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如何写游记【写作任务】假设你是李华,请你给刚结识的英国笔友Jack发一份电子邮件,向他介绍你去年去伦敦旅游的经历。内容主要包括:写作要点:1. 度假时间、地点、人物、参观的景点(大英博物馆the British Museum、泰晤士河the Thames River、伦敦眼London Eye等);2. 你的所见所闻及感受。 注意:1. 词数100左右(开头语已给出,但不计入总词数);2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Jack,How are you? I am writing to tell you something about my travel to London last year._Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua【写作指导】审题定调1. 文体:游记属于记叙文;2. 时态:以一般过去时为主,但描述景色或发表议论时可用一般现在时;3. 人称:以第一人称为主;4. 内容:以旅游活动为主,介绍旅游时间、天气状况、人员、交通方式、目的地等为辅,也可以适当描写自己的感受。此外还应注意以下几点:写作的顺序:在叙述过程中,先参观了什么,后参观了什么,一定要有一个清晰明确的顺序,也就是路线图。通常我们可以按游览的先后顺序记叙。自然景观与人文景观的有机结合:在对参观过的自然风景进行描述时可以结合景观的历史、当地的风土人情、文化、生态、环境保护等方面来描写,以达到自然景观和人文景观的和谐统一。融情于景,抒发感情:写作时适当地抒发内心的独特感受也可以起到打动读者、与读者一起分享的目的。 布局谋篇全文可分三部分:常用表达旅游活动:watch, show . around, take photos, go fishing, take a boat, have a picnic, come back .描写景点:be famous for, be covered by, have a style of, have a long history, date back to, develop into a centre of, beyond description .分享感受:be attracted / moved by, wonderful, interesting, never forget, an unusual experience, leave a(n) . impression on sb., have a good time, enjoy oneself . 【参考范文】Dear Jack,How are you? I am writing to tell you something about my travel to London last year.Last year, I travelled to London by plane for my summer holiday. The moment I arrived in London, I was attracted by the wonderful view there. I went to the British Museum, where I watched lots of valuable things from around the world. I also visited London Eye on the Thames River, and on the top of it I overlooked the whole scenery of London. How high and thrilling it was! The friendly British people left a good impression on me. I really learned a lot from them.What an unusual experience it was! I hope I could pay a visit to London again in the future.Best wishes! Yours,Li Hua
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