Welcome to my class!,Unit 13 Were trying to save the earth,Writing,Writing,Topic: Protecting the Environment,Step 1 Brainstorming,How can we protect the environment?,We should 1.plant more trees 2.,We should not 1. 2. ,We should,/ Were supposed to, /Wed better, /Its better to, /Its a good habit to, /Try not to , /Dont forget to / Remember to,plant more trees,We should/ wed better,save water,turn off the lights when we leave the room,go to school on foot,We should not/ Wed better not ,cut down trees,waste water,throw rubbish everywhere,use plastic bags,Step 2 Reading,We should 1. plant more trees 2. save water 3. turn off the lights when we leave the room ,We should not 1. cut down trees 2. waste water 3. throw rubbish everywhere 4. use plastic bags ,How can we protect the environment?,保护环境, 人人有责。作为中学生，我们应该做些什么呢？用至少6句话完成一篇作文。,口头作文,plant more trees,save water,throw rubbish everywhere,walk to school,保护环境, 人人有责。作为中学生，我们应该做些什么呢？用至少6句话完成一篇作文。,口头作文( 10分),plant more trees,save water,turn off the lights when we leave the room,go to school on foot,We had better It is our duty to,First Second Third,Writing tips ： 层次分明，条理清楚。善于运用连词，使文章逻辑结构紧密.,Its our duty_ the environment. As a student, what can we do?_, we _plant more trees. Second, we are supposed _water. Third, its best to go to school on foot. Besides, we had better _the lights when we leave the room. we should _throw rubbish everywhere _use plastic bags. _take actions to protect our home from now on.,学科网,zxxkw,学 科网,Read and fill in the blanks,to protect,First,should,to save,turn off,neither,nor,Lets,Practice makes perfect!,Step 3 Writing,1. Exercises,Complete the sentences,1.保护环境是我们的责任。 _protect the environment. 2.我们应该尽我们最大努力让城市越来越干净。 We should _ to make our city _.,Its our duty to,try our best,cleaner and cleaner,3. 最好的减少空气污染的方法是少开车。 _to reduce air pollution is _.,The best way,to drive cars less,Writing tips ： 注意积累与写作话题有关的典型句型和 常见短语。,Correct the mistakes,1. Mr. Green is a cleaner, she cleans the street. 2. Just now, he did homework and take out the trash. 3. In the future, there will have less cars and more trees. 4.My hometown is a interesting place. I very like it. 5. They by bike to school.,. He,took,there will be fewer,an,I like it very much.,go to school by bike,Writing tips ： 注意人称，时态，冠词等语法，避免中式英（Chinglish ）。,同义句转换,1. We should protect the environment. _ _ _ protect the environment. 2. He usually walks to school . He usually _ _school _ _. 3. We must look after the trees and flowers well. We must _ _ _ _the trees and flowers. 4. We shouldnt use plastic bags. We should use environment- friendly bags. We use environment-friendly bags _ plastic bags.,It is our duty to,goes to on foot,take good care of,instead of,Writing tips ： 善用同义词，同义短语，避免文章单调乏味。,Fill in the blanks,1.I was late for school, _ I overslept. 2._ they lost the game , they would continue to pull together. 3.Lucy likes these shoes , _ they are too expensive to afford.,because,Although,however,but however because although,Writing tips ： 注意连词的运用，使文章逻辑结构紧密,Writing tips: 1. 确定标题，抓齐要点，开篇点题。 2.注意人称，时态，冠词等语法，避免中式英语。 3.善于运用同义词，同义短语，避免文章单调乏味。 4. 善于运用连词，使文章逻辑结构紧密，层次分明，条理清楚。,Summary,Writing : Lowcarbon Life,学科网,zxxkw,学 科网,随着全球环境的恶化，越来越多的人选择过“低碳生活” （low-carbon life)，即减少二氧化碳的排放，低能量，低消耗的生活。请根据表格中的内容，以How to Live a Low-carbon Life为题，用英语写一段80词左右的文章。内容必须包括以下要点：,注意： 1.文章已给出部分内容，不计入总词数。,学科网,zxxkw,学 科网,作文评分标准（供参考）： 第五档（很好）：1315分 表达清楚，行文连贯，复合句运用自如正确，有文采，用上全部关键词，语言得体，基本无误或错误很少。 第四档（好）：1012分 表达基本清楚，行文基本连贯，尚能运用复合句，语言少量错误。 第三档（还好）：79分 只能运用简单句表达，语言有较多错误，但尚能答意。 第二档（较差）：46分 能写出几个要点，但语言错误较多，影响了意思表达。 第一档（差）：03分 白卷或文不对题，错误百出， 不知所云。,学科网,zxxkw,学 科网,In order to protect the environment, more and more people choose to live a low-carbon life. As students, first, we should_ _ On the other hand, we shouldnt do a lot of things. _ _ _ In a word,_ _,How to live a low-carbon life,学科网,zxxkw,随着全球环境的恶化，越来越多的人选择过“低碳生活” （low-carbon life)，即减少二氧化碳的排放，低能量，低消耗的生活。请根据表格中的内容，以How to Live a Low-carbon Life为题，用英语写一段80词左右的文章。内容必须包括以下要点：,注意： 1.文章已给出部分内容，不计入总词数。,学科网,zxxkw,学 科网,How to Live a Low-carbon Life In order to protect the environment, more and more people choose to live a low-carbon life. As students, first,Sample,we should plant more trees. Second, we had better go to school on foot or by bike. Besides, we are supposed to turn off the lights when we leave the room. On the other hand, we shouldnt do a lot of things. First, we sh