M4 U1-3 写作（伟人生平）(Jane Goodall) (袁隆平 钱学森)Only if we can understand can we care. Only if we care will we help. Only if we help shall all the life is hopeful.-Jane GoodallPost-readingA STUDENT OF AFRICAN WILDLIFE“Jane Goodall in my eyes!”(100-120 words)What impressed /moved /struck you most about Jane Goodall? What qualities? Why do you think she is?Jane Goodall in my eyeswilling to sacrificehard-workingmodestunselfishdevotedperseveringdeterminedintelligentresponsiblegreat woman.kind, lovingbravePost-readingA Student of African Wildlife study observe record discoversay argue help set up work outthink about achieve inspire 1. Jane has studied these families of chimps for many years and is going to be very tired and dirty 2. She spent years observing and recording their daily activities. 3. Since her childhood she had wanted to work . 4. It was unusual for a woman to live in the forest. Only after her mother came to help her for the first few months was she allowed to begin her project. 5. For forty years Jane Goodall has been outspoken about making the rest of the world understand and respect the life of these animals. She has argued that wild animals should be left in the wild and not used for entertainment or advertisements. She has helped to set up special places where they can live safely. 6. “Once I stop, it all comes crowding in and I remember. think aboutnever forget. (hardworking, determined)(devoted, persevering, hardworking)(have a dream, devoted)(brave, determined)(determined, devoted, loving)(loving) She is unselfish. She changed the world by knowledge, understanding, perseverance and deep emotion. Whats more, I think she is a great woman. When she first went to Gonbe in 1960, its unusual for a woman to live in forest. By her many years observing she find the chimps how to communicate with each other. She devoted her life to animals. She is a successful women. Jane studied chimps by observing them in the forest. She works to protect chimps everywhere. She helped set up and changed the way细节不能有效支撑qualityQuality不明确总结的不是quality 情感丰富的表达： First, I admire her for her determination. Just the determination of studying chimps helped her overcome all the difficulties in the forest. No matter how tired and dirty, she. Second, I am moved by her deep love for chimps. Above all, I appreciate her attitude towards science and animal protection. 吴琼 It was her determination to study chimps that helped her overcome all the difficulties in the forest.特殊句式有助于加强语气丰富情感 情感丰富的表达： Her determination touched me most. had a dream struggled to for many years finally she did what she said. It did need courage to spend years observing and recording their daily . Only when we have perseverance, bravery and loving heart can we go on the road to success. 孙慧 特殊句式有助于加强语气丰富情感 情感丰富有逻辑的表达： I was moved by her determination. It was unusual for a woman to live in a place where it was wet and hot and there were no friends. She is also responsible for her career. As a zoologist she has done her best to protect chimps, help people change the way they think about them, and call on people not to use them for entertainment. In a word, . 付豪1班讲评 She is unselfish. She changed the world by knowledge, understanding, perseverance and deep emotion. Whats more, I think she is a great woman. When she first went to Gonbe in 1960, its unusual for a woman to live in forest. By her many years observing she find the chimps how to communicate with each other. She devoted her life to animals. She is a successful women. Jane studied chimps by observing them in the forest. She works to protect chimps everywhere. She helped set up and changed the way细节不能有效支撑qualityQuality不明确总结的不是quality 问题： I think Jane Goodall is very kind and warm- hearted. She is also very brave. She had a dream while she was a child. So she worked hard for her dream. At last she achieved everything.没有细节支撑quality 有效整合课文和自己的语言，有逻辑的表达： Also I think she is very brave. She went to Gombe by herself in 1960. Its very difficult for a woman to live in the forest. But she didnt care about that. She just concentrated on studying of the chimps until she has achieved everything she wanted to do. 李亚男 有效整合课文和自己的语言，有逻辑的表达： She observed -just herself. It really needs abilities and courage. She dreamed of and she has realized her dream through her efforts. Everyone has a dream, but not all of them can make their dream come true. I admire her because she never gives up. She for nearly forty years. She is really persevering. She had to face all the difficulties and tried to solve them. 陈曲 有效整合课文和自己的语言，有逻辑的表达： Jane, who loves animals as a young girl, has achieved success in studying chimps. I admire her very much. Jane not only has her dream but also works hard for it. She strugg