话题写作（十）健康生活第一篇教材考点梳理【话题点睛】针对的话题主要是体育锻炼和健康饮食。体育锻炼主要涉及:开展体育锻炼的方式;鼓励多进行体育运动,强身健体等。健康饮食主要涉及:远离垃圾食品,健康饮食的好处及具体做法等。“民以食为天”,饮食的安全和健康受到越来越多的关注和重视。请你以“SayNotoJunkFood”为题,根据以下要点写一篇英语短文。写作要点(1)垃圾食品尽管美味,但对健康无益,而且其过多的包装会产生更多的垃圾;(2)远离垃圾食品,还应选择正确的生活方式,如:三餐要有规律,少吃零食、快餐;多吃蔬菜、水果等健康食物,以提供身体必需营养;多参加户外活动写作要求(1)词数:80左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;(2)内容必须包括上述所有要点,可适当发挥。典例分析参考词汇过多包装overpackaging;有规律地regularly;营养nutritionSay No to Junk FoodNowadays,moreandmoreattentionhasbeenpaidtofoodsafetyandhealth.AsfarasIamconcerned,weshouldsaynotojunkfood.Inaword,ahealthydietwithlessjunkfoodcanhelpmakeusstrongerandstronger.【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是号召大家健康饮食,少吃垃圾食品。写作内容可以从以下几方面展开:(1)垃圾食品虽美味,但既不健康,又不环保;(2)倡导健康的生活方式,如按时吃三餐,多吃水果、蔬菜,多做户外运动等;(3)总结概括健康的生活方式给我们带来的好处。2.确定时态:一般现在时3.确定人称:第一人称/第二人称【写作架构】【基础写作】.写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。)1.为了保持健康的生活方式,我们应该远离垃圾食品。(stayawayfrom)Tokeepahealthylifestyle,weshould.2.垃圾食品的确对我们的身体有害。(doharmto)Junkfoodsurelyourbody.3.健康的饮食能有助于使我们越来越强壮。(比较级+and+比较级)Ahealthydietcanhelpmakeus.4.从此次经历中我意识到我必须停止吃垃圾食品。(stopdoingsth.)FromtheexperienceIknowIjunkfood.stay away from junk fooddoes harm tostronger and strongermust stop eating.句子升格(按括号中的要求改写句子。)1.Havemorefruitandvegetables.Theycanprovidethenutritionweneed.(改为定语从句)_2.Thereisnodoubt.Junkfoodsurelydoesharmtoourbody.(合并为一句)_Have more fruit and vegetables which can provide the nutrition we need.There is no doubt that junk food surely does harm to our body.【连句成文】SayNotoJunkFoodNowadays,moreandmoreattentionhasbeenpaidtofoodsafetyandhealth.AsfarasIamconcerned,weshouldsaynotojunkfood.Thereisnodoubtthatjunkfoodismadedeliciousandattractive,butitsurelydoesharmtoourbody.Meanwhile,theoverpackagingleadstomuchmorerubbish.Togetawayfromjunkfood,weshouldfocusonhowtokeepahealthy lifestyle.There are many tips to follow.First,eat regularlythreemealsadayontime.Tryasfewsnacksandlittlefastfoodaspossible.Second,havemorefruitandvegetableswhichcanprovidethenutritionweneed.Whatsmore,do more outdoor activities.As long as you are busy withsomething interesting,you will more probably get away from junkfood.In a word,a healthy diet with less junk food can help make usstrongerandstronger.【参考谚语】1.AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.只工作不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。2.Thefirstwealthishealth.健康是人生第一财富。3.Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.一天一苹果,医生远离我。拓展积累【相关短语】saynotojunkfood拒绝垃圾食品;getawayfromjunkfood远离垃圾食品;keepahealthylifestyle保持健康的生活方式;makeusstrongerandstronger使我们越来越强壮;takeanactivepartinP.E.积极上体育课;developgoodhabits养成良好的习惯;stayuptoolate熬夜到很晚【亮点句型】导入主题句1.Nowadays,moreandmoreattentionhasbeenpaidtofoodsafetyandhealth.2.TodayIamgladtotellyousomethingabouthowtokeepahealthylifestyle.3.Healthisimportantbutnotallthestudentshaverealizeditsimportance.4.Itsknowntousthatahealthylifestyleleadstoahealthylife,soitsimportantforustokeepahealthylifestyle.文章发展、过渡句1.Firstofall,itsagoodideatohaveabalanceddiet.2.Doingsportscanmakeushealthyandstrong.3.Whatsmore,weneedenoughsleeptokeephealthy.4.Lastbutnotleast,beinghappyisanotherwaytokeephealthy.文章结尾句1.Ithinkallthesesuggestionsabovewillbehelpfultous.2.Ifyoufollowtheusefuladvice,Ithinkyouwillkeephealthy.3.Ihopeeveryonecaneathealthily,dosportsandhaveabetterlife.4.Allinall,ahealthylifestylecanhelpyourelaxmoreinbothstudyanddailylife.A会工作、会学习、会运动、会娱乐就是会生活。良好的运动习惯是生活的重要组成部分。请你根据以下要点提示,以“SportsMakeMeStrongandConfident”为题,写一篇短文。写作要点(1)每天早晨6:30起床,做半个小时的早操;晚饭后散步1小时;(2)步行上学;(3)主动上体育课,积极参加课外活动;(4)身体健壮,精力充沛;运动会常得第一。实战演练写作要求(1)80100词。开头部分已给出,不计入总词数;(2)内容合理,要点齐全,语句正确、连贯,书写规范,可适当发挥;(3)不得出现真实姓名及校名。Sports Make Me Strong and ConfidentEverybody,menorwomen,youngorold,shouldhaveagoodhabitofdoingsports.SoshouldI,andsoIdo._One possible version:SportsMakeMeStrongandConfidentEverybody,men or women,young or old,should have a goodhabitofdoingsports.SoshouldI,andsoIdo.Inthemorning,Iusuallygetupat6:30,anddomorningexercisesforhalfanhour.Afterbreakfast,Iwalktoschool,whichisalsoakindofexercise.In school,I take an active part in P.E.Sometimes we playfootballandvolleyball.Sometimesweplaybasketball,tabletennisorbadminton.Footballismyfavoritesport.Ialsotakepartinafter-classactivities.In the evening after supper,I often take a walk along thestreetnearmyhouseforanhourwithmyparents.I like doing sports,because it makes me healthy,strong andenergetic.Ioftengetthefirstprizeintheschoolsportsmeeting.Iwillkeepthegoodhabitsallmylife.B2019乐山为了让学生吃到更加营养、安全的食品,政府出台了陪餐制,要求从4月1日起,学校领导陪同学生用餐。请你根据以下要点,给校报英语专栏写一篇短文,谈谈自己的看法。提示(1)学生吃得健康、安全;(2)及时发现就餐问题;(3)食堂提供食品多样;(4)父母更加放心。注意(1)词数:80左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数;(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;(3)参考词汇:规定regulation(n.);食堂cafeteria(n.);营养的nutritious(adj.)AnewfoodsafetyregulationwasputintouseonApril1toimprovenutritionandfoodsafetyinschools.Itaskstheschoolleaderstoeatwithstudentsintheircafeterias._One possible version:A new food safety regulation was put into use on April 1 toimprovenutritionandfoodsafetyinschools.Itaskstheschoolleaderstoeatwithstudentsintheircafeterias.Thankstotheregulation,somethinggreathastakenplaceinourschool.First,weeatmorehealthilyandsafelythanbefore.Second,ifthereisanyproblemaboutfoodsafetyorothers,ourschoolleadersareabletoknowandsolveitquickly.Also,thecaf