1,如何博取作文高分,Designed by Mr Greatman Shen,How To Write A High-score Composition,2,评分标准,3,根据评分标准，为博取高分，在要点俱到的前提下，尚应注意如下几个,遣词：高级、恰当 造句：灵活、多变 谋篇：连贯、紧凑,行文原则,4,1. 多实少虚 :,nice,2. 短语优先：,I cannot bear it. I want it.,generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospitable,I cannot put up with it. I am looking forward to it.,3. 弃简取繁:,We all have the same chance. There are more opponents.,possess,opportunity,exist,5,学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。,1. Its very dangerous for the students to go through the traffic.,2. Students are risking their lives when threading their way through cars.,社会应加强对学生的交通安全教育。,1. The students should be taught more about the traffic safety.,2. And also it is of great use to strengthen the safety education over the students.,6,1.We all think he is a great man. 2. As a result the plan was a failure. 3. She went there in order to study music. 4. In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms.,We all him.,The plan to be a failure.,She went there studying music.,Our school twentysix classrooms.,think highly of,turned out,for the purpose of,is made up of,7,5. You can find my house easily.6. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.7. Suddenly I thought out a good idea.,Youll finding my house.,A good idea to me.,the good weather, our journey was comfortable.,have no trouble,A good idea suddenly me.,Thanks to,occurred,struck,8,运用多种语法结构，句式灵活多变，可以使文章增色不少自然得分就高！,9,1. When he arrives, please give me an e-mail. （使用V-ing形式）2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so manythings.（使用名词性从句）3. He came in and there was a baby in his arms.(用with结构), please give me an e-mail.,is that the little girl knows so many things.,On his arriving,What surprises him,He came in,with a baby in his arms.,10,4.(由于不知道他的电话，他没法跟Mary联系)(用非谓语） 5. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型) 6. Tom and Mary like singing songs.( 使用倒装）,It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that,，he cant get in touch with Tom.,Not knowing his telephone number,he knew what had happened.,Tom likes singing songs, Mary.,so does,11,7. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词)8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.（使用句型结构）9. Because the weather is fine, many people went to climb the Western hill. （使用独立主格结构）,by many students, she walked out of the lab., a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.,he spoke, excited he felt.,Followed,The more the more,The weather being fine,12,soon, immediately, suddenly, in front of, next to, on one hand, on the other hand, however, though, otherwise, thanks to, as a result (of), so long as, on condition that, even if / though, whats more, besides, to make the matter worse, Im afraid, you know, As we all know,一篇好的书面表达，还应该行文连贯流畅，具有“逻辑美”。使用恰当连接词，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑，使文章更为地道，更具“英语味”。记得使用恰当的连接词，如:,13,1. This village is very small. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 .,This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 .,2. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it.,All the school-age children can study here. Whats more, they enjoy free education in it.,14,Yesterday, a policeman stopped a car - Honda at the corner of the street, because it nearly knocked down a boy who was riding a two-wheel bicycle on the sidewalk.,3. Yesterday, there was a policeman in the street. He stopped a car. The car was at the corner. It looked like a Honda. There was a boy on the sidewalk. He was riding his bicycle. The bicycle was a two-wheeler. The car nearly knocked down the boy.,15,4. Last Sunday, two Young Pioneers were on their way to the Childrens Palace. They saw a box fall off a passing truck. They shouted “stop” to the driver at the top of their voice.,Last Sunday, two Young Pioneers were on their way to the Childrens Palace when they saw a box fall off a passing truck. Without delay, they shouted “stop” to the driver at the top of their voice.,16,语意要合情合理，过渡自然,语句要有简有繁，随“意”而安,语法要结构正确，无懈可击,语言要地道流畅，书写规范,17,越是迫近关键时刻，越是要沉着冷静、勇往直前。,预祝同学们高考大捷！,