Lets watch a video together!,Whats the video about?,Its about travelling!,Choose the best group!,Guessing games,Look at the pictures and guess where it is.,Pairs,Guessing games,New York,Guessing games,Cairo,Guessing games,London,Guessing games,Beijing,Guessing games,Huizhou,Do you know any famous places in these cities?,London,London Eye,House of Parliament,Tower of London,National Gallery,Big Ben,The Tower Bridge,Buckingham Palace,Beijing,DAD (Dashanzi Art District) 798艺术区,the Great Wall 长城,Summer Palace 颐和园,the Palace Museum 故宫博物院,Temple of Heaven 天坛,Happy Valley 欢乐谷,Paris,Louvre Museum 卢浮宫,Champs-Elyses 香榭丽舍大道,Eiffel Tower 埃菲尔铁塔,Arc de Triomphe 凯旋门,Huizhou,Honghua Lake,Xunliao Bay,Mount Luofu,West Lake,I have been to LondonLondon is in the south of England. Its the capital of England.There are a lot of interesting places to visit in London. I have visited the BigBen and London Eye. I have also seen the Buckingham Palace. I have eaten fish and chips in a resturant. It tasted delicious. I can speak English so I have talked to people in English.London is an amazing city. I have had a wonderful time there.,Read the passage and fill in the blanks.,Its in the south of England,Big Ben,London Eye and Buckingham Palace,Fish and chips,Talked to people in English,had a wonderful time,Work in pairs. Talk about a travelling experience.You can use the form to help you.,如今，旅行已经成为人们生活中一个重要的部分，同学们也有许多旅行的经历。请以 I have been to _为题，介绍一次游览经历。（80词左右） 要求包括： 1.简单介绍这座城市。 2.介绍在这座游历经历。 3.你对于这次旅行经历的感受。,下笔前考虑几个问题：1.人称2. 时态 3.文章结构,第一人称,一般过去时；现在完成时,beginning,body,ending,Step 1 审题:,1.简单介绍这座城市。 Where is ?is _of Descibe this city.,Step 2:,Step 2:,2.介绍在这座城市的游览经历。What famous places in . have you visited? What food have you eaten? What else have you done in .?,Lets take Londonas an example,London,London Eye,House of Parliament,Tower of London,National Gallery,Big Ben,The Tower Bridge,Buckingham Palace,London,have afternoon tea,eat fish and chips,talk to people in English,I have visited_ I have seen _. I have had _. I have _.,小试牛刀,the Big Ben and London Eye.,the Buckingham Palace.,fish and chips,talked to people in English,3. 你对于这次旅游经历的感受。你对这座城市的感受。. is a very wonderful city.is one of the most beautiful cities in the world. 你的体会。I really had a good time in I really enjoyed myself in ,Step 2:,Step3 Outline：,Beginning,简单介绍城市：, is ,Body,旅途中的游览经历： I have visited_. I have seen _. I have had_. I have _.,Ending,你的感受： I really _ in ,I have been to with my parents._._. _._.I hope to go there again.,I have been to _,作文的评价标准: 1. 要点是否完整, 要点不全要扣分; 2. 过渡是否自然, 是否用到了表转折、表递进、表选择等等的过渡语； 3. 语法是否正确; 4. 用词用句是否有亮点; 5. 书写是否工整.,show time!,I have been to LondonLondon is in the south of England. Its the capital of England.There are a lot of interesting places to visit in London. I have visited Big Ben and London Eye.They are very famous. I have also seen the Buckingham Palace. I have eaten fish and chips in a resturant. It tasted delicious. I can speak English so I have talked to people in English.London is an amazing city. I have had a wonderful time there.,example,How to polish your writing? 如何使文章更出色？1. 合理利用连接词：not only.but also, because, so, however, but , with, or example1:原句：I have visited the Big Ben and London Eye.I have visited not only the Big Ben but also London Eye.,Example 2:原句：I have talked to people in English.I can speak a little English, so I have talked to People in English.,2. 写好过渡句。For example:1.简单介绍伦敦这座城市。2.介绍在伦敦的游览经历。介绍完伦敦，要接着写在伦敦的游览经历之前，需要过渡句。There are a lot of interesting places to visit in London.,Summary,How to write a composition about a travlling experience? *Read the demands carefully. Think before you write. * Try to polish your writing while you are correcting it. *Make sure you have neat and beautiful handwriting.,1.Correct the mistakes in your writting. 2. Review some writing skills.,Homework,Thank you!,