the words, phrases, sentence structures you may use in writing. 连词成句(Make up sentences) Change the sentence structure where necessary; 组句成篇（润色） Add some conjunctions if needed. 检查修改 (adding and revising) 规范誊写写作步骤1找准主题，以防 偏题(what)参加夏令营。体裁格式2明确目的，更有 针对性（why)电视台邀请参加夏令营，写信回复。3时间 (when)夏令营还没有开始，用一般将来时。人称时态时态 、语语 态态 4找准信息点1、所写文章有哪些信息点？6项活动2、怎样怎么组合、排列信息点？第1步 审题1、整合信息（按逻辑顺序整合成5个句子) 很高兴有机会参加活动(such activities as) 选择7月15日-22日或8月15日-22日并说明理由 只参加两项听英语讲座和教外宾学中文，虽然所有活动都很有意义 说明选择的理由：听英语讲座了解英美文化的信息；教外宾学中文因为 2008北京奥运让越来越多的外宾想了解中国。（整合）第2步 整合信息， 译成英语。2、译成英文词语或句子(在上面基础上幻灯呈现句子所需的词汇，短语和句型)第3步 连词成句。 考虑句子结构的复杂性和句子内容的连贯性 很高兴能有机会参加活动(such activities as)Thank you very much for arranging so many activities, such as attending English corner, having English lectures, seeing English films, learning English songs, acting English plays and helping foreigners learn Chinese. 选择一个时间并说明理由； 7月15日-22日或8月15日-22日 只能参加两项活动听英语讲座和教外宾学中文），同时表示所有的活动都很有意义；I can only take part in two of them, because I will have to spend some time in doing my research project.I would like to listen to the lectures and help foreigners learn Chinese, （组合） 说明你选择的理由：了解英美文化的信息；让越来越多的外宾想了解中国。I will learn more about western culture, as more and more foreigners want to know about China and the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.第4步 连句成篇Dear Sir or Madam,Im glad to be invited to the English summer camp. Thank you very much for arranging so many activities, such as attending English corner, having English lectures, seeing English films, learning English songs, acting English plays and helping foreigners lear