书面表达第2篇 (2015重庆A卷)加拿大中学生Peter在你校学习期满，回国后写来一封感谢信，同时指出了同学们的一些不良行为。假如你是学生会主席李华，请根据要点提示给Peter回一封电子邮件。要点提示：1.表示感谢；2. 表达意愿(告别高声喧哗、乱丢乱扔等不良行为)；3要求：1.80词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。Dear Peter，Im glad to receive your email. Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，提取信息：1.根据材料内容可知是要写一封回信；2.根据要点提示可知：信中首先要表达对加拿大中学生Peter的感谢；对Peter指出的中国学生们的一些不良行为提出解决方案；邀请Peter以后再次来学校，希望他看到的是更美好的校园环境；3.写信通常用第一人称；4.主要是表达意愿，所以时态以一般将来时为主；5.词数80词左右，不得出现真实的人名和校名。【写作指导】电子邮件回信要点提示素材串联开头：表达感谢以“非常谢谢你告诉我们这么多”开头（Thank you for telling us so much.）正文：提出解决方案:1.不在公共场合大声喧哗（loudly， in public）2.不到处乱扔东西（no longer throw things here and there）3.不乱写乱画（wont write or draw on the desks and other places）4.对他人更礼貌（be more polite to others）结尾：发出邀请1.邀请Peter来学校（invite sb. to do sth.）2.我相信你会看到一个更好的学校（Im sure you will see a better school）【高分范文】Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your email. Thank you for telling us so much. Im very sorry for what we have done.As students, we should learn to have good habits. First, we will not speak or shout loudly, especially in public. Also, in order to keep the environment clean and tidy, we will no longer throw things here and there. Whats more, we wont write or draw on the desks and other places, and we will be more polite to others.Id like to invite you to visit our school again. Im sure you will see a better school.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua