Revision Lesson,persuasive writing: letter of advice.,Dear WWF, I live on an island near Africa. This is the only home of the red Colobus monkey but there are very few left. This is my plan to save the monkeys. First, I suggest making a special park for them. We should inspect them every month and see how fit they are and whether they need more food or medicine. Second, Please help the poor monkeys and I am sure that they will survive with your help. Yours sincerely William Long,salutation,body,Complimentary close,signature,三段式结构： 首段：(reason)建议信的开头要说明提建议的缘由,对自己的立场作一些解释。 中段：(suggestion)围绕问题，结构清晰，科学婉转地提出建议。建议的安排应有一定的逻辑顺序，充分考虑对方的实际情况，表达时应选择得体用语，切忌用语生硬、泛泛而谈。 尾段：(wish)简单予以希望。希望自己的建议能对对方有所帮助。,1.What / How about? 2.My suggestions are as follows. 3.It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on 4.When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you can 5.I am writing to express my views concerning 6.If I were you, I would 7.It seems to me that you could 8.I think it would be more beneficial if you could,The ways of giving advice:,9.Therefore, in order to, effective means should be taken to 10.It is high time that 11.Here are a few examples of some of the things that might be taken immediately. 12.It is suggested that the government should make efforts to 13.In short / In any case, we should / must / ought to 14.What we need is 15.Awareness of the problem is the first step toward the solution.,16.While it cannot be solved immediately, still there are ways. The most important is Another way is 17.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions /recommendations practical / useful / helpful. 18.I will be ready for further discussing this matter into details. 19.I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision-making. 20.If you could take what I suggest seriously, you would,Using the expressions to fill in the blanks Topic: The library of your school is collecting students opinion to improve its service and facilities. Write a letter to the headmaster to offer your suggestions, and express your good wishes,Dear headmaster, You have asked the students to talk about their opinions with regard to improving the service in the library, and _. In my humble opinion, the long lines waiting for use of the card catalogue are really frustrating. Then using the card catalogue is inefficient. Were now in the Age of Information, so _ consider equipping the library with more computers and applying the electronic retrieval（检索） system. _, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you in further details. Wish you could_. Faithful yours, Li Ming A. It is high time that B. bring us a high-tech library. C. What we need is D. I hope you will find my proposals useful E. Im wondering if you could F. I want to make some modest suggestions here.,F,E,D,B,Learning to use transitional words properly,表示递进关系的词语 常见的表示先后顺序的过渡词语 表示转折关系的过渡词语 表示因果关系的过渡词语 表示列举的过渡词语 表示比较和对比的过渡词语,Whats more To make the matter worse Whats worse Apart from these Moreover In particular Furthermore Most importantly Besides Apart from the above Besides the above In addition especially even,First, Second, Next, Finally, Firstly, Secondly, Eventually, Then, Afterwards, Meanwhile, At last,Some useful transitional words,表示递进关系的词语,常见的表示先后顺序的过渡词语,however while though otherwise or else but unfortunately instead after all,For this reason, As a result, Because of because as now that so due to Thanks to Thus, In this way Therefore,表示转折关系的过渡词语,表示因果关系的过渡词语,for example namely that is such as for instance takefor example,on the contrary in contrast with compared with in the same way just as meanwhile at the same time,表示列举的过渡词语,表示比较和对比的过渡词语,Topic: 目前我国大力提倡科学发展观。下图是你在校园所见到的一些现象。假如你是学生会主席，请你描述这些现象并根据建议起草一份建议信，向全校师生发出倡议，节约能源。,Using the transitional words to fill in the blanks,Dear teachers and students, Our government is trying hard to promote scientific development. It is everybodys duty to work hard and reach this goal. _, not everybody has realized the importance of it. Take our school for example. _ we can see that lights and computers are still on after class. Some students even forget to turn off the tap after using it and have water running all the time. Our papers are printed on only one side, causing much waste. Its time we did something to avoid this kind of waste. _, make sure that all the lights and other electric facilities are turned off when we leave the rooms._, try to form the habit of turning off the tap immediately after using it. _, papers should be printed on both sides and reused if possible. _, if everybody has the awareness of reducing the waste and takes action, we can contribute to our society. Yours, Li Hua,Dear teachers and students, Our government is trying hard to promote scientific development. It is everybodys duty to work hard and reach th