大学英语四级作文精讲,Frequent Questions,6.想练习写作，但写出来的作文也不知道是对是错，怎么进行自我检查呢?,脑子里想好中文的意思，再把它翻译成英文，这样的思路对吗?,2.常常想不起想用的一个词的英语说法，该如何解决?,3.文章中长句越多越好，复合句越多越好，这样的想法对吗?,4.不知从何处着手复习写作，提起笔来不知道怎么写，怎么办?,5.背历年范文有用吗?背范文要全文一字不落地背下来吗,7.最近作文的题型越来越活，能指点一下应该多注意哪些类型的文章呢?,样卷结构、各部分答题时间和所用答题卡,考试时间安排,8:50-9:00 收音机调试，发答题卡 9:00-9:30 作文 （30 min) 9:30 发试题册 9:30-9:45 快速阅读 (15 min) 9:45-10:00 收答题卡一（作文、快速阅读）最后调试试音，准备听力（预览选项） 10:00-10:35 听力 （35 min) 注题目前没有指令 10:35-11:30 选词填空、仔细阅读、完形填空 11:30 翻译 （5 min) 11:35 全体起立，收答题卡二和试题册,1、评分原则 （1）CET作文采用总体评分(Global Scoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(Reward Scores), 而不是按语言点的错误数量扣分。 （2）从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而恰当地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否会造成理解上的障碍。 （3）避免趋中倾向，该给高分的给高分，包括满分; 该给低分的给低分，包括0分。,大学四级考试写作的评分依据,2、评分标准 本题满分为15分。标准共五等：2分、5分、8分、11分和14分。 阅卷人员根据阅卷，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数（如8分） 相似，即定为该分数（即8分），若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数， 则可加一分（即9分）或减一分（即7分），但不得加或减半分。 2分-条理不清, 思路紊乱, 语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分-基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重语言错误。 8分-基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 11分-切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分-切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错误。 注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或者只有几个孤立的词而无法 表达思想，则给0分。,大学四级考试写作的评分依据文章切切题，条理清楚，语言准确和字数符合要求所谓切题就是看你写的作文跑不跑题。 所谓条理是每一段的议论的正反清楚，描述的时间正确。 语言准确要求作文的语法词汇使用正确，符合英语表达习惯。 四级作文的字数要求不少于120字。,字数不足应酌情扣分：,如题目中给出主题句、起始句、结束句，均不得计入所写字数。 只写一段者：0 4分; 只写两段者：0 9分。(指规定三段的作文),为了便于阅卷人员掌握评分标准, 各档作文分相当于 百分制的得分，列表如下，称为得分率，其中9分的 得分率为60分（相当于百分制的60分）。,历年四级写作题目一览,一、写作,历年真题1995.01-论说文：Can Money Buy Happiness?1995.06-说明文：Advantages of a Job Interview1996.01-说明文：The Two Way Weekend1996.06-说明文：Global Shortage of Fresh Water1997.01-说明文：Practice Makes Perfect1997.06-说明文：Getting to Know the Outside of the campus1998.01-说明文：Harmfulness of Fake Commodities1998.06-论说文：Do Lucky Numbers Bring Good Luck?1999.01-说明文：Dont Hesitate to Say “No”,一、写作,历年真题1999.06-论说文：Reading Extensively or Intensively2000.01-说明文：How I Finance My College Education2000.06-论说文：Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary2001.01-说明文：How to Succeed in a Job Interview2001.06-应用文：A Letter to a Schoolmate2002.01-应用文：A Letter to the University President About the Canteen Service on the Campus2002.06-说明文：Student Use of Computers(图表),一、写作,历年真题2003.01 -说明文：It Pays to be Honest(阐述)2003.06 -说明文：An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident(描写与分析)2004.01 -应用文：A Letter in Reply to a Friend2004.06 -应用文：A Brief Introduction to A Tourist Attraction(导游词)2005.01 -应用文：A Campaign Speech(演讲词)2005.06 -叙议文：An Incident2005.12 -论说文：Should the University Campus be Open to Tourists?2006.06-应用文： Write a Poster Recruiting Volunteers2006.12-议论文：Spring Festival Gala on CCTV2007.06应用文：Welcome to our club(欢迎词)2007.12论说文：Electives to choose2008.06论说文：Recreational Activities,2001年1月以前：说明文、论说文为主，少有应用文2001年6月-2007年6月：应用文为主（书信、演讲词、海报告示）说明文、论说文、记叙文为辅2007年12月以来及未来趋势：时效性强的论说文、与学生生活及未来就业有关的应用文（如 求职函、投诉函及对投诉函的回信等）,命题趋势：,1) 认真审题 审请题目、关键词、段首句、题纲、提示、图表；确定主题、明确范围、选定素材、抓住重点；2) 列出提纲、深刻思考、打好腹稿、抓住要点、准备例证3) 正确表达 选择正确的文体与格式选择准确地道的表达方式：句型多样化；上下文逻辑连贯；语法、拼写、措辞准确多变；4) 修改校对：语法、拼写、标点、措辞5) 把握时间： 1)、2)步：3-5分钟; 3)步：20-25分钟；4)步：3-5分钟,写作策略,四级作文类型模板,1.说明利弊题型（2009年6月）,Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Free Admission to Museums. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below. 越来越多的博物馆免费开放，目的是什么 也会带来一些问题 你的看法,2008年6月写作真题,Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Recreational Activities. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below. 娱乐活动多种多样 娱乐活动可能使人们受益，也可能有危害性 作为大学生我的看法,说明利弊题型模板1,Nowadays many people prefer (_) because it plays a significant role in our daily life. Generally speaking, its advantages can be seen as follows. On one hand, (_).One the other hand,(_). But every sword has two blades. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the prominent disadvantages is that (_).To make matters worse,(_). Through the above analysis, I believe that The positive aspects far outweighs its negative aspects. Whatever effects it has, one thing is certain, (_) itself is neither good nor bad. It is the uses which is put on it that determines its value to our society.,说明利弊题型模板2,There is no consensus among people as to the view of (_).The opinions vary from person to person. Some people hold the idea that (_). A case in point is that (_). On the other hand, other may have a quite different view. According to them, (_).The most typical example is that (_). Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter. Admittedly, the former point of view seems reasonable in saying to some extent, but (_) is more convincing.,相似预测,Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Free Admission to Parks. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below. 越来越多的公园免费开放，目的是什么 也会带来一些问题 你的看法,Free Admission to Parks (1)To encourage people to go outside and relax, a mounting number of parks offer free admission now. People benefit from it especially during these tough economic times. (2)With free entry, more people will have opportunity for affordable vacations for families, taking pleasure in the natural landscape.Fresh air and landscape in the parks are good for people. (3)However, too many people flocking into the parks might not be so good for the parks. (4)For example, some visitors leave the garbage behind, which may cause environmental pollution. Peoples barbeques and stamping will also bring damage to the grassland and other greeneries in the parks.(5)As a university student, Im favor of free admission to the parks. Free entry to parks not only saves peoples culture expenditure, but also makes things fairer-people like the poor and students can go to the parks frequently as well. (6)On the other hand, visitors should be informed to preserve the environment while enjoying the beauty of the nature.,