【MeiWei_81重点借鉴文档】高中英语教学与高考之书面表达一 考纲要求二 各环节落实三 等第样例作文打分好文赏析：汲取教训：之一白璧微瑕：OurSpringOutingLastweek,ourclassorganizedaspringouting.TomakethismemorableactivitRmorewonderful,wediscussedthedestinationcarefullRandfinallRdecidedtogomountain-climbinginsteadofotherchoiceslikeplaRinginanamusementparkandgoingboating.Withhighspirits,westartedourspringoutingonafinedaR.Flowerspresenteduswiththeirsweetestsmilesandweweresoakedupinthewarmsunshine.However,wewereshockedwhenwereachedthetopofthemountain.WastebottlesandusedpackageswerethrowneverRwherewhichtotallRruinedthebeautRofthenature.FeelingagreatpitRforthetourists,wepickeduptherubbishandcarefullRdividedthemintotwogroups:therecRcleonesandthenon-recRcleones.AfterthatweputtherubbishintothebindifferentlR.Wecallonawarenessonprotectingourenvironmentwhichisofgreatimportance.Thoughclearinguptherubbishwasatoughtask,ourheartswerefilledwithjoRandwewillrememberthisoutingforever.之二Lastweekend,mRclasshadaspringouting.Insteadofjusthavingfun,wedidsomethingrathermeaningfunandeverRoneinmRclasslearntagreatdealfromit.Whenwefirstthoughtaboutwheretogo,amusementparkandtheCentralLakecameintoourmind,butthenIsuggestedwegotothemountainnearourschool.EverRoneagreedwithme.Thatmountainisafamoustravelspot,weenjoRedthebeautifulviewthere.Butwhenwereachedthetopofthemountain,wewereshockedthatthegarbageleftbRthetouristswasjustlRingontheground.WithoutanRhesitation,wedecidedtopickthemupandcollectedthemintoourbags.OnourwaRback,wedroppedthemseparatedlRintotwogarbagebinsaccordingtowhethertheRcanberecRcledornot.Thisspringoutingmightberathertiring,butitsnotboring.FromthisspecialeRperience,werealizedthattherewasalotofproblemsinoursocietR,andwecandoagreatdealtosolvethem.WealsolearnedthatbRsimplRpickingupapieceofgarbage,wearemakingadifference.Wewillallreassurethislesson.之三临界分Lastweek,ourclassdecidedtohaveaspringouting.EverRonewascreativitRtoenjoRthediscussionaboutthedestinationoftheouting.Someonesaidtogotheamusementpark.Someonesaidtogoboatingandthen,ourmonitorsaid“Howabouttogothemountain?”everRoneagreedheridea.So,neRtdaRmorning,webeganourouting.WearrivedthedestinationbRbus.Aswehadplanedbefore,everRoneofusalltakingabigbagmanRplasticbags.Because,eRceptplaRing,wehaveanotherdestinateistoprotecttheenvironment.ThemountainissobeautifulthatweallverReRcitedtoclimbthemountain.DuringthewaR,whenwefoundtherubbishontheground,wepickthemupandthenputthemintoourplasticbags.Whenwearrivedthetopofthemountain,wefoundalotofrubbishontheground.ItwassodirtRsowecleanedthegroundclearlRandcarefullR.Afterashorttime,thegroundwascleanagain.Afterwegotdownfromthemountain,weputtherubbishintothebinbutbeforethis,weparttherubbishintwokinds,recRcleorunrecRcle.Ithink,springoutingwasverRuseful.假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召,你班四月十二日去郊区植树。请根据一下四幅图的先后顺序,介绍植数活动的全过程,给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“GreenActioninOurClass”为题的英文稿件。注意:依照全国卷要求应当100词左右） 提示词:郊区suburbs 情景作文一、赋分时的内容要求:骑车去植树植树安插指示牌照相二、说明:内容要点可用不同方式表达。例一18分GreenActioninOurClassApril12ismemorablebecauseourclasshadameaningfuleRperienceonthatdaR.Inthemorning,webicRcledtothesuburbstoplanttrees,talkingandlaughingallthewaR.Uponarrival,webegantoworkimmediatelR.Somewerediggingholes.SomewerecarrRingandplantingRoungtrees.Otherswerewateringthem.Aftergettingtheworkdone,weputupaboardremindingpeopletoprotectthetrees.Beforeleaving，wetooksomephotostorecordourgreenaction.Seeingthelinesoftrees,weallhadasenseofachievement.WefeelitsourdutRtoprotectandbeautifRourenvironment. Thoughwewerealittlebittired,wefelthappR.例二17分GreenActioninOurClassImLiHuafromClass1,Senior3,HongRinghighschool.Inresponsetotheslogan“makeourhomelandgreener,studentsinmRclassplantedtreesinthesuburbsonApril12th.ItwasafinedaR.Withthesunshiningabovethemountains,werodebikestowardsourdestination.ImpressedbRthebeautRofthetreesandgrassalongtheroad,everRonesmiledhappilR.Uponourarrival,weweredividedintodifferentgroups.EverRonewasresponsibleforonecertaintask.Somedugthesoil,somecarriedthetreeswhileotherswateredthenewlRplantedtrees.WeallperformedourtaskswithjoR.ThankstoourefficiencR,ittookusonlRashorttimetoplantallthetrees.Wesetupasigninfrontofthetreestoremindpeopletotakecareofthem.FinallR,wetookaphotonearthetreesandthesignsoastorecallthemeaningfulactivitReverRnowandthen.WefindthisactivitRofgreatsignificance,IcalloneverRonetodosomethingtomakeourhomelandgreener,foritisundoubtedlRpleasantforonetobesurroundedbRbeautifulgreenplants.例三17分GreenActioninOurClassOnthePlantingDaRourclassheldanactivitRofplantingtrees.EverRonetookactivepartinit.ThesunwasshiningbrightlRandflowersweresmiling.WewenttothesuburbsbRbikehappilR.Assoonaswegotthere,everRonewasbusRplantingtrees.SeveralstudentsdugholesandobviouslRtheRworkedverRhard.SomeofmRclassmatescarriedRoungtrees.ThentheRputthetreesintotheholesandcoveredwithsoil.SomegirlscarriedwaterandwateredthetreescarefullR.Whenwefinishedplanting,weputasignbesidestheRoungtree“ProtectTrees”.Atlast,ourclasstookpicturesinfrontofthetrees.Tobehonest,althougheve