第18讲 写作改错假如你是李华, 学校正在进行“优秀教师”的选举活动，你想选举你的英语老师Daniel为本学期“优秀教师”, 请你给组委会写一封推荐信讲明你选他的理由。要求：1. 词数50左右；2. 叙事清楚，语句通顺，语意连贯；3. 文中不得出现真实的人名与校名；4. 文章开头已给，不计入总词数。 Dear Sir, Thanks for reading my letter. I want to recommend (推荐) my English teacher Daniel to be the Best Teacher of the year. SampleDear Sir, Thanks for reading my letter. I want to recommend (推荐) my English teacher Daniel to be the Best Teacher of the year. Im very like Daniel. He look very young. Hes about thirty years old. He favourite color is black. Because he is always wear black T-shirt. He can plays basketball very good. He is very good at it. He is funny, he also vey strict. He wants we study hard. We all like her. Yours sincerely Li Hua 题一：语法填空Im very like Daniel. He look very young. Hes about thirty years old. He favourite color is black. Because he is always wear black T-shirt. He can plays basketball very good. He is very good at it. He is funny, he also very strict. He wants we study hard. We all like her.内容提升话题范畴：描写人目的：推荐当选 the Best Teacher of the year要点：谈理由选材：详写性格特征，教学特点结构：总分总结构，有始有终拓展词汇helpful, kind, caring, patient, smartbe strict with sb. in sth. encourage sb. to dohelp sb. with/(to) doget along well with sb. treat sb. asWe can get/enjoy/improve改进之后Dear Sir, Thanks for reading my letter. I want to recommend (推荐) my English teacher Daniel to be the Best Teacher of the year. I like Daniel very much. He looks young and handsome. He is good at playing basketball. He is very kind and he treats us as friends. But he is also strict with us in study. He often encourages us to speak English aloud and helps us to speak English well. We can really enjoy ourselves and improve our listening and speaking skills in his class. All my classmates feel lucky to be his students. So I hope Daniel can be the Best Teacher of the year. Best wishes. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 第18讲 写作改错题一：Im very like Daniel. He look very I like Daniel very much. looks young. Hes about thirty years old. He His favourite color is black. Because he is , becausealways wear black T-shirt. He can wears a T-shirtsplays basketball very good. He is very good at play wellit. He is funny, he also very strict. and/but isHe wants we study hard. We all like her. us to him