Teaching aim:Guide the students in improving their English writing.漂亮规范的书写 是写作得分的亮点Factor 1：作文的卷面和书写Factor 2：文中所采用的语言材料人靠衣装，文靠词装A. 词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜；B. 句型结构运用灵活多变;A. ExamplesA. Examples 1_替换because of 2. _替换think of 3_替换should 4. _替换spend 5_替换 be helpful/useful 6_替换talk about/of, mentiondevotebe supposed todue tocontribute tocome up with/occurrefer to 1. I dont know about others, but I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well. (NMET 2008) 2. It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk. ( 2009 全国卷 ) B. 改变句型结构,与众不同practice1.He got excited when he heard the news._ the news, he got excited.2.The girl went home, because she was hungry and thirsty._, the girl went home.HearingHungry and thirsty3. Radio broadcasts didnt begin until 1920.It was_.4.He never speaks about his own family.Never_.not until 1920 that radio broadcasts begandoes he speak about his own familySample:These topics, I think, are very popular with us students. Whats more, there are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us understand English better. However, some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us. Therefore, Id like to suggest changing them into easier ones. Factor 3：行文的流畅上下贯通、一气呵成正确而巧妙地使用好连接词、插入语等and,then,also,besides,morever,whats more furthermore,in addition,more than that.1.表递进.表转折 .表因果.表目的.表归纳but,however,although,though,in spite of,despite after all,on the contrary,on the other hand. because,since,therefore,so,hence,thus,consequently as a result/consequence,on account of.in order that,so that,for the purpose of.in general,in brief,in short,in conclusion, in a word,on the whole.William Shakespeare（2008 湖南卷）I like him because his comedies and tragedies bring me into a fantastic world; I love him because his poems let me enjoy the beauty of the English language; I admire him because his keen sights set me thinking and teach me how to lead a meaningful life! Factor 4：作者表达的思想和情感小结：1. 作文的卷面 -整洁、规范2. 文章的语言 -丰富、多变3. 行文的表达 -流畅、连贯4. 文章的思想 -独到、新颖5 ：Five steps 1) Review the topic (审) 2) List the points （列） 3) Make the sentences （写） 4) Polish up the essay （润） 5) Check the errors （查）4 ：Four advanced words & phrases （at least）3：Three special sentence structures （eg. 复合句、it句型、非谓语、 with独立结构、强调句、倒装句）1 ：One proverb or idiom 充满智慧而贴切的谚语或习语会 使你的作文锦上添花。2 ：Beginning & endingattractive beginningimpressive ending 现象说明文(Format) Recently_. what amazes us most is _, and it is true that_. There are many reasons explaining_. The main reason is_. What is more_. Thirdly_. As a result, _. However, _.Considering all these, _. For one thing_, for another_. In Conclusion_.