,分类写作,三、请求/求助信,an unforgettable experience 一次难忘的经历 make preparations for 做准备 have trouble in sth./doing sth. 有困难 collect materialS 收集材料 properly 合适地 appreciate 感激；欣赏 offer sb. a hand 提供帮助 passenger 旅客 airline company 航空公司 flight 航班 leave sb. a deep impression 给某人留下深刻印象 name and address 姓名和地址,【必备词语】,course 课程 accent 口音；方言 manage to do sth. 设法成功地做了某事 hobby 爱好 symbol 象征 luck and unity 运气和团结 silk thread 丝线 customer 顾客 further information 进一步的消息 ask sb. a favor 请某人帮忙 a precious gift 一份珍贵的礼物 postage 邮资,【必备词语】,1. I wonder if you could do me a favor. 我想请您帮个忙。 2. I am wondering whether you could . 我想知道您是否能够 3. I would be very grateful if you could . 如果您能，我将感激不尽。 4. I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand. 如果您能帮助我，我将感激不尽。 5. Now I wonder whether I could ask you a favor. 不知道我是否可以请您帮个忙？,【好句朗诵】,6. I cant wait to see you again! 我等不及再次见到你了！ 7. Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply. 谢谢您的关注，期待收到您尽早的回复。 8. If you need further information, do let me know. 如果您需要更多的信息，请告知我。 9. Thank you very much for all the kindness. 谢谢您一切的好意。 10. Hope everything is fine with you there. 希望您在那里一切如意。,【好句朗诵】,1. The whole thing is getting very difficult and I real need your good advice!,1. real改为really,2. The main reason Im writing is that I have litte favour to ask.,2. little前面加a,【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误,3. I thank you in the advance for your prompt attention to these matters.,3. 删掉the,4. I would like to bring your attention to some problems what are occurring in this block.,4. what改为that/which,5. The people in the apartment below mine often play loudly music late at night, making it very difficult for me to sleep.,5. loudly改为loud,【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误,6. Also, there is often rubbish leaving in the stairway.,6. leaving改为left,7. I would appreciate you if you would help me solve these problems.,7. 第一个you改为it,8. Were trying to find someone to look after the cats while we away.,8. away前加are,【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误,9. There are hundreds of people go to work in cars and buses.,9. go改为going,10. I look forward to hear from you about the action that the council will take on this matter.,10. hear改为hearing,【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误,【2013新课标1卷：请求帮助接机】 假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明： 李明：高个子，戴眼镜 航班号：CA985 到达：8月6日上午11:30,【真题满分佳作赏析】,满分佳作（一） Dear Peter, How are you doing? Im writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to have a meeting in your city. Do you remember the Chinese painting I promised you last year? My uncle will bring it to you soon. I hope you will like it. I wonder if you could do me a favour. This is the first time that my uncle visited the US, so I hope you can meet him at the airport. He arrives at 11:30 a.m. on August 6th and his flight number is CA 985. I would appreciate it if you could take him to his hotel. My uncle is tall. He will be wearing dark glasses and a blue jacket. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua,满分赏析 Im writing to tell you that使用了宾语从句。 the Chinese painting I promised you使用了定语从句，提升了文章的档次。 使用了I wonder if的结构，表达了委婉的语气。 使用客气套话I would appreciate it if显得非常礼貌，语言得体。,满分佳作（二） Dear Peter, How are you doing? Do you remember the Chinese painting you like very much? Here is some good news for you. You know, my uncle Li Ming is going to the city where you live to attend an international meeting. He is to bring the painting to you. I am wondering whether you could pick him up at the airport. My uncle is tall and wears a pair of glasses. His flight number is CA985. He will get there at 11:30 a.m. on August 6. I would be very grateful if you could meet him at the airport. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua,满分赏析 使用定语从句the Chinese painting you like very much，属于高级句型。 本句是作者适当添加的内容，起到很好的过渡作用，为下文转入谈论叔叔为Peter带去他喜欢的那幅中国画作铺垫。 使用I am wondering whether，语言表达委婉礼貌。 高级句型I would be very grateful if是一大亮点，会让阅卷老师眼前一亮。,【2011山东卷改编：演讲比赛写稿求助】 作文原题 假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件： 1. 询问Tom的生活和学习情况； 2. 谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙； 3. 告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。,【模仿翻译】,作文翻译 亲爱的Tom， 你来北京学习已经一个月了。一切如何？我真的很开心和你在这里度过这么难忘的一段经历。 今年七月，我将参加中学生英语演讲比赛。为了有更好的表现，我正在做准备。然而，我仍然在收集有用的材料上有困难。同时，我发现难以恰当地使用英语。如果你能帮助我，我会非常感激。 你知道，自从你离开后，我一直想着你，所以我希望在英语比赛后在北京见到你。我等不及再次和你见面了。 你的, 李华,Dear Tom, Its been a month since you studied in Beijing. How is everything going with you? I am really happy to spend such an unforgettable experience with you here. I am going to take part in an English speech contest for middle school students in July. To have a very good performance, I am making preparations for it. However, I still have some trouble in collecting useful materials. Meanwhile, I find it hard to use English properly. I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand. You know, I have been missing you since you left, so I hope to see you in Beijing after the English contest. I cant wait to see you again! Yours, Li Hua,【2010重庆卷改编：请求寻找物品】 作文原题 假设你是李华，于2010年6月3日搭乘国外某航空公司航班（flight number BA793）回国后，发现遗失了一个行李箱（suitcase）。现请用英文给该航空