PART THREE,第三篇 写作妙解篇,类型(四) 祝贺信,典例分析,假如你是李华,在你的帮助下,交换生Tom在中文演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。请你给他写一封祝贺信,表达你的真诚祝贺,回忆他比赛时的表现,以及你从他身上学到了什么。,提示词语 win, prize, speech competition, pronounce, practice 提示问题 Why do you congratulate Tom? What made him successful in the competition? What can you learn from him?,Dear Tom, _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Li Hua,【写作架构】,【思路点拨】 1.要点提炼:本文是一篇应用文,类型是祝贺信。根据题目要求,可以提炼出3个要点: (1)说明祝贺的原因 (2)描述比赛中的精彩表现 (3)你学到了什么 2.时态:一般过去时和一般现在时 3.人称:第一人称和第三人称,【基础写作】 .根据所给提示词补全下列各句 1.知道你获得了英语演讲比赛的一等奖我很高兴。(be happy to) _ 2.我们被你精彩的演讲而深深吸引。(be attracted by) We . 3.你在这次比赛中表现很好。(do a good job in) You .,Im very happy to know you won the first prize in the English speech competition.,were attracted by your wonderful speech,did a good job in this competition,4.我为你感到骄傲。(feel proud of) I . 5.为了演讲得更好,你应该每天坚持练习演讲。(to make it better; keep doing) , you should every day.,feel proud of you,To make it better keep practicing your speech,.句子升格 按括号中的要求改写句子。 6.Your performance was wonderful.We felt proud of you.(用sothat连接两个句子) _ 7.Your voice was beautiful.Your pronunciation was perfect.(用bothand连接两个句子) We were amazed at . 8.Keep on trying and never give up.(用Its important to改写成复合句) I know .,Your performance was so wonderful that we felt proud of you.,both your beautiful voice and your perfect pronunciation,it is important to keep on trying and never to give up,9.Your speech is interesting.Your speech is meaningful, too.(用not onlybut also连接两个句子) _ 10.I want to thank you for showing me the power of believing ourselves and making big efforts to reach our dreams.(用not onlybut also改写句子) I want to thank you for _ _.,Your speech is not only interesting but also meaningful.,showing me not only the power of believing ourselves but also the,power of making big efforts to reach our dreams,【连句成文】 Dear Tom, Im very happy to know that you won the first prize in the Chinese speech competition, so Im writing to congratulate you on your wonderful performance. You did a good job in the Chinese speech competition.You pronounced really well during your speech and your voice was beautiful.You spoke so fluently that we all felt proud of you.Whats more, we were surprised at your rich and meaningful contents. As your best friend, I know you tried your best for the competition.You kept practicing your speech every day in order to make it better.I know it is important to keep on trying and never to give up.I hope I can be successful like you one day in the future. Li Hua,拓展积累,【表达祝贺】 1.Im writing to congratulate you on your wonderful performance. 2.Im glad to say congratulations to you because of your wonderful performance.,【描述精彩表现】 1.We were all amazed at your beautiful voice and excellent pronunciation. 2.Im happy to know that you did a good job in the competition. 3.We were so proud of you and enjoyed your meaningful speech.,【学习某人优秀品质】 1.As your best friend, I know you tried your best to make it better. 2.I know its important to keep trying hard and never to give up. 3.You set a good example for me.I really get lots of benefit from what you said.,实战演练,假如你是李华,得知你的美国笔友Peter被他理想的高中录取,请你给他写一封电子邮件,要点如下:表示祝贺;介绍自己目前的学习情况;请教学习方法。,提示词语 be admitted into, congratulate, advice 提示问题 Why do you congratulate Peter? How is your study? What advice do you want to get from him?,One possible version: Dear Peter, I have received your e-mail.Im very glad to know that you have been admitted into your ideal senior high school.First, Id like to offer my congratulations to you on your great success and I also hope to enter a famous senior high school just like you. Now, I want to tell you something about myself.As you know, Im busy preparing for the final examination.Day after day