Once children start school, teachers have more influence than parents on their intellectual and social development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?A 老师受过专业训练（specialized training专业训练）B 知道怎么利用学生的学习能力（capitalize on利用 cognitive abilities学习能力，认知能力）C 提高学习成绩（improve learning outcomes提高学习成绩）A 老师制定校规（impose school rules）B 提高小孩的社会技能（social skills），遵循社会规则（social rules）社会技能，社会规则C 对小孩的社会发展有好处A1 父母是榜样（role models）A2 也决定了孩子参加的社会活动（social activities）B 小孩可以提高社会技能（skills for social life）C 对小孩的社会发展有好处开头段Teachers are sometimes believed to have a greater impact onChildrens academic performance学业表现，学术成就 and social skills than parents do. I agree with this idea, although it is important to recognize the role parents play in childrens social development. 主体第一段A 老师受过专业训练（specialized training）B 知道怎么利用学生的学习能力（capitalize on cognitive abilities）C 提高学习成绩（improve learning outcomes）A+C B+C 举例对比1、As a general rule, teachers have received specialized training受过专业训练. So they are able to help students improve learning outcomes. 2、They understand how to capitalize on learners cognitive abilities and contribute to their attainment提高成绩，不用每次都写improve. (B+C)3、For example, experienced teachers are able to adopt different devices采用/使用不同的设备 and tailor teaching materials特别的教学材料 to ensure that children can acquire knowledge effectively确保学生高效的学习. (举例) 4、In contrast, parents are not familiar with these teachingskills, so most of them trust their intuitions相信直觉 and sometimes take the wrong approach to带入歧途 instruct指导 their children. (对比)主体第二段A 老师制定校规（impose school rules）B 提高小孩的社会技能（social skills），遵循社会规则（socialrules）C 对小孩的社会发展有好处礼貌：habitat ; good mannersA+B 解释对比1、Teachers also impose and enforce schoolrules制定并实施校规, which can make it possible to improve childrenssocial skills and require them to follow socialnorms遵守社会规范. (A+B)2、These students (代词的使用) will gain an insight intohow to communicate effectively with each other and showgood manners良好的习惯或者彬彬有礼 on important occasions在总要的场合. (解释)3、While these young ( 代词的使用) children can practicethese skills in broader community, they may not be able todo so in the home environment. (对比)Tip:代词的使用增加了文章的连贯性题目的类型：（3 种） 1.观点类2.论述类3.报告类A1 父母是榜样（role models）A2 也决定了孩子参加的社会活动（social activities）B 小孩可以提高社会技能（skills for social life）C 对小孩的社会发展有好处A1+解释A2+解释B+C1、On the other hand, Parents are role models榜样, and this means thathow they interact with互动 neighbors, colleagues and othermembers of family can have a strong impact on 有很强的影响their childrensinterpersonal skills人际交往能力. (A1+解释)2、They also decide social activities, such as ceremonies andcommunity activities that their children attend. (A2+解释)3、Their choices play a vital role in passing on important skills forsocial life from generation to generation. (B+C)结尾段In conclusion, the role of teachers is prominent in 教师的作用是显著的prominent prmnnt adj. 突出的，显著的；杰出的；卓越的childrensdevelopment, but the importance of parents should not beunderrated不能被低估了underrated ,ndreitid adj. 低估. (c)