记叙文写作 一, 包括两类：1. 记叙他人的或其他的故事;2. 讲述作者自己亲身经历 二，如何概括? 概括时候要抓住记叙文的以下要素：事件(what) 人物(who) 时间时间 (time) 地点(where) 情节节(how) 结结果(result/ what to learn)One morning(时间), Mr Hare(人物) was running on the road(地点). Suddenly he saw Mr Tortoise(人物), who was also running on the road towards him. Mr Hare ran up to Mr Tortoise and laughed at him. Mr Tortoise got angry and suggested having a race(事件) to see who could first get to the big tall tree by the roadsides. Mr Hare agreed with him without hesitation. The race began. Mr Hare and Mr tortoise started from the same line at the same time. When Mr Hare was far ahead of Mr Tortoise and even couldnt see Mr Tortoise, he thought that Mr Tortoise fell behind and couldnt catch up with him. So he stopped and lay down to have a nap(情节). But soon he fell asleep. At the same time, Mr Tortoise kept on running and running(情节). When Mr Hare woke up, he found Mr Tortoise had already sat under the tree(结果) and was smiling at him!三，概括模式 1. 记叙他人的故事的或其他一件事情; 2. 讲述作者自己亲身经历1) The passage shows us that/ a story that (事件 ).（情节）.（结果）2) The passage/ The story is about (事件).（情节）.（结果）3) The author tells us a story4) In the passage, the author tells us that5) The passage/ story tells us about the writers experience四，注意事项： 1.选择重要的要素为中心，相对不重要的可以省略。 2.阐述一个故事梗概，忌力陈细节，忌掺入个人评价或观点（但是材料中作者给出了评价或观点时，此观点一定要包在概括中）。 3. 忌直接摘抄文中原句，要用自己的话重新组织句子。One morning(时间), Mr Hare(人物) was running on the road(地点). Suddenly he saw Mr Tortoise(人物), who was also running on the road towards him. Mr Hare ran up to Mr Tortoise and laughed at him. Mr Tortoise got angry and suggested having a race(事件) to see who could first get to the big tall tree by the roadsides. Mr Hare agreed with him without hesitation. The race began. Mr Hare and Mr tortoise started from the same line at the same time. When Mr Hare was far ahead of Mr Tortoise and even couldnt see Mr Tortoise, he thought that Mr Tortoise fell behind and couldnt catch up with him. So he stopped and lay down to have a nap(情节). But soon he fell asleep. At the same time, Mr Tortoise kept on running and running(情节). When Mr Hare woke up, he found Mr Tortoise had already sat under the three and was smiling at him! (结果) 事件(what)a race between Mr Hare and Mr Tortoise 人物(who)Mr Hare and Mr Tortoise时间时间 (time)one morning地点(where)on the road情节节(how)Mr Hare was proud and lay down to have a nap. Mr Tortoise kept running 结结果(result/ what to learn)Mr Hare lost the race./ Mr Tortoise won the race.1. The story tells us a race between Mr Hare and Mr Tortoise . In the race Mr Tortoise was proud and lay down to have a nap while Mr Tortoise kept running . As a result, Mr Hare lost the race. 2. The story tells us a race between Mr Hare and Mr Tortoise , in which Mr Tortoise was proud and lay down, having a nap while Mr Tortoise kept running . As a result, Mr Tortoise won the race. 五，需要考生写的是一般是以下几种： 这个故事给你的启示/ 影响； After reading the story I was lost in thought. And I begin to realize that/ come to realize that /come to know that/ understand that/ come to a conclusion that 2. 谈谈你或者你的朋友的一次类似经历； (1) I have a similar experience. I want to share it with you. (2)I also have gone through such an experience. (3)I have the same experience as the writer (4)This story reminds me of another story that happened to my friend. I want to share it with you. (5)This story reminds me of a similar experience of my friend (6) Sb, my friend, once had a similar experience as the writer.在组织故事时，注意以下两点: 由于受篇幅的限制，我们也尽可能省去心理描写和对话等细节，用简练的语言（尽量用间接引语） 把故事的过程讲清楚即可。 在往试卷上写之前可以简单列出要点，有利于我们 选择短语、句型和相关的连接词语。在组织自己的故事的时候可以按照以下顺序：事件(what)你或者你朋友的相似经历经历 人物(who)I/ My friend 时间时间 (time)Once/ when I was./ One day 地点(where) 情节节(how)和材料相似的波折结结果(result/ what to learn)你的感受/所得3. 这个经历对你或你朋友的影响/经历此事后的感想/ 别人对你或你朋友的评价。 Now, whenever I (am to lose my patience), Ill From then on, I /my friend never From the above two stories, we can see that / I see that From the above examples/ my experience, I strongly believe that综上所述，记叙文的写作框架可以总结如下： 第一段：summary : he passage shows us that/ a story that / The author tells us a story(事件) (情节）（结 果） 第二段：启示:After reading the story I begin to realize that/ come to realize that 第三段： 主体: (1). 过渡句： I have a similar experience. I want to share it with you./ This story reminds me of another story that happened to my friend. I want to share it with you. (2) 你的或类似的经历 (耳熟能详，简单明了，符 合话题，说服力强) 第四段：你的感想：From the above two stories, we can see that / I see thatOne morning(时间), Mr Hare(人物) was running on the road(地点). Suddenly he saw Mr Tortoise(人物), who was also running on the road towards him. Mr Hare ran up to Mr Tortoise and laughed at him. Mr Tortoise got angry and suggested having a race(事件) to see who could first get to the big tall tree by the roadsides. Mr Hare agreed with him without hesitation. The race began. Mr Hare and Mr tortoise started from the same line at th