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写人叙事写作练兵(2015 襄阳改编)做家务是家庭成员的义务。作为家庭成员之一,你一定做过不少力所能及的家务活。请根据提示写一篇英语短文讲述一次你做家务或学做家务的经历或故事,与大家一起分享。要求:1. 语言表达准确,短文连贯通顺; 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称; 3. 80词左右。_【审题指导】认真阅读提示,提取信息:1. 本题要求记叙一次做家务的经历,因此文章为记叙文;2. 本文介绍的是自己的个人经历,因此文章必须有个人的感受等信息;3. 本文描述的是自己的亲身经历,因此写作时主要人称为第一人称;4. 回忆事件通常用一般过去时,抒发个人情感及感悟用一般现在时;5. 词数80词左右,不得出现真实姓名、校名。【写作指导】一次做家务的经历要点提示素材串联开头:引出事件我因忙于学习很少做家务(do housework)正文:描述事件的过程1. 收拾好所有的书籍,报纸和其他东西(put them in place)2. 擦拭了所有的家具(wiped the dust)3. 打扫地面(swept and mopped the floors)4. 父母回来后很惊讶(surprised to see)结尾:抒发对此事的感受尽管很累,但是很高兴(tired, happy)【高分范文】 Im a 15year-old middle school student. Though I dont reject to do housework, I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework.Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After that, I swept and mopped the floors.Just at that moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining. My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes. I was tired but I never felt so happy. 话题1写人叙事(2014、2013、2011年考查)Passage 1(2015云南改编)在你的成长过程中,一定有人陪伴你、帮助你、影响你、感动你,让你能够健康快乐地成长,请以“Growing up with_”为题,用英语写一篇短文。要求:1. 请补全标题,如:my mother,my best friend或father等; 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称; 3. 80词左右。_【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示,提取以下信息:1. 本文是一篇回忆往事的作文,属于记叙文。记述过去在生活中帮助你、影响你、感动你最深的一个人以及你们之间发生的事;2. 回忆过去的事要用一般过去时,人称用第一、三人称,阐述自身观点时用一般现在时;3. 词数为80词左右。【写作指导】父亲伴我成长要点提示素材串联开头:引出事件1. 爱我(love me)2. 尽力帮我(try ones best to help me)正文:讲述爸爸怎样爱我,帮助我的过程。1. 小学(primary school)2. 在的路上(on the way to)3. 日复一日(day by day)4. 的重要性(the importance of)结尾:总结1. 无论什么(no matter what)2. 长大(grow up)【高分范文】Growing up with my fatherMy father always loves me and tries his best to help me. When I was seven years old, I started my primary school. I had to get up early and did homework every day. I was so tired that I didnt like to go to school. Then my father told me a lot of stories on my way to school, and helped me to plan my time. Day by day, I knew the importance of learning, and became interested in reading books.No matter what difficulties I meet,my father is by my side. I am sure I will grow up better with my father.
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