高考英语基础写作 复习系列,图表类说明文,下图为某城市近年每百人中手机用户增长示意图。根据所给图表，简要描述某城市近年每百人中手机用户增长情况，并试分析其增长原因。,审题：文字信息+图表数据 人称: 时态: 要点:,第三人称,一般过去时 现在完成时,概述增长现象 具体数据变化 原因,outline:introduction: facts ：reasons： conclusion：,近年越来越多的人使用手机,描述1997-2004数据增长的对比、差异,科技，收入，方便联系,你的观点,1.The graph/chart/table above shows/describes/ reflects 2. From the above graph/chart, it can be seen that./we can see that . 3.As is shown in the graph, . 4.According to the table/chart /graph, ,第一步：,图表类说明文的写作步骤,开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题, 即Introduction,常用句型：,According to the above chart, we know more and more people have owned mobile phones in recent years.,99 00 01 02 03 04 05 06 07 08 09,As can be seen from the graph, great changes in car ownership have taken place in China in the past ten years.,某城市近年每百人中手机用户增长示意图。,ownership,第二步：分析数据间的主要差异及变化趋势，抓重点抓特征抓规律，不能事无巨细，一一列出. 主体部分往往包含 facts and reasons,（ Facts）一，描述变化趋势 1.The number of private cars increased /rose suddenly/rapidly/sharply/dramatically(急剧）/considerably（大量）/slowly/gradually/slightly（轻微） (from to) 2.The number of private cars increased by 10% in 1999, reaching 20000. 3.The number dropped/decreased/declined/went down slightly from 38%in 2005 to 31% in 2006 4.The number remained steady/stable/constant betweenand从到期间，数量保持稳定！,(facts) 二，描述数据差异 1 The number of people having cars accounts for /makes up 60% 2.On the top of the list is,which accounts for 60%. 占比重高的是，占60%。 3.At the bottom is ， making up 20%. 占最低比重的是，占20%。 4.A is second to B. A仅次于B。 5.A is ranked/rated first, followed by B at 30% and C at 25%. A占的比重最高，紧随其后的是占30%的B和占25%的C 6.The number of doubled compared with that of last year 7. The number ofis four times as big as 8. The number of is almost the same as ,某城市近年每百人中手机用户增长示意图。根据所给图表，简要描述某城市近年每百人中手机用户增长情况，并分析其增长原因。,In 1997, only ten people in a hundred had mobile phones in the city In 1999, the number doubled , reaching 20 in 100. The people owning mobile phones in 2001 were 5 times as many as those in 1997. Three years later, the number of the citizens owning the magic tools increased rapidly, making up 80 percent .,Reasons: 1. The reason why/foris that 2. It is because /because of that 3. We may consider the change as a result of. 4.is the key factor (因素) contributing to 5.The reasons why .are as follows. / There are plenty of reasons for the change. Firstly, secondly, Thirdly.,3.ReasonsThere are some reasons for the rise in the number of people with mobile phones. Firstly, the technology of making mobile phones is changing rapidly, which leads to the drop in the prices. Secondly, peoples income has been increasing . As a consequence, they have more options. Thirdly, being useful in daily life, mobile phones make peoples communication easy and convenient .,1.In a word,/ In short,/In conclusion, /In summary, we can say /conclude/predict that 2.As far as Im concerned,/ As for me,/ For my part,/ From my point of view,/ in my opinion, I think it necessary to 3. From what has been discussed above, we can draw a conclusion/ it can be concluded (得出结论）that 第三步 总结归纳 From what has been disscussed above, it can be estimated that the number of the mobile phone holders will reach a new height with the further advance of science and technology.,第三步：,归纳总结或发表评论。,第一步 点明主题 According to the above chart, we know more and more people have mobile phones in recent years. 第二步 阐明图表数据 说明原因In 1997, only ten people in a hundred had mobile phones in some city. In 1999, the number doubled , reaching 20 in 100. The people owning mobile phones in 2001 were 5 times as many as those in 1997.Three years later, 80 percent of the citizens had the magic tools. There are some reasons for the rise in the number of people with mobile phones. Firstly, the technology of making mobile phones is changing rapidly, which leads to the drop in the prices. Secondly, peoples income has been increasing . As a consequence, they have more options. Thirdly, being useful in daily life, mobile phones make peoples communication easy and convenient . 第三步 总结归纳 From what has been discussed above, it can be estimated(估计）that the number of the mobile phone holders will reach a new height with the further advance of science and technology.,What Jobs Do College Students Want to Do 目前学生择业状况 男女学生就业选择的区别 我的观点,What Jobs Do College Students Want to DoIt goes without saying that college students have a clear idea about their future occupation. Boys are to some extend different from girls in their choice .As can be seen from the picture, the most striking contrast is in the occupation of teaching: 45% of girls students would like to do the job. What boys like to do most is to become managers (40%) and the second largest group is to be businessmen (30%). Girls also like to pursue these two professions, with a percentage of 15% and 25% respectively choosing these two jobs. 15% of boys want to become lawyers while 10% of girls preferring this professions.It can be easily proved that teaching is preferred by females as it provides a more regular and purer life. Womens patience also fits the job well. Boys consider working as scientist, managers, businessmen and lawyers more demanding and stimulating. It is true that more boys want to show their talents in these fields. One thing worthy of note is that the number of girls wanting to do business is not small. This shows that girls also want to do the challenging and exciting jobs.Nevertheless, it can be easily proved that no matter what job you will chose, it will be more challenge. As for me, I like science and with the development of economy and the progress of society. Science and technology will become more and more important. So I will choose scientist as my career.,