书 面 表 达,专 项 六,评 分 标 准,【真题示例】（2017年江西省中考题）,【参考范文（一）】 Smiles A smile is the most beautiful language of human begins. A smile shows you are kind and friendly. It helps you get on well with others. It also brings good luck and makes others feel warm. When I was is Grade 6, a new student came to our class. He did badly in schoolwork. No o one talked with him. He felt very lonely. When I learnt this, each time I met him, I gave him a big smile. Afrerwards, he often asked me questions about study. We bacame good friends and he did better and better in his study. He said it was my smile that made him more confident and outgoing. Smiles are so important in our life, so lets try to smile more. If we smile to life, life will smile back to us.,【参考范文（二）】 Smiles A smile is the most beautiful language of human begins. A smile is like the sunshine in winter. It warms our hearts and helps us get on well with each other. A person who often smiles usually brings good luck. Whats more, smiles can give us confidence. When I was young, I was very shy. I was afraid to speak in public. One day I needed to give a speech in my English class. I was so frightened that I did badly at the beginning. But when I saw a big smile on my teachers face, I got more and more confident. Finall I made it. Smiles are very helpful in our lives. We should often keep smile on our faces. If we are happy, we smiles. If we meet difficulties, we should smile, too. Lets smile to life.,