2015届高考英语二轮专题训练精华：短文改错（2）短文改错(2013浙江六校联考)Hello,everyone.Its nice to speak about that we can do for our school,and I think small actions can make big difference.The first thing we can do is to make our campus more beautifully.Every one of them may plant a tree in the school or to organize a thorough cleaning on the campus.We can also form a good habit of putting rubbishes into trashcans.Never forget to turn off the lights and close the doors.We should not leave the tap water run or waste any materials in the laboratory class.In that case,I believe well turn our school in a better place to study and live in.How I wish we can enjoy a better school life!Thank you for listening!答案:Hello,everyone,Its nice to speak about we can do for our school,and I think small actions can make big difference.The first thing we can do is to make our campus more .Every one of may plant a tree in the school or to organize a thorough cleaning on the campus.We can also form a good habit of putting into trashcans.Never forget to turn off the lights close the doors.We should not leave the tap water or waste any materials in the laboratory class.In that case,I believe well turn our school a better place to study and live in.How I wish we enjoy a better school life!Thank you for listening!短文改错(2013杭州二中高三年级第五次月考)After our final examinations,my brother and me thought we would give ourselves a treat at restaurant.While waiting for our food,we emptied all our small changes from our wallets on the table and counted it out.Soon,our food arrived with a note.It reads,“Your lunch has been paid for.Have a lovely meal!”It was a wonderfully surprise as nothing like that had ever been happened to us.I remembered an old man sitting nearby.He should have thought we didnt have enough money to the bill.We looked around to thank him,and he was not there.His kindness meant so many to us.答案:After our final examinations,my brother and thought we would give ourselves a treat at restaurant.While waiting for our food,we emptied all our small from our wallets on the table and counted it out.Soon,our food arrived with a note.It ,“Your lunch has been paid for.Have a lovely meal!”It was a surprise as nothing like that had ever been happened to us.I remembered an old man sitting nearby.He have thought we didnt have enough money the bill.We looked around to thank him, he was not there.His kindness meant so to us.短文改错Yesterday I went to the park.I happened to see a touched event.At that time,some people were boating in the lake.A happy family was taking photos when suddenly the girl falls off the boat into the water.The girl could swim and was struggling,so her parents cried out,“Help!Help!”It was obviously that they could not swim,either.Hearing the cry,the young man immediately rushed to the lake.Without taking away his clothes,he jumped into the water and swam towards the girl,that was already tired out.At last he had carried her to the bank.She were saved!答案:Yesterday I went to the park.I happened to see a event.At that time,some people were boating the lake.A happy family was taking photos when suddenly the girl off the boat into the water.The girl could swim and was struggling,so her parents cried out,“Help!Help!”It was that they could not swim,either.Hearing the cry, young man immediately rushed to the lake.Without taking his clothes,he jumped into the water and swam towards the girl, was already tired out.At last he had carried her to the bank.She saved!短文改错My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake.We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake.As soon as we arrived,so we dropped the lines into the water.Before waiting for about half an hour,I was beginning to get impatiently.I wanted to give up,and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer.Finally,there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught.Within the next few minute,my grandfather also caught a fish.Felt hungry,we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish.It was delicious.答案:My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we fishing at a lake.We took fishing poles and headed for the lake.As soon as we arrived,so we dropped the lines into the water.waiting for about half an hour,I was beginning to get .I wanted to give up,my grandfather told me to wait a little longer.Finally,there a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught.Within the next few ,my grandfather also caught a fish.hungry,we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish.It was delicious.短文改错(2013浙江金华十校期末)Generally speaking,the relationship between us students and people around us are good.We are getting on well with each other.Therefore,there still exist some problems.Some students lose his temper easily because of anxiety and learning burden.They sometime quarrel with others,which is very disappointed.In my opinion,we middle school students should make our efforts improve the si