短文改错和书面表达 短文改错：动词：时态；语态；主谓一致；非谓语动词；固定搭配名词：可数与不可数，可数名词的单复数，冠词的运用形容词和副词：注意他们在句中的位置,比较级和最高级,Ved/ Ving连词：and/ so-but and-or because与so although/though 与but/ however when/as-while代词：你我他（它）及其他们的复数，格，it/ one/ that/ which, many/ much介词Summer holiday is coming. I am going to do much things that I want to do.For examples, first I will join in a soccer club, because I like play soccer. During the summer holiday, I want to practice more to improve my skills. Second I will go my grandmas house, because I miss him very much. I want to stay with her for several days. Last I will help my mother doing some housework. She was real tired when I went to school. Except for taking care me, she also has to work. However, I want to help her in the holidays. What will you do on Summer Holiday? As its known to all, China is popular for its emperor of bicycles. This is as our country is still a developing country and few people can afford private car. The demand for a means of transport is meet by making millions of bicycles available. Ride a bicycle has a lot of advantages over driving a car. First, it is a physical exercise to ride a bicycle. In contrast, sitting in the car, one tends to gain weight. Besides, it is much more economical to ride a bike to drive a car. On the one hand, the only fee a bike-rider has to pay is the annual tax. However, the annual fees for a car are costly. On the other hand, a bike neednt equipped with a parking lot, and a car must. Most important of all, it is beneficially to the environment to ride a bicycle because the bike doesnt consume petrol; it is a pollution-free transport. In contrast, the exhaust is released by the car is harmful to the environment.At present, many people criticize（批评） that the Chinese society are filled with indifference(冷淡，不关心) and nobody is willing to help the others, especially the strangers in the street. Therefore, some people say that we have experienced the cases that strangers asking for help desperately(绝望地) yet turning to be robbers and thieves and swindle（骗取） the kind-heart people. And now, there are many fraud gangs（骗子集团） extort（勒索） money in the name of begging so that people do not trust beggars than before. But I still believe that goodness and compassion still lives in our heart, that urges us to give a warmly help to those people who need help.The Spring Festival is very importantly to Chinese people. In the past，people could often have meats，rice or other delicious food. They could only eat these during the Spring festival. So every year they hope that the Spring Festival would come soon. Now， although peoples life is much better，and we can eat the delicious foods every day but people still like the festival. Because most people can have long holiday，and we are free to go on a trip and visit our friends or have parties with their family. In the evenings，we can have a big meal in the restaurant or stay at home with family and watching the TVprograms. I like the Spring Festival very much. What wonderful the Spring Festival is！There are some voices claim Lei Fengs spirit has gone out of style in todays society. Their reason isbecause in commodity economy people should seek more practical things, such as fame, money and the comfortably life. To them nothing is more important as those things, which is often regarded as the views of the present generation. There are some other voices claiming that the spirit of Lei Feng still have an enormous echo in millions of Chinese people. The great soldiers story has so a strong influence on peoples ideas, values and ways of life that in every field of society there arises(产生) countless “Living Lei Fengs”, which follow the example of Lei Feng and serve for the people heart and soul. In my opinions, the spirit of Lei Feng will never be out of date. Instead, it has been brought forward. Today more and more “Lei Fengs” are coming forth from various circles among who “Xu Hu” has already set a good example to the whole nation. The spirit of Lei Feng-an unselfish spirit will always encourage us to go forward. Everybody want to get wealth. In todays material world, making money or become wealthy symbolizes a persons successful and capability. Many people make every effort, pay any price to attain greater wealth. Without money, they can but nice, large apartments in nice neighborhood; with money, they can own stately luxury cars. Wealth seems money. Wealth seems to bring all happiness in life. In my opinion, people cannot do something without money, so money is not everything. That money will bring you depends on their personal belief and goal in life. If you are kind enough to help others, especial the poor, money is a good thing to you. With it, you can do much more for the benefit of people and your country, and it will bring your own happiness. If you want money just for your own needs, youll never be satisfying or happy. In a