2012-2013高三英语一轮复习书 面表达系列训练（五B）科学实验 M5Book1（外研版）【题目要求】假如今天在物理老师的帮助下，你们做了 一个有趣的实验。请根据以下的实验步骤，用 英语写一篇100字左右的短文。1.准备一支蜡烛、一个比蜡烛稍高一些玻璃杯、一个盆和一些水；2.首先将蜡烛置于盆底，并向盆中倒入一些水；3.然后点燃蜡烛，将玻璃杯罩在蜡烛上；4.当蜡烛熄灭后，看到玻璃杯中水面高于盆中水面。 参考词汇：盆basin _ _一 构思谋篇科学实验1.实验准备Before we started, we prepared 2.实验步骤First， we let the candle 3.实验结果we were shocked to see 二 关键词语在 帮助下 With the help of 点燃蜡烛 Light a candle 用某物把某物盖住 Cover sth with sth充满空气 Be full of air 熄灭 Go out 水面 Water level三连词成句1.今天在物理老师的帮助下，我们在课堂上做了一个有趣的实验。2.我们点燃蜡烛，并将充满空气的玻璃杯照在蜡烛上。3.看到玻璃杯中的水面高于盆中的水面，我们很震惊。参考译文：1.今天在物理老师的帮助下，我们在课堂上做了一个有趣的实验。Today, with the help of our physics teacher, we did an interesting experiment in class. 2.我们点燃蜡烛，并将充满空气的玻璃杯照在蜡烛上。We lit the candle and covered it with the glass which was full of air.3.看到玻璃杯中的水面高于盆中的水面，我们很震惊。We were shocked to see that the water level was higher than that in the basin.四 连句成篇Today, (1)with the help of our physics teacher, we did an interesting experiment in class. Before we started, we prepared a candle , a glass (2)that is a little higher than the candle , a basin and some water .First , we (3)let the candle stand (4)in the bottom of the basin, and then put some water in it. Then , We lit the candle and (5)covered it with the glass (6)which was full of air. We waited (7)until the candle went out. We were shocked to see (8)that the water level was higher than that in the basin. (9)What an amazing lesson we learnt!【亮点点评】 亮点一：本文行文自然流畅，实验介绍内容完整，层次清晰，逻辑合理，能够让人通过文章联想到现实操作。 亮点二：本文运用了大量高级短语和固定结构，使表达充 实而丰满。例如(1)with the help of (3)let the candle stand (4)in the bottom of (5)cover it with the glass等 亮点三：巧妙地运用了较多从句结构，提高了文章的整体水平，如(2)that 引导的定语从句、(6)which引导的定语从句、(7)until 引导的时间状语从句、(8)that引导的宾语从句等。而且末尾以(9)这样的感叹句结尾， 给文章增添了浓厚的感情色彩。