英语开放作文训练,In your English class, you are asked to describe the following cartoon and explain to your classmates how you understand it.,The picture shows a mother bird seeing her clearly-beloved child-the young birds flying away. The young birds are ready to explore the wonder of the world. It seems they never have enough time to say goodbye to their mother, who raised them up with all live. They just leave their mother an empty nest. The similar things happen in our real life. We are young and eager to see the world, when we have strong wings to fly on our own. We, just like these birds are leaving our aged parents to the house which was once filled with our laughter.,Little do we know how our parents feel until we have our own children. We may just imagine every dawn and dusk seeing them walking around in the room we once lived in, recalling the old day we spent together. The picture tells us, or warns us that no matter how busy we are, we must spare sometime to visit or think about, or telephone our dearly-beloved parents, who are missing us so much.,描述图片部分用图中人物为主语 联想部分用现实生活中人物为主语 总结或提炼主题自己观点用第一人称,篇章结构,描述图片,联想,总结或提炼主题,主体时态,一般现在时,一般将来时,人称,分析范文,In your English class, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to your classmates how you understand it.,描述图片,What can you see in the picture?,Who? What ?,two girls, two kids,the sun,mountain a winding path trees, 状语 There be+名词 + doing sth. 定语从句,In the picture there are two girls at the foot of a mountain.,In the picture there are two girls standing at the foot of a mountain.,In the picture there are two girls who are standing at the foot of a mountain.,two girls, two kids,the sun,mountain a winding path trees,1. In the picture /From the picture, we can see that- 2. As we can see in the picture, there is/are sth./sb. doing sth.,联想,What can you imagine in your daily life or in the society?,two girls, two kids,the shining sun,mountain a winding path trees,We, they,a bright / promising future,some difficulties and challenges,1. The picture tells us, or warns us that - 2. In my view/ opinion, the picture wants to show us that - 3. The picture reminds us that -,总结或提炼主题 What should/must we do？,So we should we must,1. In the picture /From the picture, we can see that- 2. As we can see in the picture, there is/are sth. doing sth. 1. The picture tells us, or warns us that - 2. In my view,/in my opinion, the picture wants to show us that - 3. The picture reminds us that -,描述图片,联 想,总结或提炼主题 So we should We must,In this picture, two girls are standing at the foot of a small mountain, and the sun is rising over there. One of the girls seems happy to see this and wants to climb the mountain. However, the other girl seems unwilling to climb it because she hides behind her friend. In my opinion, the rising sun is the bright future before us, and the long way to the top of the mountain represents the difficulties we may meet on our way to success. If we hold the positive attitude, we will surely reach the top. If not, we will be a failure before we start. So we should never be afraid of difficulties and keep going until we become successful.,In the picture we can see two kids looking at the sun shining far away behind the mountains, to which a winding path leads. Obviously they are expecting a promising future, but there is a long way to go and they will meet with some difficulties and challenges on their way to their dreams. The key to success is great determination and a strong will. Like the two kids, we are faced with difficulties and challenges every day. It is only when we make up our minds and work heart and soul that we will live our lives to the fullest and reach our goals at last.,As we can see in the picture, two children facing the front are watching a remote rising sun. between the children and the sun is a long and difficult road up to a mountain. I think the sun means success and the road is the way to it. And however difficult the way to success is, we must be encouraged and climb the mountain. Whats more, in the process we can look up to the sun and find hope. The children stand for the next generation who are promising and full of hope. The picture predicts that we will have a bright future as long as we do take steps in the road leading to success.,The picture shows that therere two girls holding each other up, struggling in the coldness of early morning. They look up and see a narrow path winding to the end of their sight, to where the sun is rising. In my opinion, the picture suggests how important friendship is when setbacks occur. For those who are thirst for achievements, the road of life will never be easy. When the night is too dark and the road is too long, we may think that future is only for the lucky and the strong. But with supports from friends, we will never be discouraged. When hard time arises, we can hold on with friends, and the sun-like hope will always be right there.,祝大家工作愉快！,