Teacher: STEELrewriting请你根据表格中的提示，以 A Healthy Eating Habit 书面表达noodles, rice, milk, bread, eggsvegetables fruit fish, meatjunk food (不利 于健康的食物)every day8-11 times a week7-9 times a week3-4 times a weekeat least为题写一篇短文。要求： 1.短文必须包括提示中的所有内容 2. 不少于80个词。11一、审题:明确:是什么 (What) ？ 列题纲(outline)1.读要求 (demands) 2.抓中心( grasp the main idea) 3.排结构(beginning-body-ending)noodles, rice, milk, bread, eggsvegetablesfruit fish, meatjunk food (不利于健 康的食物)every day8-11 times a week7-9 times a week3-4 times a weekeat least1.短文必须包括提示中的所有内容。2. 不少于80个词。请你根据表格中的提示，以 A Healthy Eating Habit为题写一篇短文。要求： 二.写作4.Improving the passage(合理润饰 )1.words(字）noodles. vegetablefruitfish, meatjunk foodfood every day8-11 times a week7-9 times a week3-4 times a week eat leastFrequency(频率)Four Steps in Writing2.sentences(扩展成句) 主 - 谓 -宾 (状语） (We) (eathave)food (1).We should eat noodles. every day.(5). We should eat the junk food least. 3.paragraphs(组句谋篇)Eg:Reasons:1.Noodles can give us energy(能量)and heat.every day三、检查找错:1.单句改错 1.We are need a healthy eating habit.2.Because it bad for your health.3.Three meals is very important.4.You eats some noodles.5. We must have a breakfast every day .6. good luck to you.(Str:主+谓+宾)isareG(Str：主+系+表)(Sv：主谓一致)(Sv：主谓一致)(A：冠词)(Cap：大写)Cap 大写字母 capital letter Sp 拼写 spelling SV 主谓一致 subject-verb agreement Str句子结构sentence structure VT 动词时态 verb tense P 标点 punctuation A 冠词 article WW 错词 wrong word Num 数 (=单数 / 复数) number (= singular / plural) 缺成分2.常见错误类型3.改错完善;找出美言交流合作cooperationA .Good sentences(好词好句）1. _2 .3._Fill the blanksA Healthy Eating HabitIts very important for us to have a healthy eating habit . But what is a healthy eating habit? We should eat noodles, rice, bread, eggs and milk every day . They give us heat. There are a lot of vitamins in vegetables and fruit. Scientist suggests we have vegetables eight to eleven times a week. We can eat fruit seven to nine times a week. If we eat too much fish and meat ,we dont feel well . Its enough for us to have fish and meat three to four times a week. We had better eat junk food least. Its bad for our health. If you want to have a good health ,just do like this.美文欣赏v审题，抓点v造句，成文v改错，誉写How to write the expression?写作技巧小结：认真审题，抓住要点。 确定体裁，注意格式。 草拟提纲，理清思路。 语言规范，把握时态。 多用简句，慎用长句。 巧用连词，行文连贯。 拼写正确，书写规范。 全面检查，万无一失。 卷面潦草一定要扣分!v书写规范 卷面整洁HomeworkvRewriting重写v背诵精彩范文祝同学们在中考中取得好成绩!Thank you Thank you for your attention ! for your attention ! Im obliged to you Im obliged to you for your for your criticism !