四级写作 打造实用主义的奢华之句子的净化,广州新东方 任强,句子的雕琢 强调句 (1-2) The more the more （1-2） 倒装句 (1-2) 比较关系和倍数关系 (1-2),强调句,It is that It is who You can learn English more quickly in the family of native speakers.,It is in the family of native speaker that you can learn English more quickly.,It is that,Love makes the world go around. It is love that makes the world go around. It is the world that love makes go around.,The more the more,The more beautiful a girl is, the fewer boys court her.,The more frequently we communicate with family members, the more harmonious the relationship between us is.,倒装句,1. So that The girl is so beautiful that she remains single today . So beautiful is the girl that she remains single today. So+形容词提前+be+主语,这个教室是如此大以至于可以装1万人.,The classroom is so big that it can hold 10,000 people.,So big is the classroom that it can hold 10,000 people.,她的眼睛是如此大以致于晚上我们不用开灯。,Her eyes are so big that we dont need the light.,So big are her eyes that we dont need the light.,So + adj. So+ adv.,他跑的如此之快以至于火车都追不上他。,He runs so fast that the train cant catch up with him.,So fast does he run that the train cant catch up with him.,这个科学家工作是如此勤奋，以至于他忘记了吃午餐,The scienctist worked so hard that he forgot his lunch.,So hard did the scientist work that he forgot his lunch.,2. 比较结构,只要你的文章使用了比较结构，倒装就是有机会实现的 I run faster than he does. I run faster than does he. 唯一一个倒装从句的结构。,我游泳，游的像毛爷爷一样好,I swim as well as Yeye Mao did.,I swim as well as did Yeye Mao.,3. 表示地点，位置，范围，处所的状语或表语提前至句首,我妹妹就在那群人中间. My sister is among those people.,Among those people is my sister .,新东方学校位于黄花岗,New Oriental School lies in Huang Hua Gang.,In Huang Hua Gang lies New Oriental School.,Those parents who hold the opinion that money is the only symbol of success are satisfied with their children who find a high-paying job. who find= finding,Their children find a high-paying job. Those parents are satisfied with them. Those parents think that money is the only symbol of success.,be satisfied with= be content with,Those parents who hold the opinion that money is the only symbol of success are satisfied with their children finding a high-paying job.,Satisfied with their children finding a high-paying job are those parents who hold the opinion that money is the only symbol of success.,4.形容词+though/as +主+谓+主句,Though I am busy, I will go shopping with you.,Busy though/as I am, I will go shopping with you.,虽然王子很小，但他有一颗征服世界的心。,Though the prince is little, he has the heart to conquer the whole world. Little as/ though the prince is, he has the heart to conquer the whole world.,她的眼睛虽然大，但是看不到东西,Though her eyes are big, she cant see anything. Big though/as her eyes are, she cant see anything.,虽然他头发是黑的，但是是染的,Though his hair is black, it is dyed. Black though his hair is, it is dyed.,Love your life,poor as it is . - Henry David Thoreau,用在对立观点题目型的最后一段,观点A 观点B 你的观点,5.表否定的副词或者短语放在句首倒装,No/not/ never/ neither/ nor/ seldom/ rarely/ barely /scarcely/ hardly/under no circumstances I seldom visit my grandparents since I lived in a different city. Seldom do I visit my grandparents since I lived in a different city.,I will never marry you. Never will I marry you.,Never will I form an idea that bicycles affect human beings life style most profoundly among all means of transportation.,能倒的坚决倒 不能倒的创造条件也要倒 天下没有什么不能倒 除非你不想倒,A 比B 大四倍,比较结构和倍数关系,A is 5 times as big as B. A is four times bigger than B. A is five times the size of B.,图表题 人口是过去多少倍 看电视人数 用电脑人数,A 比B长7倍,A is 7 times longer than B A is 8 times as long as B. A is 8 times the length of B.,长江比这条河长20倍,The Yangtze river,