Highlights of My Senior Year Writing I. Learning aims:（学习目标） 1) To know how to form a good passage.2) To use proper sentence structures and advanced words when writing a composition.假设你是新华中学高二3班学生李华。 请你以“My Dreaming Senior Year(理想 高三)”为题写一篇120150词的英语短文 参加比赛。内容要点如下： 1. 简单做自 我介绍。 2.高三学习时间设计。3. 业余 活动的设想等。一、审题开放式作文主要是给出某一种情况,然 后要求学生根据这种情况进行思维和联想, 写出合理的下文. 一定要弄清情况和要求, 然后抓住关键词句, 进行记叙,解释,说明,议 论等.与一般“书面表达”题型相比,难度更 大,要求也更高. 这种作文将是高考作文测 试的主要方向.二、谋篇布局What should we write about ?uself -Introductionugeneral introduction about the senior year uabout study uafter class activitiesuconclusion 三、遣词构句1.Who are you? 2. Which class and school do you come from? 3.Will you be busier or more relaxed? Why? 4.Will your study be different from now? How? 5.Do you want to be kept too busy all day long, even at the weekends and on holidays? 6. Which activities will you take part in and whats the benefit of these activities? 7.What kind of senior life will you live? Can you get along well with your study and life?4. Time is limited so Ill study harder and more effectively. Ill make a most scientific and proper schedules for my study. 1. Im Li Hua. 2. I am a student from Class 3 Grade 2, Xinhua Senior High School.3. Ill be busier next term. Because I will be preparing for the coming entrance examinations.(同位语结构) (现在分词作伴随状语)(不定式作目的状语)1.2. I am Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Senior High School.3. Ill be busier next term, preparing for the coming college entrance examinations.4. Time is limited and Ill make a most scientific and proper schedules to study harder and more effectively.7.I want to live a busy but interesting life. I can get along well with my study and my life in the coming year.5. I dont want to be kept too busy with my study all day long. We need some free time to relax our mind. We can relax at the weekends and on holidays. 6. I want to take part in some sports and amusing clubs held by our class or school. They can help us to keep healthy and active.（用强调部分信息的副词）（用定语从句使语句更紧凑）(用现在分词作伴随状语）5. I dont want to be kept too busy with my study all day long. We need some free time to relax our mind, especially at the weekends and on holidays. 6. I want to take part in some sports and amusing clubs held by our class or school, which can help us to keep healthy and active.7.I want to live a busy but interesting life getting along well with study and life in the coming year.Ill be busier next term, preparing for the coming college entrance examinations. _, time is limited and Ill make a most scientific and proper schedules to study more hard and more effectively.Additionally, In addition, Besides, And moreover, Furthermore, Whats more(表递进关系）_, I dont want to be kept too busy with my study all day long. Just as the proverb says: “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” We need some free time to relax our mind, especially at the weekends and on holidays.At the same time, Even though, However, Nevertheless, To be honest, Otherwise, （表转折关系）只工作不玩耍聪 明的孩子也变傻._, I want to live a busy but interesting life, getting along well with my study and my life in the coming year.All in all, Briefly, In conclusion, In summary, To sum up, On the whole, In a word, In sum, To summarize, To conclude（表总结）四.有效使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺，使 文章结构紧凑。二. 避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装 句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等. 一. 改变句子的开头方式三.注意使用高级词汇代替一些单词，以增加文采。I am Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Senior High School. Next term, Ill be busier with my study, preparing for the coming college entrance examinations. Besides, time is limited and Ill make a most scientific and proper schedules to study harder and more effectively. To be honest, I dont want to be kept too busy with my study all day long. Just as the proverb says, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” So we need some free time to relax our mind, especially at the weekends and on holidays. Also, I want to take part in some sports and amusing clubs held by our class or school, which can help us to keep healthy and active.All in all, I want to live a busy but interesting life, getting along well with study and life in the coming year.你校正在举办一次英语征文活动，请你以 “My Ideal School Life (我理想的高中生活)”为题写 一篇短文，短文内容包括： 1.你的个人信息：姓名（李华）年龄、所在班级、 你最喜欢的科目. 2.学校规模大还是小 / 课程安排 / 假期长短/课外活动及其原因。 3.学校应既重视智能的发展又重视社会技能的发展. 注意： 1.可适当增加细节，用恰当的联系词使行文连贯； 2.词数：120左右。 preferto / scientific and proper schedule / after- school clubs / put importance on / intellectual skills / social skillsMy ideal senior high school lifeMy name is Li Hua, a 17-year-old student from Class7, Grade 2 of No.8 senior high school. I like maths, physics, chemistry and English best. I prefer a big school to a small one with a beautiful garden full of flowers and trees. In addition, we have the most scientific and proper schedules for our study, which can help us to study more effectively. As far as Im concerned, the vacation should be about a month. Whats more, I like