年份内 容 1997 看图写关于交通违章的经历 1998看图写参观农场 1999看图介绍学校的变化 2000看图写交通事故报告 2001 根据表格提供的信息写回信主要特点记叙为主 稍加议论 旁带说明能力要求主要问题 要点不全 线索不清原因：步骤不对书面表达六六 步步 法法抄改 连扩抓审书面 表达书面表达六步法书面表达六步法一、审题确定基本要素:5W1H何 时 何 地 何 人 为 何 如 何 做 了 何 事书面表达六步法二、抓要点确定主要行为What happened?书面表达六步法三、扩展成句形成基本语义单位Who did what?书面表达六步法四、连句成文时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应书面表达六步法五、查错改错要尽量剔除错误书面表达六步法六、誊写卷面不工整扣5分课堂练习请用六步法 写一篇短文五个 “W”一个 “H”第一步 审题认真读题然后找出把答案写在题中相应的位置NMET2000NMET2000书面表达书面表达n n假设你是李华，在美国探亲。假设你是李华，在美国探亲。20002000年年2 2月月8 8 日清晨，你目击了一起交通事故。警察局让日清晨，你目击了一起交通事故。警察局让 你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。根据下你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。根据下 列图画写出报告。列图画写出报告。1 1、目击者应该准确报告事实；、目击者应该准确报告事实；2 2、词数、词数100100左右；左右；3 3、结尾已为你写好。、结尾已为你写好。n_ _ About two minutes later I stopped a About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.hospital.Li Li HuaHua附图 1234At 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000, I saw a woman driving a car hit the man in the street.第二步 抓要点一幅图，一要点一幅图，一要点时态直达 语态到位 介/副词紧随抓要点，配动词抓要点，配动词第三步 扩展成句把要点变成完整 的句子。 注意使用介/副词第四步 连句成文增加细节 呼应首尾句与句相连词与词搭配第五步 查错改错主谓一致吗？ 时态正确吗？时态正确吗？有“半截话”吗？第六步 誊写卷面整洁不一定加分， 卷面潦草一定要扣分！作业选评要改进吗？ 为什么？At 7:15 a.m.At 7:15 a.m. on the morning ofon the morning of Feb. 8th, 2000Feb. 8th, 2000, I , I was headingwas heading east east on the south side ofon the south side of the Park Road, the Park Road, takingtaking my morning walk my morning walk as usualas usual. . I saw an old man on the other side of the road outside the gate of the City Park. He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sudden right turn at the crossing. The car was so fast that the old man even didnt have time to dodge and the car hit the elderly hard.I I thoughtthought the driver the driver would would have stopped to helphave stopped to help, , butbut she she didntdidnt. . InsteadInstead, , she she justjust drove offdrove off, , leavingleaving the old the old man still man still lyinglying on the on the groundground in painin pain. . FortunatelyFortunately, , I I noted downnoted down the detailsthe details: : it it waswas a yellow cara yellow car, , the plate number the plate number ofof whichwhich waswas AC864AC864, , andand the driverthe driver waswas a a young ladyyoung lady. . AfterAfter that that, , I I went over towent over to check outcheck out the old the old man.man.About two minutes laterAbout two minutes later I I stoppedstopped a passing car a passing car andand tooktook the old man to the the old man to the nearest hospital.nearest hospital. Li Li HuaHua年轻妇女颜色：黄AC864小结n审题，抓 点n造句，成 文n改错，誉 写作业n复习本课要 点n背诵精彩范 文