Welcome to our class!,Welcome to our class!,Module 5 Shopping Unit 3 Writing,Lets guess!,What are they doing?,Do you like shopping?,How to shop,teleshopping,online shopping,store shopping,TV shopping,Wechat shopping,Pre-writing,网上购物,There are many new ways of shopping, and online shopping is one of them.,You can buy almost everything on the Internet.,几乎；差不多,What can you buy?,shirt coat pants skirt dress socks ,biscuit lemon strawberry chocolate vegetables ,pencil book school bag desk chair bike car ,clothes,food,other things,Online shopping,Online shopping has several advantages.,有利条件；优势,low prices,famous brands,good service,informatization,fast post,many kinds of products,You choose something and pay for it. Then you receive it a few days by post. Its quick and easy.,支付,收到；接到,邮寄,How to shop online?,You can shop at any time. The shops are always open.,在任何时候；随时,When can you shop online?,Online shopping usually takes less time.,花费更少时间,Online shopping also has a lot of disadvantages.,不利条件；缺点,We cant see things first when shopping online.,Cant touch,Cant try it on,Many people like going out and shopping with friends. Online shopping is less fun.,Paying over the Internet isnt always safe.,安全的,漏洞,online shopping,advantages,disadvantages,1. quick 2. easy 3. can buy almost everything 4.compare the prices 5. can shop at any time,1. cant see /touch things or try it on first. 2. not safe to pay over the Internet 3. less fun,Conclusion,Tips: Online shopping is.We can/cant.,Lets talk!,quick easy,can shop at any time,can buy almost everything,Online shopping is,quick and easy. We can buy almost everything and shop at any time.,1,3,2,Lets talk!,cant see things first,not safe to pay over the Internet,less fun,Online shopping is,less fun and not safe to pay over. And we cant see things first.,1,3,2,While-writing,Writing现在网上购物已经变得越来越流行，网上购物给人们的生活带来了很多好处，但也存在着一些不足。请你结合你的经验写一篇短文，谈谈网上购物的优点与缺点。作文要求： 1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。 2. 语句连贯，字数80词左右。短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数内。,Shopping online becomes more and more popular. _,Shopping online becomes more and more popular. _ _ _ _,评价或者建议,disadvantages,advantages,Body正文,Tips,Shopping online is fun/boring. We should be careful when shopping online. ,cant see things first not safe ,Ending,Writing Time,first: quick second: easy third: ,使用情况,You choose something and pay for it. Then you receive it a few days later.,but,Beginning,查（check by yourself）,Read your passage aloud, then check it by yourself.,1.要点齐了吗？ 2.句子结构对了吗？ 3.句子连贯吗？ 4.单词都写对了吗？ 5.有没错误的语法？ 6.书写整洁吗？,Post-writing,Beginning 开头部分,Ending,Body 正文,（已给出）,（满分2分）,（满分9分）,其他，（卷面书写，单词拼写及语法）酌情加减分（1分）,1. 网购使用情况。（3分） 2. 优点。（3点，1个点1分，共3分） 3. 缺点。（3点，1个点1分，共3分）,作文自评，按照每点的具体分值给自己的作文评分。（满分15分）,作文展评，小组讨论评分，作文满分15分,Beginning 开头部分,Body 正文,Beginning 开头部分,Ending,Body 正文,Beginning 开头部分,Post-writing (10 minutes),Ending,Body 正文,Beginning 开头部分,3. 评价与建议。 （3分）,第一档：12-15分 内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，几乎没有语言错误。 第二档：11-12分 内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，但有少量语言错误。 第三档：8-10分 内容涵盖大部分要点，表达尚清楚 ,但有一些语言错误。（以上为及格线） 第四档：4-7分 内容涵盖部分要点，写出少量句子，但表达不连贯，语言错误较多。 第五档：0-3分 只写出个别单词，不成句子，表达不清楚。,评分档次和要求：,Show your passage!,An example for you!,Shopping online becomes more and more popular. We just need to choose something on the Internet and pay for it. Then we can receive it a few days later. Online shopping has several advantages. First, its quick and easy. Second, we can compare the prices . Third, we can buy almost everything and shop at anytime. But it also has a lot of disadvantages. For some people, online shopping is less fun and its not safe to pay over. And we cant see things first. All in all, online shopping is useful but we should be careful when shopping online.,Summary,1. Ways of shopping:online shopping; chat on Wechat. 2.The advantages and disadvantages of online shopping. 3.Write a passage to describe the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping.,Homework,Please finish your passage on the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping.,