重难点18 书面表达之咨询建议类【命题趋势】中考书面表达题贴近学生实际生活，紧密联系热点话题，写作话题真实从而让考生有话可写。书面表达情景实用性程度高，各地试题都符合同学们的认知水平和日常生活经历，题目设计关注学生成长，注意培养其良好的道德品质和健全的人格：另外，所涉及话题关注社会，富有时代特色，能唤起同学们强烈的主人翁意识和责任感。 这种贴近生活、立足基础、发扬个性的命题理念仍将是今后几省各地中考书面表达的基本思路。【满分技巧】 认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关 写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。【热点话题】 咨询建议类热衷于给别人提建议。【限时检测】（建议用时：30分钟）A【2019 贵阳市】假定你是李华，请你以初三毕业生的身份给学弟学妹们写一封电子邮件。要求如下：1. 重点分享你在处理学习困难方面的经验以及你下一步学习或生活的打算；2. 邮件不少于80词，开头与结尾已给出，不计入字数；3. 不得出现真实的个人信息。_【写作思路】考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。【参考范文】Im going to graduate from junior high school. Looking back on three years of junior high school life, there are many gains and difficulties. I have many difficulties in learning English. At the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it. I am about to start high school life, I will continue to work hard, I hope you bravely face junior high school life, have a happy junior high school life.B【2019 山东省烟台市】假设你某英语报社的编辑Rina, 收到Li Wei 同学的来信，诉说了因为肥胖常遭到同学嘲笑的苦恼，并向你寻求建议。请你根据以下提示给Li Wei 回信。要求：1. 须包括所有要点提示并适当补充，语句通顺，意思连贯； 2. 词数：100词左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。参考词汇：laugh at; care about; high- fat food; the more. , the healthier.Dear Li Wei,Ive received your letter and I can understand you. _Yours,Rina【写作思路】假设你某英语报社的编辑Rina, 收到Li Wei 同学的来信，诉说了因为肥胖常遭到同学嘲笑的苦恼，并向你寻求建议。请你根据以下提示给Li Wei 回信。本题给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，确定写作内容，并适当发挥。根据内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态和将来时态，写作中注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。【参考范文】Dear Li Wei,I have received your letter and I can understand you. You must feel bad when being laughed at use of your over-weight. Here is my advice for you.Firstly, there is no need to care about what others think of you. The most important thing is to be confident, as it will help you have courage to face and overcome your trouble.Secondly, try to eat healthily keep away from high-fat food and eat more fruit and vegetables instead. A balanced diet is very important for losing weight.Thirdly, I strongly advise you to exercise more often. Youd better get up early in the morning and do some sports regularly. The more you exercise, the healthier youll be.I hope my advice will be helpful to you.Yours,RinaC【2019 广西省贵港市】假如你是林涛，你的笔友Sam在学校和同学发生了一些矛盾现在他来信，请你给他一些关于怎样与他人相处和自我保护的建议请根据下面表格提示，用英文给他写一封回信学会相处学会倾听；互相帮助；不在网上交友；自我保护学会和同学沟通；及时求助老师和父母对学习、生活的影响（不少于2点）写作要求：1短文内容必须包含所给要点，并适当发挥 2语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范 3文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名； 4. 词数80左右开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数参考词汇： respect尊重Dear Sam，How is it going？ Im happy to tell you how to get on well with others and protect ourselves_