浙江高考写作浙江高考写作“读读后后续续写写”点津与点津与练习练习一、一、“读读后后续续写写”样题样题呈呈现现1. 样题样题呈呈现现阅读阅读下面短文，根据所下面短文，根据所给给情情节进节进行行续续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。写，使之构成一个完整的故事。A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. As he walked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank, he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car. He tried again and again but couldnt get the car moving. Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried. Arthur stopped and asked, “It looks like youve got a problem,” Arthur said.“Im afraid so. Im in a big hurry and I cant start my car.”“Is there something I can do to help?” Arthur asked. The young man looked at the two suitcases in the back seat and then said, “Thanks. If youre sure it wouldnt be too much trouble, you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi.”“No trouble at all. Id be glad to help.”The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat. After placing it on the ground, he turned to get the other one. Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking, he heard the long loud noise of an alarm.It was from the bank. There had been a robbery (抢劫抢劫)!Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before. Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions. Cars stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank. People asked each other, “What happened?” But everyone had a different answer.Arthur, still carrying the suitcase, turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him.She looked at the suitcase and then at him. Arthur was surprised. “Why is she looking at me like that?” he thought. “The suitcase! She thinks Im the bank thief!”Arthur looked around at the crowd of people. He became frightened, and without another thought, he started to run.注意：注意：1. 所所续续写短文的写短文的词词数数应为应为 150 左右；左右；2. 应应使用使用 5 个以上短文中个以上短文中标标有下划有下划线线的关的关键词语键词语； ；13. 续续写部分分写部分分为为两段，每段的开两段，每段的开头语头语已已为为你写好；你写好；4. 续续写完成后，写完成后，请请用下划用下划线标线标出你所使用的关出你所使用的关键词语键词语。 。Paragraph 1:AsAs hehe waswas running,running, ArthurArthur heardheard thethe youngyoung manman shoutingshouting behind,behind, “Stop,“Stop, stop!”stop!”_Paragraph 2:TheThe taxitaxi stoppedstopped in in frontfront of of thethe PolicePolice StationStation andand Arthur.Arthur._2. 参考答案参考答案Keys (possible answers)【 【Possible version 1】AsAs hehe waswas running,running, ArthurArthur heardheard thethe youngyoung manman behindbehind himhim shouting,shouting, “Stop,“Stop, stop!”stop!” And at that same moment, Arthur suddenly realized that the young man might be the bank robber. So, Arthur didnt stop but continued to run until he saw a taxi. He stopped it, jumped in with one of the suitcases, and said to the driver, “Go to the police station, please. The man shouting behind me is the bank thief! The taxi raced away as fast as the wind.TheThe taxitaxi stoppedstopped in in frontfront of of thethe policepolice station,station, andand ArthurArthur told the police what had happened. Obviously, the police already knew about the robbery. They opened the suitcase and there was a large sum of money inside, as Arthur had expected. Then the police asked Arthur to describe the young man and the other suitcase. Later, with this information, the police caught the robber. The police and the bank both thanked Arthur. People were happy that the robber was caught.【 【Possible version 2】AsAs hehe waswas running,running, ArthurArthur heardheard thethe youngyoung manman behindbehind himhim shouting,shouting, “Stop,“Stop, stop!”stop!” Thinking about the way the young man had behaved, he realized the young man might be the bank robber. So, Arthur ran fast and stopped a taxi. The moment he got into the taxi, he told the driver the man shouting behind him was the bank thief and asked him to drive to the nearest police station. The driver did as Arthur asked and drove away.TheThe taxitaxi stoppedstopped in in frontfront of of thethe policepolice station,station, andand ArthurArthur thanked the driver and went inside. Just as Arthur was describing what had happened on Park Avenue and reporting the young man to the police, he heard a voice outside: “Help! Help!” To Arthurs surprise, it was the young man. He had followed Arthur in another taxi. It turned out that the young man was innocent, and inside the suitcases was just some clothing. Arthur felt embarrassed, but the policemen thanked him anyway.3. 答案点答案点拨拨原文所原文所给给关关键词键词分分类为类为： ：地点：地点：Park Avenue，the bank2人物：人物：The young man，people，the bank thief事件：事件：suitcases， ，in the back seat，loud noise of an alarm，robbery，the shouts在在续续写写时时，除了注意原文，除了注意原文给给出的关出的关键词键词， ，还还需要注意以下需要注意以下线线索：索：1. Why did the young man look worried?2. What happened? But everyone had a different answer.3. Arthur beca