技法10 应用文写作之建议信, 写作点拨 建议信是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。建议信可能是写给个人，也可能是写给某个组织或机构。信的内容要包括写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”，通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或to begin/start with, then, later, last but not least等依次陈述建议，具体为：,返回目录,技法10 应用文写作之建议信,第一段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。第二段：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体的建议或忠告。注意千万不要让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是提建议。第三段：对提出的建议进行总结。要注意有礼貌，使读者容易接受。,返回目录,技法10 应用文写作之建议信, 词句模板 1段首常用语： (1)I am writing to express my views concerning (2)You have asked for my advice aboutand I will try to make some suggestions. 2表达“建议”常用语： (1)I think the most suitablefor you is (2)I would like to suggest that (3)Youd better/Its better to (4)As far as I am concerned/In my opinion,返回目录,技法10 应用文写作之建议信,(5)For one thing， for another (6)If I were you, I would (7)It seems to me that you could 3段尾常用语： (1)I think it would be more beneficial if you could (2)I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration. (3)I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.,返回目录,技法10 应用文写作之建议信,(4)I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. (5)I will be ready for further discussing this matter into details. 4建议信格式模板： Dear _，I am _Your collection of suggestions on _ is _. As is known to all, _. My suggestions are as follows：First, _(People can _)Second，_. (To make economic profits, _),返回目录,技法10 应用文写作之建议信,Third, _(As many of them _)I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you into further details.(Or: Your kind consideration of my suggestions will be highly appreciated.)Good luck with your _(祝愿) Yours sincerely， Li Ming,返回目录,【活学活用】 在紧张的高三备考阶段，英语老师为了提高复习效率，广泛征求学生意见。假如你叫张华，请根据以下提示，给英语老师写封信，表达你们的需求和建议。 适当放慢进度，留出思考时间 反复训练重要、易错知识点 指导方法 减少作业量以保证质量 给予更多鼓励,返回目录,技法10 应用文写作之建议信,注意：1.根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯； 2要准确使用语法和词汇且使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思； 3词数：120150。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr Wang, Were so pleased that you are willing to share our views. In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation._,返回目录,技法10 应用文写作之建议信,解析 One possible version： Dear Mr Wang,Were so pleased that you are willing to share our views.In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation. As you know, we didnt learn well enough in the first two years, so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time to think for ourselves. As for those important points which also make us confused, would you please give us more practice in case we forget?,返回目录,技法10 应用文写作之建议信,Meanwhile, we need your instructions, for example, in how to write in natural English. I still have another request: assign us less homework in order that we can do it more efficiently.By the way, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on our study. We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time. Yours， Zhang Hua,返回目录,技法10 应用文写作之建议信,路漫漫其修道远，吾将上下而求索。屈原 读不在三更五鼓，功只怕一曝十寒。郭沫若 学习必须与实干相结合。泰戈尔 学而时习之，不亦说乎？孔子 鸟欲高飞先振翅，人求上进先读书。李苦禅 求学的三个条件是：多观察、多吃苦、多研究。加菲劳 学习从来无捷径，循序渐进登高峰。高永祚 活着就要学习，学习不是为了活着。培根 立志宜思真品格，读书须尽苦功夫。阮元 读书是易事，思索是难事，但两者缺一，便全无用处。富兰克林,精品课件！,