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图表式作文的几种形式: 一是以表格形式,将统计的数据或被说明的事 物直接用表格形式体现出来,即统计表。Warming upStatistics table【例析】请你根据下表提供的信息 描述近5年人们饮食的变化,并说明 变化的原因.20012002200320042005grain43%42%41%41%40%milk13%14%14.5%14.5%15%meat25%25%26%26.5%27.5%FruitB 表示数据的大小或数量之间的差异的柱状图;C 表示总体内部结构变化的扇形图。Diagram of curves Bar chart Pie chart根据所给图表,用5句话描写近年来看 电影与看电视的人数变化的短文。(a): Number of TV watchers (b): Number of film goersNumber of People (in thousands)AB观察下列图表,根据图示描述该市住房产权的 变化;并说明这些变化对个人和社会产生的 影响;%20406080100199520002005State-owned privateAPercentage of Average Family Expense in 2000BPercentage of Average Family Expense in2005Housing25%other 57%Housing 32%other 46%Food drink 22%Food drink 18%观察下列图表, 1.根据图示描述该市住房产权的变化。2 .分析产生这些变化的原因。3.说明这些变化对个人和社会产生的影响 。%20406080100199920002009State-owned privatel【技巧点拨】l1.读懂柱状图坐标刻线及图例说明与文字,比较 柱状高低和颜色表示内容及数据。l2.学会看趋势、找规律,从整体看图表有何发展 变化,找出特点、规律。l3.引用图表包含信息,使你的文章“由图而发”, 言之有据。lOwnership of Houses in a Big City in Chinal As can be seen from the chart,ownership of houses in a big city in China has changed a lot in the past ten years. In 1999,75 percent of the houses were state-owned. Five years later,the rate of state -owned houses to private ones was 3 to 2. But from then on,the ownership of houses changed rapidly and so far 80 percent of houses have been private.l What caused the changes?There might have been two main reasons. First,from 1999 up to now ,the peoples living standards have been improving. Most of them can afford to buy the houses. Second ,most people do not save a lot of money in the bank for their children as their parents did in the past. They want to have their own home and enjoy life.l Such changes have had a great effect on the development of society. It does good to both the citizens and the government.Good pointsl1.structurel第一段:点明主题,描述图表,l第二段:紧扣主题,根据图表比较分析原 因,论证结论。l第三段:发表议论,提出自己的看法。l2.link words图表式作文写作分三步:第一、开门见山地点明本图表所反映的 主题经常使用的词汇有:table, chart, figure, graph, describe, tell, show, represent 等等。 技巧指导l【常用句式】 l1. As can be seen from the chart,. As is shown in the chart,.l2. The chart shows that about 60 percent of students want to go to college.l3. From the graph/data/results/information above, l4. The graph shows the changes in the number of.over the period from.to.l5. Compared with.,the number of the students of.第二、 分析数据间的主要差异及趋势,然 后描写rise, drop, reduce, increase, decrease, fall, while, but, on the contrary, however, compare. to/ with., in contrast to, as.as, the same as, similar to, different from, difference between, among, more than, less than等等。第三、 归纳总结或发表评论。in a word, in short, generally speaking, Its clear from the chart that., We can draw the conclusion that., We can learn/know.等等。 【例析】请你根据下表提供的信息 描述近5年人们饮食的变化,并说明 变化的原因.分析:本 统计表描述 中国人民从 2001年至 2005年饮 食结构的变 化。 20012002200320042005grain43%42%41%41%40%milk13%14%14.5%14.5%15%meat25%25%26%26.5%27.5%FruitB. 电视观众人数越来越多(原因:方便、经济、选择范围);C. 然而还是有人喜欢看电影(原因:气氛、娱乐)。参考词汇: decrease v. 下降 atmosphere n. 氛围 entertainment n. 娱乐 film goer/TV watcher电影/电视观众(a): Number of TV watchers (b): Number of film goersNumber of People (in thousands)AB参考范文:From the table, we can see that film is giving way to TV in our city. For example, in 1995, there were less than 10 thousand TV watchers, more than 80 thousand film goers, while in 2005, we had about 1 million TV watchers but only about 10 thousand film goers. The number of film goers is decreasing and that of TV watchers is increasing. Televisions are quite common nowadays and so more and more people turn to TV because it is convenient and cheap and watchers have a wide range of programs for them to choose from. At the same time, there are still some people who prefer films because they like the atmosphere in the cinema as well as the entertainment 飞让文采扬达表面书语意要合情合理,过渡自然 语句要有简有繁,随“意”而安 语法要结构正确,无懈可击语言要地道流畅,书写规范
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