高考书面表达专题写作指导,漫画作文,Writing based on cartoons,Learning aims,1. 通过读图、分析, 理解并准确判断漫画类作文的深层寓意。 2. 通过“描图、析图、建议”三个步骤，练习、总结漫画类作文的常用短语及句型。 3. 通过实例分析，进一步明确漫画类作文的三个步骤，总结归纳出漫画类作文的写作模板。 4. 运用本节课所学，顺利写出一篇漫画类作文。,2. 谋篇,1.读图解意,What s the features &characteristics of cartoon composition ? 漫画类作文的特点,Judge the morals/ lessons of the following cartoons as quickly as possible.,1）. 漫画的题目 眼睛 2）. 漫画的画面 细节 3）. 漫画的文字 观点 4）. 漫画的夸张 寓意,读图解意,读图解意(theme)-to the point,注意: 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues)， 切记要认真阅读！,1. 辨明褒贬，准确描述,. 联系生活，明晰主旨 (thememoral),People lack communication.,Picture1,People cant afford heavy medical fees.,Picture 2,Money cant buy everything. Health is the best wealth.,Picutre3,Picutre4,No drunk driving! We should observe traffic regulations.,Step1. Description step2. Analysis Step3. Solutions,描图/发现问题,建议/解决问题,析图/分析问题,谋篇 -organization,The steps to write a cartoon composition: 写作步骤,1. 保证三要素:体裁、时态、人称正确 . 避免漫画类作文的一些常见失误 1)误解图意 大忌！ 2)企图幽默 可笑！ 3)不明寓意 白写！ 4)中心不明 混乱！ . 控制字数（没话说PK太啰唆） . 结尾要精辟！,注意事项,Step 1 Description As is vividly shown in the picture, As can be seen in the picture, From the picture, we learn that The picture describes an interesting phenomenon.,Useful sentence structures:,Step2 Analysis,The picture is the exact reflection of It seems very ridiculous thatHowever, such a case is quite common in our life. / there are similar cases in our life. The picture indicates that weNowadays, it is a common phenomenon that There are several reasons behind this phenomenon./The reasons for this can be listed as follows.,As far as Im concerned/From my point of view, it is better/advisable toI consider it necessaryIts time that sb. did sth.,Only in this way can/Only if can we,Step 3 Solutions (opinions /suggestions),The government should make laws to The media should appeal for sb. to do sth We should raise peoples awareness of Everyone should make great efforts to,内容要点： 描述文字说明： 学生被迫上很多补习班 无兴趣可言 议论文字说明： 太多的补习班是浪费时间 学习要有兴趣 家长不要强迫孩子参加补习 表达希望,描图发现问题As is vividly shown in the picture, a boy is tied by all kinds of training classes. He has no time to play and relax. The only thing he needs to do is to attend varities of training classes. 析图分析问题It is the exact reflection of the life of today s children. They have to go to so many training classes besides their school classes. Life is no fun at all for them. The children are too tired to learn these lessons well with no interest. 建议解决问题As far as Im concerned, spare-time training courses are a waste of time for many students. The government should take measures to ban or limit training classes. Whats more, parents should give their children freedom to develop their own interest. Only in this way can children have a happy childhood.,实例剖析,写吧,写吧,只有写,你才能写! 巴金,Practice:,根据图画内容，以“We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter”题，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。短文须包括以下要点，不得逐条翻译。 1.简单描述漫画的内容； 2.作业负担过重； 3.精讲精练； 4.参加体育锻炼和 社会活动。,高考英语作文评分标准,第五档(很好)(21-25分) 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 2. 覆盖所有内容要点。 3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。 5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。 第四档(好)(16-20分) 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务 2. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。 3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。 5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 6. 达到了预期的写作目的。 第三档(适当)(11-15分) 1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 2. 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。 3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。 6. 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。,The picture shows that a girl is wearing a pair of glasses and carrying a big heavy schoolbag, and a woman is doing some exercise.The girl says to the woman, “If you carry the schoolbag for me, Im sure you will lose some weight.” It is the exact reflection of the fact that we Chinese students are overburdened with lessons and homework. What we do every day is to listen to our teachers lessons, to take notes and do our homework which seems endless. As far as Im concerned，education authorities should take measures to lighten childrens heavy burdun. Besides, teachers should help us students get more knowledge with fewer exercises and less homework. Only in this way will we have spare time to do more physical exercise and take part in some social activities, which makes us all mentally and physically healthier.,Thanks for your attention!,Goodbye!,Homework,Read and recite the useful expressions learned in this class.,