新东方在线考研写作天津新东方学校国内考试部 刘烁炀1考研作文总体介绍n小作文（应用文）n要求：100words，n满分10分，平均分5.56分，n考场建议时间：20分钟，n考试内容：投诉，建议，邀请，辞职， 道歉，申请，推荐，求职，离职等内容 ，n目标得分：8分； 2考研作文总体介绍n大作文n以图画题为主，n早年考过图表文章，提纲作文，背景作文以 及开放式作文n要求：160200字，n满分20分，n平均分11分，n考场建议时间：40分钟；n目标得分：14分 3A节应用文的评分侧重点n信息点的覆盖n内容的组织n语言的准确性n格式n语域的恰当 注：对语法结构和词汇多样性的要求将根据具 体试题做调整。允许在作文中使用提示语中 出现的关键词，但使用提示语中出现过的词 组或句子将被扣分4B节作文的评分重点n内容的完整性n文章的组织连贯性n语法结构和词汇的多样性n语言的准确性5解读评分原则（以大作文为例 ）n奖励分 （3分）基准分（17分）n哪个更好提高呢?6奖励分给分原则n书法笔迹 n大字vs小字n笔的选择7奖励分给分原则n正确正规可读n非正规标记： manufacturing units guarantee to turn out products of good quality; commercial enterprises swear to provide genuine commodities and polite and enthusiastic services. Can you find anything new and substantial other than their obligations, duties and jobs in these so called promises? I guess your answer will be negative. As a matter of fact, their intention to make such commitments is nothing but to put on civilized outer clothing to please or deceive the public.65范文分析I dare say that your society is suffering corruption and cheat which are causing damage to society both materially and morally. But the hen and her like should know that by dishonest words no one can survive the intense competition under market economy system. They should remember the old saying, “Honesty is the best policy”.66范文分析nHere is an interesting cartoon: With her head held high, maybe singing, a hen stands proudly in the cartoon of the picture with a notice in hand. It says: “Firstly, I promise that the eggs I lay are absolutely round without any square corners. Secondly, they all have shells and cores.” Its so ridiculous that we cant help laughing. But after that there must be something left. 67范文分析nRecently, many promises have come up in many walks of life, especially the service departments. They promise you that they will provide you with warm smile service and good products. At first you are moved nearly to thank them. But if you think twice, you may wonder if those should be their duties. It goes without saying that factories should produce goods of quality, department stores should serve customers politely, buses should arrive on time, and so forth, because all of these are their responsibilities. But why should they promise what are their due jobs? One reason may be that they want to correct their past mistakes under the planned economic system. Another is that they intend to improve their images and please the customers. 68范文分析nIn my opinion, trying to be better is worth welcoming, but making empty promises is unacceptable. If factories, stores and administrations do their jobs well rather than talk nonsense, our society will be more prosperous. 69范文分析nAs is shown in the cartoon, the hen made two pieces of promises. On the one hand, she said that her eggs would be sure to be round. On the other hand, she could ensure that her eggs must have egg crust, egg white and egg yellow. According to the words given in the picture, we know that making promises is very popular among different departments and organizations. But its clear that what they promise is nothing but their obligations or duties. This phenomenon is not a good thing to our society. 70范文分析nThere are at least two main reasons, I think, for this phenomenon. In the first place, some enterprises want to pursuit fashion, but have not true promise to make, so they promised what they didnt need to say. Secondly, it is a normal phenomenon in the process of reform and open door to the world. Maybe there are some other reasons, but the mentioned above is commonly accepted.71范文分析nAs far as I am concerned, I believe that this phenomenon is not a good thing, but with the reform and open door policy being carried out, and with the development of our national economy, these problems will be solved step by step. I am sure my opinion is sound and well-grounded.72范文分析n这个问题迟早会得到解决(消失). nIt will only be a matter of time before the problem becomes things of the past.n万能句式结尾n请注意在时间状语从句中的时态问题”主将从 现”73范文分析n总结n段落安排合理n聪明的学生举例子n句式复杂多样n用词有效替换n语法错误较少n我们的目标？74考研写作题型深度剖析nWrite an essay of 160- 200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you shouldn1) describe the drawing briefly,n2) explain its intended meaning, and thenn3) support your view with an example/examples.75考研写作题型深度剖析n05.1 养老足球赛nWrite an essay of 160- 200words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should first describe the drawing, then interpret its meaning, and give your comment on it.n描述图画阐释寓意 给出评论76考研写作题型深度剖析n04.1 终点又是新起点：nStudy the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should:n1 describe the drawing;n2 interpret its meaning, and n3 support your view with examples.n描述图画阐释寓意举例 论证（至少2个）77考研写作题型深度剖析n03.1 温室的花朵经不起风雨nStudy the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should:n1 describe the set of drawings and interpret its meaning n2 point out its implications in our lifen描述图画阐释寓意生活 中的意义？ 78考研写作题型