高考资源网（ks5u.com） 您身边的高考专家www.ks5u.com 版权所有高考资源网- 1 -重庆渝中区 2016 高考英语二轮训练及答案：短文改错（4）【河北省唐山一中】短文改错(共 10 小题；每小题 l 分，满分 l0 分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。【参考答案】短文改错：Though great progress has made in science these years, there beenare still many people lived in poor conditions. They make their livinglivingby collecting and selling used thing. Their children cannot go to schoolthingsbecause they have not enough money to send their children to there.Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now?doThe answer lies on the population explosion. A president of a developing incountry once said: “It is us who are to blame for the poverty because we used to we高考资源网（ks5u.com） 您身边的高考专家www.ks5u.com 版权所有高考资源网- 2 -produce child without limit.” Although these few words sound simple enough,childrenbut they have clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.clearly2012 模拟短文改错 MToday we went to climb the West HillEarly in morning 1_we started out and arrived an hour lateThen we began 2_to climbThe hill was high and some of us got tired 3_soon, and all of us were very excitedWe cheered 4_happily when we got the topWe had our lunch there 5_and had enjoyed ourselves very muchUnfortunately， 6_when we walked down the hill，We were caught by 7_a rainWe remained calmly，shared umbrellas and 8_raincoats and walked carefullyFinally we both reached 9_the parking lot safelyIn spite of the unexpecting rain 10_and wind，we had a good time【参考答案及解析】1. morning前加the 考查冠词的用法。注意习语in the morning。 2. late改为later 考查副词比较级的用法。此处表示“迟到了一小时”，故用比较级。 3. 正确 经分析本句正确。 4. and改为but 考查句间的逻辑关系。根据文意此处为转折关系。5. got后加to或 got改为reached 考查动词的用法。此处the top作宾语，故改为got to 或及物动词reached。6. 去掉had 考查动词时态。根据句中的and可知，前后是并列关系，时态应一致。 7. by改为 in 考查介词的用法。解题关键：掌握动词catch的用法，be caught in意为：遭遇。 。 。 8. calmly改为calm 考查形容词的用法。此处 remain为系动词，其后接形容词。高考资源网（ks5u.com） 您身边的高考专家www.ks5u.com 版权所有高考资源网- 3 -9. both改为all 考查代词的用法。根据文意没有两者的范围。 10. unexpecting改为unexpected考查分词的用法。此处unexpected 意为：意料之外的。2012模拟短文改错NOf all my teachers ,Mr. Moore is the one who impress me 1_most. He is 34, so he looks young for his age. And hes one of 2_the most popular teacher in our school. Mr. Moore pays more 3_attention to his way of teaching, comparing with other teachers. 4_He tries different ways to make his classes actively and lively. 5_In his opinion, we should not only know “what”, but understand 6_“why”. So, instead giving us answers immediately, he encourages us 7_to think by myself whenever he puts forward questions. With his help, 8_weve learned from how to settle problems. He leads us to such a 9_wonderful world of “why” as we all admire and respect him. 10_【参考答案及解析】1. impress 改为 impresses 考查主谓一致。此处先行词 one 前有 the，故其后定语从句的谓语动词应和 one 保持一致，用单数。 2. so 改为 but 考查句间的逻辑关系。根据语境此处应为转折关系。 3. teacher 改为 teachers 考查名词的单复数。根据句中的 one of 可知，后面的名词应用复数形式。4. comparing 改为 compared 考查固定短语。和。 。 。相比应用 compared with/to。 5. actively 改为 active 考查形容词的用法。此处 make 后接形容词作宾补。6. 正确 经分析本句正确。7. instead 后加 of 考查固定短语。根据后面的 giving 可知，其前应用介词 of。8. myself 改为 ourselves 考查代词指代一致。根据文意反身代词应和 us 相一致。故用ourselves。 9. 去掉 from 考查动词的用法。learn from 意为：向。 。 。学习，此处不合文意。10. as 改为 that 考查固定句型。此处考查 such。 。 。that。 。 。句型。高考资源网（ks5u.com） 您身边的高考专家www.ks5u.com 版权所有高考资源网- 4 -2012 模拟短文改错 OTime seem limited for us Senior Three students. 1_ Therefore, more and more student are studying from early 2_morning till lately afternoon, even during the ten-minute 3_break. In my opinion, Take a break between classes is 4_not necessary. Otherwise, we will feel tired both physically 5_and mentally. During the break, we should do something 6_to get rid of tiredness. What they need is to have a real rest, 7_instead getting more tired. My break is always pleasing. 8_Sometimes I take some simple exercise. Sometimes I had a free 9_chat with my classmates or just take a walk outside. While the 10_next class begins, I feel fresh again.【参考答案及解析】1. seemseems 考查主谓一致。此处time是主语，谓语动词用单数。2.st