Task-writing,记叙文,A guide to task- writing(一): 原文文体,记叙文,需要我们写的文体:,记叙文,(叙述类文章写作模板)： 1. Title（标题） (2分) 2. Sum up （概要） ( 30words or so) (5分) 3. 过渡句 (3分) 4. 叙述的故事 (10分) 5. 结束的段落 (点明主题) (5分),一 What should you pay attention to when writing a title?,I 使用名词短语或一句话作标题 II 标题的每一个词的首字母要大写，除了介词和冠词 III 标题最好不要超过12个词 IV 参考要写的中文提示安标题,10.Patience Is Necessary,4.The Key to Success Patience,5.How Important Patience Is!,6.Patience Leads to/ Results in Success,7.Our Life Needs Patience,8.Be / Keep Patient,9.Do Everything Patiently,Whats the title that we should use?,1.Patience Is the Secret of Success,2.Patience Is Important,3.The Importance of Patience,1. 主要使用原文的词进行原文的概述. 不要包含个人观点 2. 用第三人称描述 3 词汇控制在2040词左右,二 What should you pay attention to when writing a summary?,故事性阅读材料，应该用最简练的语言来说明故事讲述了什么，不能拖泥带水，而且最好讲述该故事给出的启示或其中的一个道理。,Skill: Combination of five elements要素串联法,was taught a lesson by an old man,the writer and an old man,when going fishing,on the bank of the lake,Patience is important. Patience is the secret of success.,You may begin like these:,1.The passage is about the writers unforgettable lesson from an old man.,2.The writer tells us about his unforgettable lesson from an old man.,3.The story is about the writer who was taught an unforgettable lesson by an old man.,4.The author tells us that he was taught an unforgettable lesson by an old man.,Summary:,The story is about an unforgettable lesson of the writer from an old man while fishing on the bank of the lake, through which the writer realized patience was very important and that it was the secret of success. (39 words),Possible version,三. How to write a transitional sentence（过渡句）,1.I had a similar experience at one time, too. 2.As far as I am concerned, I have a similar experience . 3.I also have a similar experience.,You may write like these:,Show good transitional sentences or paragraphs: 1.It occurs to me that a similar story of mine happened 3 years ago and taught me a lesson. (19 words ） 2.Like the writer, I also have an unforgettable experience that taught me to keep patient. (15 words ）,四 Make up your similar story:,Skill: Combination of five elements要素串联法,Take waiting for a bus for example:,waited for a bus,I,when going to school,at the bus stop,Patience is important,I have a similar experience. Once I waited for the bus at the stop for 30 minutes, no bus came. I couldnt wait any longer and decided to walk to school. But no sooner had I left than the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I wanted to take the next bus, I would have to wait for another 30 minutes. Only then did I realize the importance of patience. Being impatient will waste all the efforts that we have made. Patience also plays an important part in our study and work. With it we can achieve greater. (110 words ),五 How to write an ending paragraph,. All in all, patience is very important. Everyone should have patience to do everything.(words),1.In my opinion, without patience, we may miss a lot of successful chances in our life. So we should try our best to build the good of patience. (29 words ）,(Point out the main idea)两三句话,Show good ending paragraphs:,Possible version: Now, whenever I am to lose my patience, Ill think of the experience of waiting for a bus. (18 words),3.From my own experience, I think patience can help us overcome the difficulties in our lives and studies. So we should be patient whatever we do. (26 words ）,Possible version:,Patience is the secret of success The story is about an unforgettable lesson of the writer from an old man while fishing on the bank of the lake, through which the writer realized patience was very important and that it was the secret of success. (39 words),I have a similar experience. Once I waited for the bus at the stop for 30 minutes, no bus came. I couldnt wait any longer and decided to walk to school. But no sooner had I left than the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I wanted to take the next bus, I would have to wait for another 30 minutes. Only then did I realize the importance of patience. Being impatient will waste all the efforts that we have made. Patience also plays an important part in our study and work. With it we can achieve greater. (110 words ),Now, whenever I am to lose my patience, Ill think of the experience of waiting for a bus. (18 words) (167 words),Thanks,