35分写作限时满分练（六）I .短文改错（2021四川成都一模）Patsy Smith has raised ducks for many years.One of her ducks,Peg,losing one of his legs in a fightwith a tortoise.Mrs.Smith called for help to see whether anyone could create new leg for him.Threestudents thought it probably to use their 3D printer to create a leg for the poor duck.They spent severalmonths creating and testing different model.lt turns out to be a lot more difficult than they hadthought!Luckily,their hard work was paid off and they created a model who fitted Peg s legperfectly.Now,Peg can walk or even run just like her duck partners! Moreover,Mrs. S mi th is very thankfulfor them.II .书面表达假定你是李华，你的英国笔友John来信说，他在自学汉语时,发现汉字的读音很难掌握。请你给他回信，内容包括：1 .表示理解；2.提出建议。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3 .开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear John,Yours,Li Hua答案与解析35分写作限时满分练(六)I .第二句：losing4ost解析考查动词的时态。分析句子可知,lose作谓语动词使用，根据下文动词时态可知用一般过去时。故将losing改为losto第三句:在new前面加a解析考查冠词。此处泛指一条新腿”,new以辅音音素开头，用不定冠词a表泛指。第四句:probably一probable 解析考查形容词。此处是“sb+think+it+o勿.+to do sth结构,it是形式宾语，动词不定式(to do)是真正宾语,形容词作宾语补足语，故将probably改为probable。第五句:modelmodels解析考查名词的数。model是可数名词，由different修饰，用名词复数形式。故将model改为modelso第六句:turnsturned解析考查动词的时态。由全文语境可知，事情已发生，时态用一般过去时。故将turns改为turned 第七句:去掉was解析考查动词。pay off得到回报、取得成功，为不及物动词短语，不用于被动语态，去掉waso第七句:who一which/that解析考查定语从句。先行词是a model,指物，在定语从句中作主语，用关系代词which/that。第八句:or一and 解析考查连词。walk和run两个动作表示并列，故将or改为and。第八句:herhis解析考查代词。由上文的“hislegs”可知，佩格是公鸭子,用形容词性物主代词hiso第九句:for一to 解析考查介词。be thankful to sb感激某人。II .Dear John,Knowing that you have trouble learning the Chinese pronunciationj think it doesn tmatter.After all,it s difficult for foreigners to grasp it.However,some practical approachesare of great help.Obviouslyjt is highly recommended to refer to Xinhua Dictionary when you comeacross a challenging Chinese character.Then,with mobile phones catching on,some Chineselearning apps are increasingly popular with Chinese learners because they are so handy andquick that you can acquire the pronunciation.I know for sure that you will make much progress in learning Chinese pronunciation.lt iswelcome to write to me when you are in trouble.Yours,Li Hua