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四级作文第一部分四级作文的评分标准和要求一、考核目的考核学生用英语进行书面表达的初步能力。二、考核要求:1.时间:30分钟 2.字数:120词以上(120150)3.题型:1)根据给出的段首句续写 2)根据中文提要作文 3)根据图表写作4)书信写作三、评分原则:1.大学英语考试的目的是检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级和六级教学要求,对作文的评分应以此要求为准则。2.大学英语考试作文题采用总体评分(Global Scoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(Reward Scores),而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。3.从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容,而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题,是否充分表达思想,也要考虑是否用英语清楚而适切地表达思想,也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。4.避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分,包括满分;该给低分的给低分,包括零分。一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。四、评分标准:四、评分标准:1 1作文题满分为作文题满分为1515分。分。阅卷标准共人为五等:阅卷标准共人为五等:2 2分,分,5 5分,分,8 8分,分,1111分及分及1414分。分。2 2分分-条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。5 5分分-基本切题,表达思想不够清楚,连贯性差,有较多的严重错误。基本切题,表达思想不够清楚,连贯性差,有较多的严重错误。8 8分分-基本切题,表达思想比清楚,文字尚连贯,但语言错误较多。基本切题,表达思想比清楚,文字尚连贯,但语言错误较多。1111分分-切题,表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。切题,表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。1414分分-切题,表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯较好,基本上无语言错误。切题,表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯较好,基本上无语言错误。阅阅卷卷人人员员根根根根据据阅阅卷卷标标准准,对对照照样样卷卷评评分分,若若认认为为某某一一分分数数文文件件次次(如如8 8分分)相相似似,即即定定为为(8 8分分);若若认认为为稍稍优优或或劣劣于于该该档档次次,则则可加一分(可加一分(9 9分)或减一分(分)或减一分(7 7分),但不得加减半分。分),但不得加减半分。字数不足应酌情扣分:字数不足应酌情扣分:少少1010字字少少2020字字少少3030字字少少4040字字少少5050字字少少5151字字累计字数累计字数110110119119100100109109909099998080898970707979 69 69扣分扣分1 12 23 34 45 55 5注:注:1 1、如题目中给出主题句、起始句、结束句,均不得记入所写字数。、如题目中给出主题句、起始句、结束句,均不得记入所写字数。2 2、只写一段者:只写一段者:0 04 4分,只写两段者:分,只写两段者:0 09 9分(指规定三段的作文)分(指规定三段的作文)3 3、白卷,作文与题目毫不相关,或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想、白卷,作文与题目毫不相关,或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给零分。则给零分。2.2.设作文最低分,采用下列成绩计算方法:设作文最低分,采用下列成绩计算方法:1 1)作文分为)作文分为0 0分者,总分即使高于分者,总分即使高于6060分,一律作不及格处理;分,一律作不及格处理;2 2)作文分大于)作文分大于 0 0 分小于分小于 6 6 分者,按下分者,按下 列方式计算成绩:列方式计算成绩:最后报道分最后报道分 =原计算总分原计算总分 6+6+作文实得分作文实得分 一、四级作文的段落基本结构:一、四级作文的段落基本结构:主题句主题句扩展句扩展句终结句终结句连接词连接词连接词连接词段段落落第第二二部分部分 四级作文的结构四级作文的结构1.主题句主题句表明全段是关于什么及讨论什么的段落中心句,即:明确地表示全段要展开的中心点,四级短文写作中最好是把主题句放在段首。2.扩展句扩展句是用来说明,解释,引申,或论证主题句所表达的中心思想的句子。3.结尾句结尾句是用一句话对段落的主题进行重述,评论,或总结,借以强化主题,加深读者的印象.It is not difficult to make a right choice It is not difficult to make a right choice between buying a house in the low-rise area between buying a house in the low-rise area and buying one in the high-rise area(and buying one in the high-rise area(主题句主题句).).If we want to economize and get more If we want to economize and get more personal area,we can choose the low-rise;personal area,we can choose the low-rise;but if we want to live more comfortably,we but if we want to live more comfortably,we will choose the high-rise(will choose the high-rise(扩展句扩展句).).In a word,In a word,the key lies in the alternative of economy the key lies in the alternative of economy and comfort(and comfort(结尾句结尾句).).二、全文二、全文(议论文议论文)基本结构:基本结构:主题段主题段扩展段扩展段(1-2段段)终结段终结段主题句(第主题句(第1句)句)扩展句(扩展句(1到到2句)句)终结句(引出下文)终结句(引出下文)132终结句(最后终结句(最后1 1句)句)扩展句扩展句主题句(第主题句(第1句)句)过渡词过渡词过渡词过渡词第第二二部分部分 四级作文的结构四级作文的结构KeytoSuccessIn In such such a a competitive competitive society,society,everyone everyone has has a a strong strong desire desire to to be be successful successful and and in in his his life.life.But But how how to to achieve achieve success?success?In In my my opinion,opinion,there there are are three three main main keys keys a a clear clear objective,strong willpower and diligence.objective,strong willpower and diligence.FirstFirst,it it is is very very important important to to set set up up a a goal goal before before you you start.start.No No one one can can be be successful successful without without a a goal goal in in his his mind.mind.BesidesBesides,you you need need a a strong strong willpower willpower to to keep keep you you go go ahead.ahead.There There always always are are tough tough stones stones in in every every road road to to success.success.Whether Whether you you can can go go through through it it depends depends on on whether whether you you are are persistent persistent enough.enough.Last Last but but not not leastleast,everyone everyone who who wants wants to to succeed succeed should should be be diligent.diligent.There There is is and and old old saying,saying,“No No pains,pains,no no gains.gains.”Most Most successful successful people people owe owe their their success success to to hard hard working,working,such such as as Einstein.Einstein.In In conclusion,conclusion,if if we we want want to to be be successful,successful,we we have have to to master master the the three three main main keys keys mentioned mentioned above.above.There There is is no no shortcut shortcut to to success.success.The The three three keys keys will will assure assure you you to to realize realize your your beautiful dream.beautiful dream.第三第三部分部分 常见的错误和问题常见的错误和问题注意方面:注意方面:1切题 2结构(三段式)3落题快(主题句在每段句首,不要绕圈)4长度(120150字,卷面第二页中间或到三分之二处,不要过多)语言方面须注意的问题:语言方面须注意的问题:1题目的大写An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident It Pays to Be Honest How to Succeed in a Job Interview2句子错误1)语态时态不正确I read the passage carefully and several mistakes were found.(语态不一致)I read the passage carefully and found several mistakes.I am very grateful if you could help me with this problem.(时态不一致)I will be very grateful if you could help me with this problem.2)主谓不一致He like playing 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