1翻译政府工作报告中政策术语 的几点体会2讨论要点v深入解读 v准确表达 v灵活变通3深入解读：小心陷阱v例一 原文：鼓励承接国际服务外包业务 初译：to participate proactively in outsourcing of international services 问题：到底是 “国际服务”的业务被外 包，还是来自国际上的外包服务业务？4深入解读：小心陷阱（续） v例二 原文：保持速度与结构、质量、效益相统一 初译：align speed with structure, quality and efficiency （保持A与B、C、D相统一） 改译：maintain momentum while pursuing structural optimization, quality and efficiency at the same time （保持速度A与B、C、D 相统一）5深入解读：参考上下文v例 原文：坚持“引进来”与“走出去”相结合，不断扩大 对内对外开放（第二部分第八小节标题） 初译：Striking a good balance between “Bringing In” and “Going Out” strategies, 改译：Maintaining a balance between inbound and outbound investment, 终译：Maintaining a two-way flow of inbound and outbound business activity, and opening Shanghai wider to the rest of the country and the world 6深入解读：听话要听音 v例一 原文：大力实施品牌战略，形成更多 拥有自主知识产权的核心技术和知名品 牌。 初译： to implement the branding strategy with an aim to .7深入解读：听话要听音（续） v讨论 ：问题一：我们有品牌了吗？ 贴牌生产，e.g. 服装 以市场换技术，e.g. 汽车 问题二：什么是“品牌战略”？ 理解1怎么打品牌 理解2企业发展靠品牌 8深入解读：听话要听音（续） v修改 改译：Meanwhile, we must make strenuous efforts in marketing and branding with an eye to developing more proprietary core technologies and strong brands. 或者：to develop/formulate marketing and branding strategies; to acquire/build up marketing and branding capabilities 9深入解读：听话要听音（续） v例二 原文：信息产品制造业要强化研发设计，进一步完善产 业链，加快发展集成电路、新型元器件、新一代移动 通信等重点产业。 或者：In the area of ICT products manufacturing, we stress the stronger capacities of research, development and design as well as improved industrial chain 改译： and build up competencies across the whole value chain . 10深入解读：勤做背景调研 v例一 原文：加快建立以企业为主体的技术创新体系。坚持“ 市抓实力、区县抓活力、企业抓动力”，引导和鼓励 企业增加研发投入，加强企业技术中心建设，切实增 强企业自主创新能力。 初译：We induce and encourage business to increase their investment in Research and Development (R&D), 改译：. We will encourage and incentivize increased corporate R&D investment, .11深入解读：勤做背景调研（续） v 怎么个“引导”法？国家经济贸易委员会、国家税务总局文件、海关总署关于印发鼓 励和支持大型企业和企业集团建立技术中心暂行办法的通知 国经 贸1993261号四、通过审定的技术中心可以享受的优惠政策 1进口用于开发新技术、国内不能生产供应的仪器、仪表、化学试剂和技术 资料按原国务院生产办、财政部、人民银行、国家税务局、海关总署国生 技改199292号文的规定，免征关税和进口环节的增值税； 2中试产品定期减免所得税。 3技术中心的科技设施建设投资按零税率计征投资方向调节税，其具体范围 比照固定资产投资方向调节税科学类税目注释执行。来源：北京信息网http:/www.ctibj.com.cn/assembly/action/browsePage.do?channelID=1102299625224&contentID=1109742000573 12深入解读：勤做背景调研（续） v例二 原文：实施积极的就业政策，加大了政府扶持创业和就 业援助的力度，新增了大量就业岗位，一大批就业困 难群众重新走上了工作岗位。 初译：The government implemented active employment policies, intensifying efforts to support entrepreneurship and assist people in seeking jobs. Many new jobs were created to help a large number of people having difficulties in finding jobs get reemployed. 改译：Employment Assistance Program13讨论要点v深入解读 v准确表达 v灵活变通14准确表达：咬文嚼字 v例一：虚词 原文：切实减轻中小学生过重课业负担 初译: reduce the excessive workload of primary and secondary school students. 思考：这些“过重课业负担”该不该有？是“ 属于”学生们的还是不合理地强加给他们的 ？ 改译： reducing the excessive workloads primary and secondary school students face 15准确表达：咬文嚼字（续） v例二：实词 倡导全社会对老年人的尊敬和精神关爱 to advocate respect and mental care for the elderly to promote love and respect for the elderly 能源安全 Safe energy supply Energy security16准确表达：咬文嚼字（续） v例三：搭配 原文：基本完成乡镇机构、农村义务教育和乡镇财 政管理体制等改革任务 初译: accomplish the reform of institutions, compulsory education system and the financial and taxation system at town and township level. (the reforms of A, B and C at 乡镇 level) 改译： complete our reforms targeting town and township-level financial and taxation systems and institutions and the rural compulsory education system. (the reforms of 乡镇level A1 and A2 and B)17准确表达：把握分寸 v例一 原文：鼓励承接国际服务外包业务 初译：to participate proactively in outsourcing of international services 改译：to make strong inroads into the international services outsourcing market 建议: to encourage Chinese/local companies to seek more service business outsourced by international clients (the worlds office?)18准确表达：把握分寸（续） v例二 原文：畅通群众诉求渠道，引导群众通过理性合法形式 表达利益要求。 初译：More channels will be open to receive public complaints, so as to guide the public to voice their opinions in a rational and legal way. 改译：More channels will be opened for public to voice their interests and demands in a rational and lawful manner. 19准确表达：运用术语 v例一 原文：健全信息安全保障体系，加强信息安全关键技术 研发，确保基础通信网络和重要信息系统的安全。 初译： and make sure of the safety of basic communication network and important information systems. 改译： ensure the security of basic telecommunication networks and mission-critical information systems.20准确表达：运用术语（续）v例二 原文：完善人才服务体系，健全人才流动机制 和激励机制, 初译： institution that allows for the flow of human capital 改译： facilitate healthy movement between jobs 终译： facilitate job mobility 21准确表达：受众意识 v例 原文：充分发挥三级医院在疑难杂症诊疗和教学、科研 方面的优势，加强医学重点学科建设， 初译：We will leverage on hospitals at municipal, district and community levels 改译：Capitalizing on the advantages of tier 3 hospitals 终译：Capitalizing on the strengths of top-level hospitals in diagnosing and treating difficult and complex cases as well as teaching and research, 22讨论要点v深入解读 v准确表达 v灵活变通23灵活变通 v例一：