,分类写作,十、记叙描写,Stop thief! 抓小偷 run after sb. 追赶某人 bench 板凳 umbrella 雨伞 arrest sb. 逮捕某人 praise sb. for sth. 因某事表扬某人 contact sb. 联系某人 instant messaging 即时信息 surf the Internet 上网 housing conditions 住房条件 furniture 家具 express ones sincere thanks to sb. 向某人表达真诚的谢意 a meaningful activity 一个有意义的活动 be decorated with . 用装饰着 colorful ribbons 彩带,【必备词语】,blessing 祝福 in advance 预先 burst into tears 哭起来 take outdoor exercise 进行户外活动 set out for . 出发去某地 in high spirits 情绪高涨地 beautiful scenery 美丽的风景 fall behind 落后；掉队 be bathed in sunshine 沐浴在阳光中 a thorough cleaning 大清洁 scatter 散落 wipe the dust 扫灰尘 mop the floor 拖地 satisfaction 满足,【必备词语】,1. How beautiful the environment is! 多么美丽的环境啊！ 2. I had a pleasant outing with some of my classmates today. 今天我和一些同学一起进行了一次愉快的出游。 3. With the economy developing rapidly, Im glad to see our city is taking on a new look. 随着经济的快速发展，我非常高兴地看到我们的城市呈现出新的面貌。 4. You can imagine how charming it used to be: fresh air, clean water, green grass, swimming fish, flying birds, and the golden sunshine. 你可以想象一下这里曾经是多么的迷人：新鲜的空气，清澈的水面，嫩绿的青草，畅游的小鱼，飞翔的小鸟，还有金色的阳光。 5. We caught sight of a stream with green grass and beautiful flowers on both sides. 我们看到了一条河流，河的两岸都是绿草和漂亮的花。,【好句朗诵】,6. I would like to give a general picture of . 我想给一个总体的描述。 7. Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life. 过去的二十年左右，我们的生活发生了重大的变化。 8. We students specially organized a meaningful activity on Teachers Day. 在教师节，我们学生特别组织了一次有意义的活动。 9. The classroom was carefully decorated with balloons and colorful ribbons. 教室被大家用气球和彩带仔细地装饰起来。 10. Ms. Li was deeply moved, with tears filling her eyes. 李老师很受感动，眼里充满了泪花。 11. Tired as I was, I never felt so happy. 尽管很累，我从没有觉得这么开心。,【好句朗诵】,1. He thanked me for having helped he out of trouble.,1. he改为him,2. They showed us around the farm, which we saw many kinds of plants.,2. which改为where,【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误,3. Fortunate, the injured people were sent to hospital without delay.,3. Fortunate改为Fortunately,4. The cause of the fire broke out in the office building last night is being investigated.,4. fire后面加which/that，或broke改为breaking,5. The blind man was out danger, but the young woman got injured.,5. out后面加of,【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误,6. I arrived at the train station at 3:00 a.m., surrounding by people who did not speak my language.,6. surrounding改为surrounded,7. My friend was unhappy so his daddy was very strict with him.,7. so改为because,8. If you will come to Guilin, you will know how clear the water is and how green the hills are.,8. 删掉第一个will,【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误,9. I was walking along the street that a terrible traffic accident happened.,9. that改为when,10. One day, anything unpleasant happened.,10. anything改为something,【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误,【2014全国大纲卷：十年后的我】 一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”，请根据下列要点和你的想象完成短文。 1. 家庭； 2. 工作； 3. 业余生活。,【真题满分佳作赏析】,满分佳作（一） I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I would like to give a general picture of my future life in ten years. First of all, I will have a warm family where all family members will love each other and care about each other. As for me, since being a teacher is my dream, Im sure that this dream will come true then. I wish to teach foreign students traditional Chinese culture in a college at that time and I will certainly introduce China to the world. Time permitting, I expect to have more spare time to spend with my fiends so that we can have a better relationship. Such will be my future life, the one I have been dreaming of.,满分赏析 give a general picture of(作出总体的描述)，很好地作为本文的写作总起句。 恰当用到了 where 作关系副词的定语从句；考生要注意不要仅为了用从句而用从句，避免行文看起来生硬。 用到being现在分词短语和Im sure that接宾语从句，使句式多样；另外come true使用正确，其主语应该是“梦想”，切忌写出“I come true my dream”这样错误的句子。 Time permitting属于独立主格结构，也就是“主语+分词”结构，体现了作者的语法功底。 用到such开头的倒装句。,满分佳作（二） I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child. I hope Ill work in a computer company as a program designer. Ill enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. Ill do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, Ill continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, Ill travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.,满分赏析 本文结构清晰，第一句总起写作内容。 从句whatever I do作in的宾语。 用In a word进行总结。,【2004辽宁卷改编：路人帮助抓小偷】 作文翻译 一个星期天早上，中山公园里人很多。在一个货摊前，一个女人正在买雪糕，这时她身后的一个年轻人抢走了她的手提包。她大喊：“抓小偷！他抢了我的包！”听到这些话，一些人开始追赶他。有一位老人静静地坐在附近的长凳上。当抢包者跑过他身边时，老人快速地拿起他的雨伞，把它放在抢包者的两腿间。那个年轻人狠狠地摔倒在地上。很快，两个警察乘警车来了，把他抓住了。女人感谢了老人，周围的人都赞扬老人聪明。 参考词汇： 货摊stand (n.) ； 抢夺 snatch (v.) ； 逮捕 arrest (v.),【模仿翻译】,One Sunday morning, there were many people in Zhongshan Park. At a stand, a woman was buying an ice-cream when a young man behind her snatched her handbag away. She shouted, “Stop thief! Hes snatched my bag!” Hearing this, a few people began to run after him. There was an old man sitting quietly on a bench nearby. As the snatcher was running pa