第4讲 名词性从句在写作中的应用,一、魔法导航 名词性从句包括宾语从句、表语从句、主语从句和同位语从句。在写作中我 们可以巧用名词性从句来为我们的文章“锦上添花”。 1.主语从句在写作中的应用: 典句引领 What I want to stress is that you should make it a rule to practice speaking Man- darin.(2015四川) 我想强调的是你应该养成练习说普通话的习惯。 雕词琢句 (1) (给我印象最深的) is his famous saying, “Genius is one per- cent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.”,四大名花,锦上添花,答案 What impresses me most (2)我们想做的第一件事是和老人一块包饺子。(2015课标全国) 答案 What we want to do first is to make dumplings with the elderly people. 2.宾语从句在写作中的应用: 典句引领 Seldom do we know what is happening both at home and abroad, let alone what we can do for our country. 我们几乎不了解国内外正在发生的事情,更不要说 能为我们的国家做什么了。 雕词琢句,(1)I would also like to know (他在太空中感觉怎么样) and whether space travel is as great fun as I have read. (2015安徽) 答案 how he felt in space (2)从你的帖子上我得知你想提高你的普通话(Mandarin)水平。(2015四川) 答案 I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. 3.表语从句在写作中的应用: 典句引领 From him, I realize the secret to success is not where you were born, but what you are doing in your life.,从他身上,我意识到成功的秘诀不在于你出生在何处,而在于在生活中你在做 什么。 雕词琢句 (1)The main reason for my choice is (我倾向于牺牲自己的利益) for the group benefit. (2015浙江) 答案 that I tend to sacrifice my own interest (2)我想采访于敏的原因是他为中国的发展做出了巨大的贡献。(2015安徽) 答案 The reason why I want to interview Yu Min is that he has made great contributions to the development of China. 4.同位语从句在写作中的应用:,典句引领 There is no denying the fact that the environment is getting polluted more and more seriously. 不可否认,环境污染越来越严重了。 雕词琢句 (1)Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide, I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason (我喜欢阅读,并且有很 多书). (2015重庆) 答案 that I love reading and I own a large number of books (2)多数人坚定地持有这样的观点:教育能改变一个人的命运。(hold the firm belief that ),答案 Most people hold the firm belief that education can change ones fate.,二、学以致用 1.完美文章 结合括号中的提示,用名词性从句完成下面的文章。 Dear friends, Good morning!I am glad to express my opinion on our monitors suggestion (1) (每天抽出15分钟的时间读报纸).,As far as I am concerned,its a good idea,because it can do us good in many re- spects.Firstly,we are occupied with our study every day and we seldom know (2) (国内外发生的事情).By reading newspapers we can get more information about the world outside.Secondly,the advantage of the activity is(3) (它能丰富我们的学校生活并能提高我们的学习效 率).Last but not least,(4) (我想强调的是)is that it will no doubt help us improve our reading skills. As for my suggestion,we should make a choice about what well read.I am con- vinced (5) (每个人都将从这项活动中受益匪浅). Thats all.Thank you for your listening.,答案(1)that we should set aside 15 minutes every day to read newspapers (2)what is happening both at home and abroad (3)that it can enrich our school life and help to improve the efficiency of our study (4)what I want to stress (5)that everyone will benefit a lot from this activity 2.话题写作 本期话题 科技生活 写作要求 至少运用三种名词性从句。 根据下面的信息提示,写一篇70词左右的英语短文。 1.一些学生使用网络获取信息的主要原因是他们认为很方便; 2.毫无疑问,他们也可以快速获得问题的准确答案;,3.我认为这有可能使学生失去思考的兴趣; 4.应该采取措施解决这个问题,比如父母和老师应该鼓励他们独立完成作业。,One possible version: The main reason why some students prefer to gain information on the Internet is that they think it convenient. In addition, theres no denying the fact that they can get accurate answers to questions quickly. However, I think that its likely that students will lose interest in thinking. In my opinion, measures must be taken to solve the problem. For example,what teachers and parents should do is to encour- age students to finish their homework on their own.,答案,三、美文赏读 为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了HEART-TO-HEART专栏。假 设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie,收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向 你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请 用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下: 1.表示理解并给予安慰; 2.提出建议并说明理由。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;,3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:temper n.脾气,情绪 我来试写 Hi Worried, Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment.,Yours, Jamie,答案 One possible version: Hi Worried,Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment.The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong(表语从句),so you dont have to worry so much.Its important that you should learn to control your temper (主语从句)so that you may not do or say any- thing youll regret.Here are some useful tips.,Firstly,talk to someone you trust about how you feel.I hold a firm belief that it is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself(同位语 从句).Secondly,go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.And thirdly,remain optimistic about your future.Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.,I hope that youll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal(宾语从句). Yours, Jamie,【写作点评】 本文处充分运用了表语从句、主语从句、同位语从句、宾语从句,不 仅丰富了文章的句式,而且准确表达了作者的意思,是名词性从句在写作中妙 用的佳作,值得大家学习和借鉴。,