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表示时间关系:first, second, then, finally/at last in the end , soon immediately, suddenly, at the same time, meanwhile, recently表示对称顺序关系:for one thing for the other thing, on one hand,on the other hand,above all, first of all, firstly, secondly, next, finally,the former.the latter,表示递进关系:what is more, as well, moreover, besides ,furthermore, in addition,whats worse表示换一种方式表达:in other words ,that is to say,表示举例说明:for example, like, such as, for instance表示陈述事实:in fact ,actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth 表示总结:on the whole, in a word, to sum up, in short, in conclusion, from what I have said above 表示因果关系:as a result ,thus, therefore, so that, as, because, consequently, 表示转折:but, however, while, instead, although, different from, not only but also 表达自己的观点:in my opinion, personally, as far as I know, I believe, I think, as we all know ,It is known to us all that.范例1:假如你事实李华,你班同 学最近开长了一场讨论,主题是 :高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼 ,请根据下面所提供的信息,写 一篇短文,介绍讨论的情况,并 发表自己的观点比例比例你的观你的观 点点 观点观点支持支持反对反对主要理由主要理由应该明天进行应该明天进行 体育锻炼做早体育锻炼做早 操,打乒乓球,打操,打乒乓球,打 篮球,但时间不要篮球,但时间不要 过锻炼能增强过锻炼能增强 质减少疾病锻质减少疾病锻 炼能使大脑休息,炼能使大脑休息, 使学习效果更好使学习效果更好锻炼浪费时锻炼浪费时 间锻炼使间锻炼使 人疲劳锻人疲劳锻 炼以后很兴奋炼以后很兴奋 ,较长时间不,较长时间不 能学习锻能学习锻 炼中可能受伤炼中可能受伤 1.关键词语体育锻炼做早操增强体质减少疾病休息学习有效果浪费时间投入学习受伤take exercisesdo morning exercisesbuild up the bodyreduce the diseasehave a reststudy more effectivelya waste of time pay attention to studybe hurt2.作文结构1.have had a discussion about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercises. As we know, every coin has two coins./Different students have different ideas .2.55%of the students think.such as(举例 )(原因)3.On the other hand,45% of the students believe.(原因)4.In my opinion, I prefer to 3.范文:Recently , we have had a discussion about whether have had a discussion about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercises. As we know, every coin has two coins.55%of the students think they should take all kinds of exercises every day ,such as doing morning exercises, playing table tennis and playing basketball, but not spend too much time on them . As a proverb says ,” all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. “Exercise builds up their body and reduce lots of diseases. Sports let them have a good rest so that their study will be more effective.+On the other hand,45% of the students believe taking exercise is a waste of time and tiring. After taking exercise, they are too excited for a long time to pay attention to their lessons. And its possible to be hurt in sports.+ In my opinion, I prefer to take proper exercises in my spare time.练习:“你们班会的讨论主题是“上大学是高中生唯一的出 路吗?”请根据下面提供的信息写一偏短文,客观的介绍下 讨论的情况,并发表自己的观点比例比例观点观点上大学上大学无所谓无所谓不上大学不上大学理由理由增长知识,增长知识, 提高素养,提高素养, 利于择业利于择业成功的路成功的路 不只一条不只一条学费高,学费高, 就业难就业难我的看法我的看法关键词语:widen knowledge, improve qualities, high tuition, senior students关键句子:of us consider it necessary to go to college10% of students think it no use going to college30% believe “All roads lead to Rome.”范例: 某中学生英语报社正开展一场题为“Young teachers or elderly teachers,which do you prefer?” 请你依据下面表格所提供的要点写一篇短文,向该报社投稿。老年教师 青年教师教学耐心讲解细致经验丰富精力充沛教学活泼勇于创新你的观点?注意:1词数100左右,开头语已为你写好,不计入总数;2短 文必须包含表格的全部内容。要求观点明确,结构合理,紧凑连贯学生作品1:Compare with young teachers, I prefer elderly teachers. There are some reasons below.For one thing, most of elderly teachers are patient in teaching. They not only spare no effort to teach the students, but also give classes carefully .They will do all they can to make the students understand the teaching content.What good teachers! For another thing, elderly teachers are full of teaching experience. This is also the most important, especially for us senior students.This is only my opinion. I think young teachers are also good.点评: 亮点:1、观点鲜明 ,词汇句型的运用 比较灵活 2、过渡词及连词的 使用使文章结构紧 凑连贯、条理清楚 。2、审题不全面,忽 略了对青年教师这部 分信息的处理。这一 点是比较大的失误。1)2)3)1) Compared 2) more 3) try to make the classes lively and interesting不足之处: 1、个别地方的表达需 要改进。学生作品2:Opinions are divided on this question.Some students who like the elderly teachers more than the young ones think that the elderly ones are more patient in teaching,more careful in explaining and also have a lot of experience.However, the others have a different opinion. They think the teachers who are young are full of energy. Besides, their teaching is lively and they dare to bring in the new ideas. Well, in my opinion, I like both the elderly teachers and the young ones because from them we both can learn a lot.点评: 亮点: 1、段落清楚,要点齐 全,句式表达比较灵 活,能适当运用复句。 2、过渡词运用也比较 熟练。需要改进的地方:1 )2)3)4)1) prefer the elderly teachers to the young ones 2) with explanations 3) the 去掉 4) The young teachersOne possible version:Opinions are divided on this question. Some students may like elderly teachers teaching because they think elderly teachers have more teaching experience and that they tend to be patient and careful with explanations. However, I prefer to be tau
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