Unit 3,Travel journal,Writing,一、文体感知 1文体特点 电子邮件是互联网时代人们进行书面交流的主要文体。它与一般信件一样，也包括信头、正文和结尾部分。 电子邮件写作要简单明了，便于阅读。所以像信尾敬语(Complimentary close)通常也很简明，常常只需一个词，如“Thanks”，“Best”，“Cheers”等。 电子邮件的人称及时态则需要根据所写的具体内容来确定。,电子邮件,2亮点句式 (1)How nice to hear from you! (2)How is everything going with you? /How are you getting on with everything? (3)Let me tell you something about the activity. (4)We couldnt wait to walk into nature. (5)I have trouble these days and need your help/advice.,二、典题演练 假如你是李华，你的朋友Tom 5月22日来信询问你毕业前的一次旅游经历，请你根据下面提示给他回一封100个词左右的电子邮件(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 1由学生会组织，日期定在上个周末。 2一部分愿意乘公交车；另一部分喜欢步行；最后大家被说服骑自行车。 3美丽的风景让人难以忘怀；山谷中蝴蝶飞舞，鲜花遍地盛开，空气呼吸起来让人感到舒服，同学们迫不及待地融入大自然中。 4感受：尽管爬山很累，但是正是这次旅游增进了同学们的友谊，提高了我们关心自然环境的意识。 5打算：毕业后去看望Tom。,1完成句子。 (1)这次旅游由学生会组织。 The trip _ our Students Union. (2)日期定在上个周末。 The trip _ the last weekend. (3)一部分愿意乘公交车。 Some of us _ take a bus. (4)另一部分喜欢步行。 Others _ walking.,was organized by,was scheduled for,preferred to,were fond of,(5)最后大家被说服骑自行车。 Finally, we _ cycle. (6)空气呼吸起来让人感到舒服。 The air there _ . (7)我们迫不及待地融入大自然中。 We _ walk into nature. (8)旅游增进了同学们的友谊，提高了我们关心自然环境的意识。(用强调句式强调the trip) _,were persuaded to,was pleasant to breathe,couldnt wait to,It was the trip that improved our friendship and raised our awareness to care about the environment.,2句式升级。 (9)用非谓语作状语连接(1)(2)。 _ (10)用while, and连接(3)(4)(5)。 _,Organized by our Students Union, the trip was scheduled for the last weekend. Some of us preferred to take a bus while others were fond of walking, and finally we were persuaded to cycle.,Dear Tom， How happy I am to receive your letter of May 22Now I will tell you something about the tripOrganized by our Students Union, the trip was scheduled for the last weekendSome of us preferred to take a bus while others were fond of walking and finally we were persuaded to cycle.,_ _ _,When we got there, we were greatly impressed by its beautiful viewAll kinds of butterflies were flying freely in the valley, the entire mountain was covered with beautiful flowers, and the air there was pleasant to breathe; as a result, my classmates couldnt wait to walk into nature. Though we were tired, it was the trip that improved our friendship and raised our awareness to care about the environmentBy the way, I am going to visit you after I graduate. Best wishes. Li Hua,(2018山西康杰中学高一上期中) 假设你是李华，你打算利用假期出国旅游。请你就此给你的美国朋友Michael发一封电子邮件，谈谈你出国旅游的原因，并邀请Michael有时间来中国。 要点：1.出国旅游让生活多姿多彩； 2开阔眼界，了解国外的风俗和历史； 3和来自不同文化背景的人交朋友，学外语； 4放松身心，欣赏美景。 注意：100词左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,If you like travelling, please come to China when you are freeI do hope you can witness the great changes in China. Best wishes! Yours truly， Li Hua,