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高二短文改错专练(一)Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor. I didnt have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get. Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and the actor couldnt be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building. He was right there in the front of me! I couldnt believe my lucknot only did I had my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt! (二)We all have a strong desire to succeed. For some the desire is great than that of the average people. In fact, everyone wants to be successful so very few are willing to pay the price of hard working. Success is an attitude and has no really secrets. It all start with your belief system. Your belief system starts with what you feel about yourself. You must at first believe in yourself. On your journey to success, you will find that there are no shortcuts. You will never be able to completely master every detail of your life. Attempt to do so will only lead to disappointment. Besides, its necessary of you to have clear goals. Youd better put your goals on paper where they are visible so that they can help to monitor your progress. (三)It was snowing heavily Monday morning. Li Hua was at the bus stop, waited for Bus No.601 to go to school. After the while, the bus came and she got on it. There are many passengers in the bus. Some were talking but some were looking out of the windows. Suddenly the bus stopped. The driver turned around and said, “Sorry. The bus has been broken down. Please get off and help push the bus.” When we heard this, Li Hua and the other passenger got off the bus. They worked hardly together, pushing the bus slowly backward. Soon the bus was running again. All the passengers were smiling and the sun was shining. (四)My friend Tony and I always walk home together after school. Last Friday on our way to home, we heard a loud shout behind us. When we looked around to see what had happened, we found a woman lied on the ground, bleeding. We soon realized that she had knocked down by the car in front of him. We hurried to help her, and a man came over and tried to prevent us from getting closer to the wounded woman. We got very angrily with the man. How could he stopped us from helping a dying woman? The man asked us to turn around and we were surprised to see a man who were carrying a video camera on his shoulders. In fact, they were just shooting a film!How an interesting experience! (五)Dear Mr. Li,Im very sorry to have missed the first two lesson this morning. I got up early as usually in the morning, but when I was ready to leave I find my bicycles front tyre(轮胎)flat. I wanted to take bus or taxi to school, and I didnt have any money with me. I had to look for a place along the street to get my bicycle repairing. Unluckily, there were not any bicycle repair shops were open in the early morning. So I had to walk to school, carrying my bicycle all the way. Thats how I was late for school.Please dont worry with my lessons, Mr. Li. I will make up for it and turn to teachers for help if necessary.Yours,Wang Hui (六)Dear editor,Im a student of Yucai Middle School. In primary school there is nothing wrong with my eyes. But later because more and more lessons I couldnt see as clear as before. Sometimes I even couldnt see that the teacher wrote on the blackboard. In order to make things worse, my parents bought me a pair of glasses when I was in a second year of junior school. It was uncomfortable to wear glass. Final, I decided to wear contact lenses(隐形眼镜)They make me to look more beautiful and I have trouble in wearing them. Please tell me what I should do.Yours,Wang Lin (七)I firmly believe that everyone in the world loves his mother. So am I. My mother is an ordinary teacher. She always works hardly, just as other mothers do every day. In fact, she isnt good health. She had been suffering from arthritis (关节炎) for many years. In spite of this, he never stops working or gives up hope. I still remember the day that my mother accepted a card of congratulations for Teachers Day from her director. The card was read “Thank you for your hard works; Happy Teachers Day to you!” At that moment, I was so moving that tears came to my eyes. I am proud of my mother. (八)Behind my apartment, there was used to be a dirty and messy corner.Bits of plastic bags hanged on the trees.Broken bottles were left laying here and there.There was a damaging car in the center.The whole corner gave away an unpleasant smell.One year ago, we decided to turn it in a beautiful park.Since then, great changes have been taken place in that corner.All the rubbish have been cleared away.Flowers and young trees have planted all over.Now birds come here to sing, children come here to play, and adults come here to enjoy our pe
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