书面表达系列讲练（2）三部分原则Dear Helen, I am writing this letter in response to your advertisement.I am a girl of the same age with you. And I come from a happy and warm family, which includes my father, my mother, my sister and me. I am studying in a key school far from my hometown, but I never regretted for my own choice, for the life here is very colorful and challenging. I am interested in stamp collection and I have colleted more than three thousand stamps. I also like swimming, playing tennis and some other sports.I wish that one day we could be good friends.Yours Truly,Wang Lin 第 一 部 分第 二 部 分第 三 部 分给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整体三部分1.Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性； 暗示性;书信体开门见山2. Body 中心记述部分；层次分明3. Ending 小结；呼应主题怎样写开头（第一段）请你给中国日报写一篇稿件，谈谈农村儿童失 学的主要原因及你的看法。 原因： 1、 家庭贫穷，供不起儿童上学，他们不得不在家 赚钱 2、部分家长认为女孩上学无用，不愿让她们上学。 3、 部分儿童对功课不感兴趣，不愿上学。 看法： 1、 每个儿童包括女孩都应有受教育的机会。 2、全社会都应重视儿童教育，他们对国家的未来将 起到重要的作用。怎样写开头（第一段） Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school. There are different kinds of reasons why country children can t go to school. As is known to all, many children in the country are out of school today, which results from various causes. Nowadays, more and more attention is paid to the country children out of school. 5. In the country, many children cant go to school today.精彩回放常用开头语句 As far as .is concerned, . . . It goes without saying that. As the proverb goes that every coin has two sides. Different people hold different opinions. People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards People have different opinions on this problem. People who are for/against the idea think Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life. There are several reasons that account for Practice:怎样写开头（第一段）假如你是李华, 你的美国朋友Alice听说中国的中小学正在实施素质 教育, 来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息，写封回信， 谈一谈“素质教育”实施后你们学校生活发生的变化。 应试应试 教育素质质教育 上课课：听讲讲，做 笔记记上课课：课课堂活跃跃，研究学习习，能力 培养， 有时时学生当老师师课课外活动动： 做不 完的作业业课课外活动动：开展各种类类型的活动动： 唱歌跳舞，球类类活动动，电脑电脑 学习习， 英语语角 晚上：继续继续 做作 业业至深夜晚上： 看新闻闻，做实验实验 ，各学科 讨论讨论注意： 1、写信日期为2004年2月20日；2、词数：100左右； 3、注意书信格式。怎样写开头（第一段）Dear Alice,How nice to hear from you. You want to know what is going on in schools in China? Now, I will tell you about it.二班的同学进行了一场有关英语学习的讨论。讨论的题目 是：学习英语要不要从儿童时期开始？请你根据下表中的 提示写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况。(2004湖北卷 )一些同学认为认为 另一些同学认为认为 1应应从儿童时时期开始学 习习英语语 2儿童时时期记忆记忆 力好， 可以记记住很多单词单词 3能为为以后的英语语学习习 打下坚实坚实 的基础础 1不应应从儿童时时期开 始学习习英语语 2儿童时时期既要学汉汉 语语拼音又要学英语语， 易混淆 3会影响汉语汉语 学习习和 今后的英语语学习习 讨论讨论 未取得一致意见见 怎样写开头（第一段）The students of Class 2 had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood. Actually, different persons hold different opinions.怎样写开头（第一段）I always thought English was easy to learn. However, what happened to me this evening changed my idea.怎样写记事部分（Body) 逻辑清晰; 关联词语恰当 层次分明 尽可能的使用较复杂的语句。如 定语从句、各种状语从句等。 尽可能的使语句多样化。如倒装 句、强调句、感叹句、分词及短 语等。 尽可能的长短句搭配。For one thing, some families are too poor to afford their children to go to school. As a result, they have to make money to help their parents to support the families. For another, part of the parents believe that its no good sending their daughters to school, in which case they would rather do their sons. Last but not least, some children find their schooling too dull to attract their interest. Therefore, they are unwilling to waste any time at school怎样写结尾1.总结性 2.概括性 3.呼应主题 4.自己观点 1. In my opinion, each child, including girls, should have the rights and opportunities to receive proper education, to which the whole society ought to pay more attention, for they are the future of our nation.2. I think every child should go to school. The society should pay attention to it, because they are the builders of our future.3. Our society should make sure that they go to school, not only boys, but also girls.精彩回放结尾常用语句: We can draw the conclusion that In my opinion/Personally, In short/ in brief/ in a word, Its clear from the chart that The results seem to suggest that Therefore, we have the reason to believe that. All things considered, it can be concluded from the discussion that. It can be concluded from the chartdata that.Practice:怎 样 写 结 尾假如你是李华, 你的美国朋友Alice听说中国的中小学正在实施素质 教育, 来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息，写封回信， 谈一谈“素质教育”实施后你们学校生活发生的变化。 应试应试 教育素质质教育 上课课：听讲讲，做 笔记记上课课：课课堂活跃跃，研究学习习，能力 培养， 有时时学生当老师师课课外活动动： 做不 完的作业业课课外活动动：开展各种类类型的活动动： 唱歌跳舞，球类类活动动，电脑电脑 学习习， 英语语角 晚上：继续继续 做作 业业至深夜晚上： 看新闻闻，做实验实验 ，各学科 讨论讨论注意： 1、写信日期为2004年2月20日；2、词数：100左右； 3、注意书信格式。怎样写结尾In one word, I am rather satisfied with our school life today. Best wishes. Your s, Li Hua二班的同学进行了一场有关英语学习的讨论。讨论的题目 是：学习英语要不要从儿童时期开始？请你根据下表中的 提示写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况。(2004湖北卷 )一些同学认为认为 另一些同学认为认为 1应应从儿童时时期开始学 习习英语语 2儿童时时期记忆记忆 力好， 可以记记住很多单词单词 3能为为以后的英语语学习习 打下坚实坚实 的基础础 1不应应从儿童时时期开 始学习习英语语 2儿童时时期既要学汉汉 语语拼音又要学英语语， 易混淆 3会影响汉语汉语 学习习和 今后的英语语学习习 讨论讨论 未取得一致意见见 怎样写结尾In short , the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.怎样写结尾What a stupid mistake I made! From now on, Im determined to study English harder