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2 书面表达【母题来源】【2015上海卷高考书面表达】【母题原题】Guided WritingDirections: Write an English composition in 120150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.学校即将举办“读书节”,目前正广泛征集“读书节”宣传册图片。假设你是该校学生潘阳,你已找到以下三幅图片,决定给读书节组委会写一封信,推荐其中一幅,你的信须包括以下内容:1. 简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片;2. 阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节”的理由。【参考答案】Dear Sir/ Madam,Since the Reading Festival is around the corner, Im writing to recommend a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading.In the picture, three students are sitting at the table, discussing heatedly what they have just read. It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion. Though it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration, as far as Im concerned, it can also be a sharing experience when the same book is being appreciated. Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story with fascinating and intricate plots. You are so amazed by the genius of the writer and you cant help sharing it with your classmates or best friends, who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well. The moment you mention the book, the passion and enthusiasm about the story will explode which can never be gained on your own. My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that, through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself, but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers, which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book. To sum up, the reason of my recommendation is quite simple and apparent that reading, instead of being dull and isolating, can be full of participation and common interest. I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration and Im looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Pan Yang【命题意图】本题考查了学生的语言的运用能力和看图写话能力。从微观上考查了学生写句子的能力。【考试方向】把语言知识和能力结合起来,综合考查学生的语言运用能力和临场发挥的能力。【得分要点】结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。运用定语从句a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading.; a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration; your classmates or best friends, who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well;My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that, through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself, but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers, which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book;运用连词 Though, 运用副词 deeply 修饰impressed运用了宾语从句discussing heatedly what they have just read;It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion; Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story; it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity;I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration此外,文章还使用了大量习语和短语,如not only but also; as far as Im concerned; To sum up ; share with; 等。1.【2015预测题】 2015年李克强总理在政府工作报告中写到:encourage a love of reading in all our people to build a nation of avid readers.鼓励全民阅读,建立一个热衷阅读的国家。结合你对这句话的理解,谈谈你对全民阅读的看法。词数:100单词左右。_ 【命题方向】全民人均阅读量决定国家的国民素质,全民阅读的意义十分重要,学生作为阅读最重要的群体,对此话题很熟悉。【解析】本文是一篇提纲类作文,给了一定的汉语提示。结合自己观点组织语言,但要注意要点的表达、时态的运用、上下文的连贯性,尽量使用自己熟悉的句式,但要注意句式的变化,多使用高级句式能起到事半功倍的效果。【参考范文】 As is well known, reading teaches us to learn life, truth, science and many other useful things. It increases our knowledge, broaden our minds and strengthen our character. In other words, reading can give you wise and enjoy your life. This is the reason why Premier Li always encourage us to read more books. Reading is a good thing, but we must pay great attention to the choice of books. Good books can inspire our imagination or creativity so that we can benefit from them all life. In my opinion, it is an important way to improve the national quality by encouraging people to reading more good books.(108)2.【预测题】你的加拿大国朋友John通过电子邮件想知道你校近来举行的各种活动,你把最近你校举办的“读一本好书”的活动介绍给他,包括以下内容:PurposeTo train an interest to read agood book. To form into a good habit.organisesThe students unionmembersStudents Senior 3contentsYour feelings and thoughtsevaluation注意: 1词数: 120词左右; 2可适当加入细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 电子邮件的开头已为你写好(不计入总词数)Dear Tom.I am pleased to get your email and tell you something about the activity of reading a good book for our students.
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