CET-4 作文讲解徐勇刚写作总论写作部分考核的技能是： A.思想表达1）.表达中心思想2）.表达重要或特定信息3）.表达观点、态度等B.篇章组织4）.围绕所给的题目叙述、议论或描述，突出重点5）.连贯地组句成段，组段成篇写作总论C.语言运用6）.运用恰当的词汇7）.运用正确的语法8）.运用合适的句子结构9）.使用正确的标点符号10）.运用衔接手段表达句间关系(如对比、原因、结 果、程度、目的等)D.写作格式11）.运用正确的符合英语表达习惯的写作格式写作总论2. 四级写作评分原则和标准 评分原则： 1.CET是检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四六级教学要求 ，对作文的评判应以此要求为准则。2.CET作文题采用总体评分(Global Scoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的印 象给出奖励分(Reward Scores), 而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。3.从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。4.避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包括满分;该给低分的给低分 ，包括0分。一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间 的几种分数。写作总论评分标准： 本题满分为15分. 共分五等：2-4分、5-7分、8-10分、11-13分及14-15分。2-4分 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或在部分句子均有错误，且 多数严重错误。5-7分 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 8-10分 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错 误相当，多其中有一些是严重错误。 11-13分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14-15分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误 ，仅有个别小错误写作总论注： 1.白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立 的词而无法表达思想，则给0分。2.如题目中给出主题句，起始句，结束句，均不 得计入所写字数3.只写一段者：04分；只写两段者：09分（ 指规定三段的作文）Women in the Modern WorldWomen are playing an increasingly important part in society today. In today, many women have a work. They worked as well as men playing an important part in factories. There are many women in govener also. They lead other people comtral, and make out plans. There are many women scientist also. They event new things to improve our life.With the changes in their social role, womens position in the family has been improved as well. In ancient, womens position in family is pity. They had to looks after their children, did every how husband ordered her to do. But now it is changed. They are equal to her husband. They have the right of speaking of idea, discussion things with her husband, do what she wants to do.In spite of these changes, the liberation of woman has not been completely realized. We also should realize, womens likerty are limited. For example, many factories want men become its workers but the chance of women is less than men. Everyone should do their best to change this condition. Im sure, the liberation of women would be increased.评分样卷 (1)5分基本切题，表达不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多严重错误 。Women are playing an increasing important part in society today. More and more women go to work to earn money instead of keeping the house or looking after the children. Women have entered many fields of society including scientific field. As we know, many women sports teams have won the worlds champion such as Chinese Womens Volleyball Team.With the changes in their social role, womans position in the family has been improved as well. Husbands are not the masters of wives in many places. Husbands and wife are equal now. They join together to overcome difficulties and share happiness.In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized. Also in some places, women are considered being “things” belong to men. They have little chance to find jobs. They dont get equal pay for equal job. This is a problem must be solved not only by society but also by women themselves.Women in the Modern World评分样卷 (2)11分切题，思想表达清楚，连贯。有个别句子结构错误及少 量其他语言方面的错误Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. Many women today are playing an important part at works that was thought only could be done by the men before. For example, some women are not secretary in the office, instead , they become manager of a company.With the changes in their social role, womans position in the family has been improved as well. In the world today, more and more women have their own jobs. They get their own salary, and become more independent from their husband. With the economic situation improved, their family position is improving.In spite of these changes, the liberation of woman has not been completely realized. Many husbands only want his wife to stay at home, and do some works or do some shopping. They only want their wife to be a housewife, but not a manager of a company.Women in the Modern World评分样卷 (3)8分基本切题，思想表达尚清楚，基本连贯，有个别严重的 语言错误及用词不当，但可以理解。Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. In many countries, more and more women are acting as workers, farmers, scientists and even leaders. We can say that almost all jobs which men can do are done perfectly by women. Women are no longer looked down upon by society.With the changes in their social role, womens position in the family has been improved as well. Husband and wife are now equal in the family. They cope with problems of daily life together, and share happiness with each other. Also, you can hardly find out that in todays families, women are being busy with dinners, whereas men are comfortably sitting in armchairs, reading newspapers.Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. In many countries, more and more women are acting as workers, farmers, scientists and even leaders. We can say that almost all jobs which men can do are done perfectly by women. Women are no longer looked down upon by soci